SukkSS ~An Odd Feeling or Love~[Completed] - Page 27

bonu tu to bohot beshram ho gayi hai...

OHHH OMG...

supar hot romantic di...

loved it...!!
sweet ending

awesomeee update yar summit kumkum room is so hot mujhey dobara phar kar garmi lag rahi hai hahahaha or really ap ne un ka romance ki har harqat ko define kiya dear or ek dum perfectly define kiya ke imagine karnay mein musqil nahi hui hahaha or kya romance create kiya story mein can't define really awesomeee utna romance toh khabhi parhne ko ya deknay ko mila nahi chalo aisay dekh bi nahi sakti kyunki reel mein yeh romance dekhana censored hai or real mein koi share karnay se raha apni sub se provide cheez ko toh parhne mein ek dum maza bhi aya or itna romance dekh kar thora hmmm bhi laga awesomeee keep it up or dear my name is fajar not fazar please call me fajar its my reqest

what a Lovely Ends totally Loved ,<3 

Hey i finally got a chance to read ur SS so plz forgive me 4 my late comments.

Part 1 - wow!! dat was ah big shock! i feel sorry 4 sumit having 2 c his father n dat condition. i love ur concept however, it's different n seems very interesting because i guess somwhere n the world some1 mit ehav actually xperienced dis but we neglect 2 realize it.

Part 2 - it broke my <3 even more 2 c dat it was his bday n his dad didnt even care, but it soo nice 2 kno he has d support of his frenz n meethi chacha 2 keep him on d rite path. i hope dey'll stick wit him always.

Part 3 - damn! i can't blev a man can b soo cruel so an innocent girl! i loved hw u xpressed her movement though, i cud hav picured every step she made n see d pain she was xperiencing.

Part 4 - i loved this part! at times i find it kinda difficult 2 understand wat u r tryn 2 bring across but i got d gist of it. bear in mind ur grammatical errors n sentence construction. besides dat it was a gr8 part!

Part 5 - this piece was sooo touching!! d way he took care of her every need. awesome piece!!

Part 6 - It jus tore my heart out 2 hear all the torture kumkum went through! brilliant episode!!

Part 7 - Superman sumit comes 2 d rescue!! lol! SUPERB!! It was sucha wonderful part!!

Part 8 - i'm speechless! dat was fantastic!!! their love blossomed soo beautifully!!

Part 9 - dis part brought me 2 tears!! gr8 writing!!

part 10 - yay!!! Everyting's alrite again! woohooo!

part 11 - hmmm! yaar u had som intense scenes here!! lmao! it was beautiful!! btw i had a ridiculous grin on my face wen i saw u named Maaneet's child Mahi! lol

frankly speaking i dont like these parts u just ruined the character of sumeet kumkum .kumkum mai aisa koi scene nai aaya  infact starplus pr sab se neat nd clean drama tha

amazing work dear !!
love it !!
ur work is outstanding !!

amazing work dear love it !!
u r too good !!
rocking !!
outstanding !!