Raya cute moments*A COMEDY OF ERRORS*Pg.45 (01.01) - Page 13

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Hey sree first of all thank u for those wishes :) one fine day i hope i have a show for myself! Anyways soo glad that u lykd the updates! Next moment stil not complete i wil update asap hope u keep liking my work dear

Its a day before ram and priya's wedding and ram was a nervous wreck as he fumbled in doing everything! Its a scene in his room and as he hurriedly puts his pills in his mouth he drops the bottle..angry he says-damn!..VIKRAM WHO HAD JUST WALKED IN stands smiling as he sees how apprehensive his friend was! Amused he says-ram itna nervous toh tu apne university ke result ke time bhi nahin tha jitna aaj hai..RAM GLARES AT HIM AND SAYS- who says that i am nervous! Main koi nervous nahin hoon! Tu bataa kya hua?..VIKRAM WALKS upto ram and says-kal teri shadi hai ram aur tu ek bahot important cheez bhool raha hai..RAM LOOKS AT VIKRAM CONFUSED AND ASKS-nuts ki shadi ke liye kapdey..catering..dj..gifts..invitations sab kuch toh ho gaya hai..aur meri aur priya ki shadi ki saari taiyari uske dad kareinge..aur yeh dekh..(ram takes out a file from the drawer and thrusting the file in his hand ram says on as vikram reads the papers)..nuts ka tohfa..mainey navi mumbai wali saari properties uske naam kar di hai..VIKRAM CLOSES THE FILE AND STARES AT RAM AS HE flashed a satisfied and victorious smile which vikram had often seen on his friend's face as he gave his family things to make them comfortable..RAM WAS A SELFLESS MAN WITH A HEART OF GOLD and vikram always wondered whether he would ever get that unconditional love back which he showered on his family and tomorrow as ram was going to tie a knot with priya ..vikram knew that she was the one for him! RAM'S VOICE BREAKS INTO his thoughts as he asks-kya hua..kahaan kho gaya..bataa na kya bhool gaya main?..VIKRAM SAYS-nuts ke liye tohfa laana yaad raha ram aur priya? Teri honney wali biwi hai woh ram..jahan tak main ussey jaan paya hoon..kabhi kuch maangegi nahin woh tujhse..par iska matlab yeh nahin ki tu uski zaroorat ko nazarandaz karey aur shadi ka din toh har ladki ka sapna hota hai..tera ek tohfa uskey liye uss din ko yaadgar banaa dey toh achcha hai na..RAM STARES AT HIS FRIEND AS HE LETS EACH WORD OF HIS SINK IN balh tune plays as he says-main uski pasand nahin jantaa..

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Hey 9001 soo glad that u liked all the parts! Oh book on raya? Well all i can say is thanks for all the appreceation i feel truly humbled :)

Hi shamma glad u enjoyed this update too :) next part asap hope u keep liking it dear!

Ram looks at vikram and says-par main uski pasand toh jaanta hii nahin!(vikram looks at him agreeing as ram says on)..tunney neha ko kya diya tha?..VIKRAM'S FACE LIGHTS UP as he replies-neha ki jaan toh jwellery mein bassti hai..mainey toh ussey diamond set diya tha..tu bhi priya ke liye aisa hii kuch khareed ley..afterall diamonds are a woman's best friend..RAM NODS HIS HEAD BUT IN HIS HEART HE WASN'T PLEASED WITH THE IDEA!..still he remains silent..the screen blacks out..ITS THE D-day..ram and priya are finally married and its their wedding night..RAM IS IN HIS ROOM with priya..vikram and neha..the two had got the whole room decorated for the couple and neha says-chalo hum chaltey hain..tum donon thak gaye hogey aaram kar lo..(turning to ram she says teasingly)..tum aur priya typical married couple toh ho nahin still..as a tradition wahan table pe tumharey liye doodh rakhwa diya hai fatty..AN EMBARASSED RAM SMILES SHEEPISHLY while priya grins silently..VIKRAM CHUCKLES AND AS HE leaves the room with neha he whispers to ram-mainey priya ke liye tohfa wahan drawer mein rakhwa diya hai..RAM NODS HIS HEAD and after he is left alone in the room with priya the two look idhar udhar not knowing what to say or do..ram says breaking the awkward silence at last-tum..kuch chahiye tumhe?..PRIYA MOVES HER HEAD SIDEWAYS in a no and ram falls silent yet again! PRIYA walks upto the dressing table and takes off the jwellery and the heavy gajra and bun on her head..letting loose her long hair down..ram finds himself gazing at priya and as she looks up at him in the mirror (balh tune plays) he turns away shyly..sighing he walks upto the table and stares at the drawer with the gift vikram got for him to give to priya and then at the door which led to the gift he wanted to give priya!..TAKING OUT THE box from the drawer ram walks upto priya and as he goes to stand behind her..she notices him in the mirror and turns back to face him..balh tune plays in bg as ram fumbles-woh..vikram..woh chahta tha ki main tumhe kuch tohfa doon..

Hi shamma glad u enjoyed this update too :) next part asap hope u keep liking it dear!