This was amazing !! You are totally a brilliant writer. Loved the history you gave for their past..it seems the most logical way for ASR's behaviour...update soon and plz add me to your PM list...π
Originally posted by: -Swetha-
OMGπ² Zee hunπ³... u write really well dearπ
the story was beautifulπi loved it very much <3plz continue the story soon...!
Originally posted by: CandYlicious_SG
res.. π²
I will update at night since there is a power cut in my house right now so i cant read it now..! π But i WILL be back..! π π€
Originally posted by: kiran255
this is amazing , very logical and very valid for the title
i love it !want to read more on this :P
awww.. its beautiful.. plz continue this yaar.. make it a small ff...plzzz
Originally posted by: NaDzGirl
zee ur killin me here... im left with awe after readin ur os π
where were u all dis time?!??!?!!omfg ur take on da story sounds sooo believable and especially da dialgoues although i had a hard time understandin certain hindi words. u just nailed it with ur faaabulous writin skills πman im still speechless on dis side... im usin a hell lot of words being super speechless aren't i? π€£ well it's all ur fault cz dis os is one of da best os's i'v read so far...pls write more and keep me posted as well...
Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower
Fantastic OS hun!!!
Love the emotions in it, your writing was a treat to read!!Hope to see more of your work...π
wow its beautiful !!!! The past you have which written here is truly sensible, it was beautiful and you can even continue it ! I loved it ππΌπ
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