FF:First Love~LAST PART~ page 81 12/9/11 - Page 48

Originally posted by: aNsHu_tEjPaL

first of all...let me say happy diwali to you...hope u had a great time and enjoyed with all the lovely sweets...second...thank you sooo much for the wonderful diwali gift...absolutely loved it!!!!!

finally...ooohhh mmmyyy gggoooddd!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i am fanning myself here...absolutely brilliant update...there were sooo many goood things happening the the update

loved how gopi and raj are doing well and picking up from where they left off...felt good to see them talk to each other and be happy for one another

finally the five member of the evil group came out together...very nice to see that ahem knows who he's up against...not that it matters...lolll ahem rocks!!!!!!!!!!!

nice to see the party went off fine...i wanted to see pics...lolll

finally...the biggest scene ever...finally finally ahem and gopi have become one and what a wonderful coming together it was...loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! sooo hot, sexy, romantic, everything at the same time!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! very heartwarming to see!!!!!! looks like the two days alone will be even more wonderful now...lolll


u have to continue sooon!!! i cant wait tooo long for the next one...lolll...can't wait for morning after!!!!!

fab update!!!!!!!

Thank you so much Anshu!
I did have a great Diwali, its always fun to spend some time with friends on Diwali.

I am so glad you are enjoying this Ahem, and yeah he always rocks.
Party pics, I will try to remember that next time.😆
The morning after scene and two days alone, I will try my best to send you to la la land.

Thank you so much for this fabulous feed back.🤗

Originally posted by: taniks

Wow amazing that was too good , loved it. Pls continue soon

Thank you so much! I will update as soon as I can finish penning down the next part.

Originally posted by: SNS_fan101

wow great update!!!

Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: soni4eva

awsum update luv it

cnt w8 2 read more

plzz cont soon x fanx 4 da pm 😊

Thank you so much! I will continue soon/

Originally posted by: love_goahem

wow that was very well written. You write like a real novel...very detailed and explicit!

Thank you so much for liking the update!

Originally posted by: vaishali667

thank for amazing update

Thank you so much, I am glad you enjoyed it.

Originally posted by: sks21

wow that was wonderful...from the beginning of the update till the end it was fabulous...shilpa ben ur an amazing writer...the way how u have written ahem and gopi becoming one is just wonderful...
waiting for the next update...




-kavya

Thank you so much Kavya. I am so glad you liked this part. Will update soon, I have started it, but is yet to be finished, had to finish some other work first.

Originally posted by: ANJ4

WOW 😳

Thank you so much Anju!

Originally posted by: savvi

wish you a happy diwali and happy new year...

oh my god... i am speechless and its so heart warming i cant say... actually i read all the updates in the night , in the dark... and this one can u imagine my state of mind...😉 no worries i am married .😆

but really each and every word is mind blowing and so intimate, as if your words and story are just meant for ahem and gopi (couples like them)... i read like three times... very bad of me

thanks alot for your dhamaks...

already ready for another update

Thank you so much for the Diwali and the new year wish, and yes my new year started with a bang, it was great.
Thank you so much for this wonderful feed back, and I am glad you enjoyed it enough to read it three times.
I will update soon.

Originally posted by: kaka.lg

👍🏼thanks for the PM, shilpa ben...it's so mind blowing...😍👏

Thank you so much I am so glad you enjoyed it.

Originally posted by: _Precious_

Woww what a great update. It was a breath holding description of Ahem-Gopi becoming one. Absolutely loved it. I want to read it again (feeling bad about me, but I am married)

Thank you so much Precious, glad you enjoyed the update.😳

Originally posted by: angelirebelli

Bravo S.. that was some update... even at the risk of sounding repetitive *superlikes* - (Don't think I should use that anymore..its kind of become the scheme of things) 👍🏼

So now we have all the cards on the table.. and the clock is ticking.. what next?? I hope they aren't planning something really vile...😒

Gohem front .. things are definitely rosy and I hope there isn't much trouble in paradise...

Definitely looking forward to the next installment...

Thank you so much Angeli!🤗🤗
I happen to like your "superlikes" so don't worry about it.
The mystery of missing puzzle piece has been solved, but its not over yet, what will this five evil do, I have no idea, they seem to be hell bent on revenge, most especially one person.
GoHem, yes things are definitely rosy their and will get rosier in the coming days, lets see.😉

Now for the next installment, it has been delayed a bit. I was surprised with a home project, that I wasn't expecting to take place yet, and it set me back with everything, I haven't had sufficient time to finish the update, but soon it will be posted.

Originally posted by: JakeR

Awesome update...Just loved it. And the best part was..um..u know..what !!☺️

😲Dhawal and Anita? Rashi and Umang?😭... I want RaJa😆... and DhIlpa🤣...

"She looks ravishing"😲... Thats exactly what i always think of my kate😳... Extremely Ravishing😃... Oh she has a similar looking saree but in black. The first time i saw her in that😆... And wow.. I was dumbstruck !! Not like some ppl who cant even drape saree🤣

(not you ben😃)

@Ahem's arms still held her possessively as he buried his face against her neck Katie loves this😆... I must oblige !!

@Inexperienced as she was, her own body moved instinctively to his rhythm in a communication that was old as time and as new as an undiscovered star, until with an explosion of unimaginable pleasure the star burst into a million shining, scintillating fragments and she began the slow, weightless floating back to earth. wow !! Gurlzzz😛.. tell u something?, Some inexperienced girls are full of fantasies.😆... They imagine these things like they are experienced🤣...literally speaking !!

I wish you had paired Rashi with someone better.. feel pity for Anita too.. Nick is the typical hero here😃... he is awesome !!

Overall ben , this was a fantastic update⭐️... There i gave u 5😃

Thank you so much Jake!
You are an amazing brother, what can I say. I keep telling to leave the pairing of the couples to me. Be careful of what you ask, I might pair your Kate with Dhawal, if you don't behave.😆

You know this whole update is Fake anyways, so why make comments like this.😃
(If I get in trouble for this, I am blaming you)😈

Nick a typical hero?🤣🤣 Same goes for Anita and Rashi. (Remind me to pair you with both next time, you won't feel sorry for them.)

Last but not the least. I forgive you for all your funny comments above for one reason only, because you gave me a five star.
🤣

Originally posted by: darkchoco

very nice FF. I read it at a go, please update soon.

👏

Thanks so much! I will do my best to update soon.

Originally posted by: bourbon

Heyy Shilpa, I was a silent reader of your ehsaas. I have been following first love from the beginning. I was not a member of IF but i think as now i am one i should thank you for this. Your are a very talented writer along with some other people all over IF.

I am not a big fan of Ahem-Gopi. But i was always intrigued with their story. Do update fast dear, thank you.

First let me say welcome to the forum, thank you for joining us.

Thank you so much for commenting of the FF, I am glad you enjoyed Ehasaas, and now enjoying FL.
GoHem are very interesting glad you are intrigued by them and want to read about them.

I will be updating soon, just had some things to finish first. Sorry for the delay.

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

awesome update...

so, nick is the one trying to harm aham...

finally they consumated their marriage...

Thank you so much!

Yes Nick was the mystery guest, and unfortunately for Ahem he won't go down quietly, lets hope for the best.
I thought it was about time they both expressed their feelings for each other physically. Glad you liked the update.

Originally posted by: kamjal

shilpha, this is awesomely written. love the each expression pls update soon

Thank you so much Kamjal! Glad you liked the update.