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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update yaar, indirectly kashish brought his old memory to back to him, and he scrutny her dream , instead feeling bad , but canove really nice between them
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update dear ...
Their outing is getting more and more interesting ...
Loving it very much ...
Great part ...
Waiting for next ...
Update soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 48


k- That something has took all my loved ones away from me...and I am the next target and it's following me

s- There is God as one of your prime suspects...

k- What???????????????

s-Well I mean...people dying natural death and going to God and stuff... unless one is murdered.. that's all his doing right? That's the general concept. Well...you still have this dream?

k-Ye, I still have this dream...I feel so pathetic when I have it

Her face has become colorless as she recalls her nightmare

k-You know, my house has 43 family members and no one is present...it's impossible...43 people dying a natural death

s-Welll...it hardly matters now does it? There is me now...and...my uncle if you care.. I would rather prefer you don't

k-That makes 43 plus 2...45...now, atleast I have you

s-That is just...forget it there is no use arguing with you...you are too soft...

k-I am so scared being lonely

s-You do well alone. You stay alone at home and hotel when I go to work...that isn't so bad is it?

k-But I know...you are there and you will come back...you haven't left me...you will come back...you are there somewhere

s-Yah where else would I go?

She smiles

k- Yes, that's an assurance. I fear people I love would be snatched away from me. I am so glad I have you

s- If you were independent ...maybe you wont fear being alone so much. You should get a job


Sujal says seriously...he doesn't want her to be lost and be at lose if something happens to him...he knows she can't go back to her family and his uncle is well not there...he wants her to have a secure future...with or without him

k-Arre...I was also thinking about the same. You know I get so bored in that room and all. Can I go to the office with you?

s-No. I don't think that would be an appropriate job for you..

k-Why?

s-You need to first think about what you like and then get a job in that field. Something which holds your interest then you'll be good at it

k-I can just assist you

s- You like listening and following orders?

k-: Listening and following orders? Yes I can do that

s- Do you like doing that...??? I am not asking if you can or cant. And I think, you should spend some time thinking and finding stuff to do when you go back...as you cant work night now as you right now as you are here on tourist visa

k-But I am bored just now

s-Well you cant have everything in life

k-So let me assist you, casually. I really can

s- I am not asking you if you can or cant...jeez! you not even listening...what good you would be following orders when you want to argue and quibble over everything? Assistant job is not for you

k-I can do it. Atleast gimme a chance

s- Are you even listening!!!!! You have too much brains to follow silently

Kashish starts laughing out hard as if he had cracked a really funny joke

Sujal raises an eyebrow not getting the humour

k-What a joke! I have brains??????

s- Inquisitiveness...

She is till laughing

k-I am dyslexic. I have the lowest IQ

She says matter of factly

s-Well, you wont be any good as an assistant...whatever you may be having

k-hmm

She answers looking down as her belief becomes stronger that she is good for nothing

s- I think you should do well in your own...like control or handle something...not work under someone...you shouldn't work under someone...you would... I don't know become a doormat maybe...you would never work to your full potential then.maybe start a shop of something...or I don't know...

He still hasn't noticed that she is feeling down...he is thinking hard what her interests are and he doesn't know

k-Why do you think...I cant work under someone...but...just...leave it...[she squeks]

s-oh you can work... but it wont be your best work and you wouldn't be happy

k-hmm

s-Why work someplace where you are not happy if u can work anywhere? I mean you don't have the financial strain of getting a job, so find what's nice

k-It's just...I shouldn't think of doing anything productive...I am sorry...you got a wife like me...You deserve so much so better

s-I don't even deserve you...it would have been better if no one got straddled with me... I am not a nice person to tired down to...you on other hand...are beautiful and full of spirit...anyone is fortunate to have you and spoil you...

She is silent

k-Stop saying nice things

She says after few moments

s-It's the truth..

k-I know I am just dumb...you can say that..I don't mind...everyone in my family used to say that...even Ranjeet

s- Well...I believe what I said too...and you know I don't lie..not unless it is important...

k-yes...I also believe...[she believes that she is dumb]

She squeaks as she tries hard to stop the droplets of tears from escaping her eyes

Edited by storywriter - 13 years ago
aamirkhanfan thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
great update...
how did the family members of kashish treat her?...
till now i got a little glimpse of sujal's past...in this part u gave an insight of kashish's past
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Posted: 13 years ago
its a double treat for me 😍 coz its second part in single day for me 😆😆😆

as usual its lovely 👏👏 but thoda serious hogaya 😳 ... dono itne serious convo kar rahe hai 😆😆

all the best sujal 👍🏼 if anyday u decide to have kashish as assistant 😆😆... not underestimating her ...but still it will be too tough for u to handle 😆


continue soon 😃


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Posted: 13 years ago
nice upadate, but i am curious now about kashish past and her family, i hope its clere soon, love sujal kashish convo
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Posted: 13 years ago
My poor Kash is feeling soo low ...
I guess her family has not loved and cared for her much as much she loved them ...
Sujal is soo sweet , he wants her to be happy always ...
Both care soo much about each other and above all think superior of the other one ...
Awesome update ...
Loved it ...
Cont. soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi
both the ups are good
in the first up kashish asks sujal about his nightmare but sujal who dont wan to share it with her just ignores it by saying her that he forgets it whereas kashish tells him about her nightmare
the dream is really scary and its quite natural reaction of her
people gets more scared to be left alone
anyways in the second part sujal tries to divert kashish mind by sugeesting her to do a job
kashish who really gets bored by sitting idle in the hotel room tells him that she wants to join him the office
but sujal says that she dont have to a job where she have to listen to others
by hearing kashish gets again angry
oh this will i think till their whole life
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 48
nice part...
Sujal is trying to make Kashish's future strong and secure...
but Kashish well she has something but still in the denial...
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 49


s- Well...I believe what I said too...and you know I don't lie..not unless it is important...

k-yes...I also believe...she believes that she is dumb]

She squeaks as she tries hard to stop the droplets of tears from escaping her eyes

He just thinks she is not good at being conniving or doubting or thinking bad about people...like a kid who trusts easily...

But he thinks she is too comfortable with him and she would badger him with questions...whereas if she assists someone else and does the same she would be fired...else she would be quite all the time and become a doorrmat, she doesn't know when to keep it shut and she doens't have enough confidence to voice her opinion to intimidating people. She wouldn't learn seriously from him...she cant she is too comfortable... It's the extremes either she wd take it as a joke or get so afraid that he is angry that she would dwell in her misery and not really get what he is saying...he just isn't the assisting sort..

k-By the way...it's ok...I understand..[she says with a compromising grin]

Sujal nods, coming out of his thoughts

s- Are you still hungry?

k-No. You must be hungry

s-hmm yeah, but i am fine...i'll order something in the room

k-No...please eat so..something...[she croaks..her voice has become thick]

Sujal looks at her he can see she is struggling and pretty close to tears and he is surprised...samajh nai aa raha ki hua kya..

s-Kashish what is wrong?

He asks stopping and putting his hand on her shoulder to make her face him

k-Nothing [she says with a forced grin]

s- Is thing important enough to lie?

k-What?... no...no

s-Then why are you lying?


k-why would I lie

He narrows his eyes...not at all happy

s-I can't trust you if you keep doing that

He cant understand why she does it...brave the whole world when it's ok to let down.

s- You are breaking what little faith I have in you by putting up this unconvincing act...it's like... if I am away then I can trust you to be alright...if you would lie on and not tell...it would make me worry and be I'll be angry and it's not a good thing to live like that

k-Trust?..I am...not even...trust worthy...i broke my family's trust...I can also break yours easily

She couldn't hold her tears any longer, and breaks down sobbing

k-I am not your family...I meant blood relatives

Sujal murmurs and pulls her close in a hug...it just happened automatically...maybe it was the cotton candy, he thinks...he rub her back to soothe her

s- Now who said that you were fine? Crying like this?

k-I...am...not crying

s-umhmm

She is trying hard not to...and wipes her tears

s-Wind in your eyes?

He says, soothing her

k-..not...crying

She keeps on repeating

He offers his hanky to her

k-Why are you offering it?????????? I am not crying !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I don't want... I am not cryinggg

s-I thought you had some sand or wind in your eye so you can take it out... besides crying is luxury...

She takes the hanky and wipes her tears...he waits for her to calm down...

k-You are right

She says calming after calming a little

k-I can't work like you. I am nothing except a pallative care technician

s-Pallative?

He looks at her with question and surprise

k-I am a pallative care technician. I mean I used to be

s-What is palliative care technician?

k-Well...it's a profession. When a person is terminally ill then we decide what kind of care the patient needs and appropriately treat the patients so they have a happy death

s-I see. So you are used to giving orders and deciding...and I cant see how death can be happy...you liked this job of yours?

k-Yes it was nice, but sad too. When someone used to die then

s-Why don't you become a nurse then...not for those old people but for say...normal people or for children...you have a way with kids

k-It's not a nurse !!!!!!!! I am a MA in pallative care and we are consultants to the head doctors

s-I know I am saying you can be one; and someone who is a Ma in pallative care cant be stupid. So don't give me 'I am dumb ' again

She looks at him and smiles

k-You know, Palliative care is care that improves the quality of life of patients and their families facing life-threatening illness. With palliative care particular attention is given to the prevention, assessment, and treatment of pain and other symptoms, and to the provision of psychological, spiritual and emotional support.

s-Wow!... Did you learn that or did you just make it up? You can be a teacher too...

k-It's the actual definition

She says happily

Sujal looks at her... surprised and amused as she is retelling on

s- You can go back to doing what you did... If it doesn't make you too sad

k- And yes...we treat addicts too..You know there was a boy, in his late teens and all...you know how these patients are... drug addicts one:...I went to check him and my..my...he pounced on me... I was so terrified

He waits for her to finish and they resume walking as she is talking...going on and on..

Edited by storywriter - 13 years ago

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