Dil ka rishta...SR FF

Hello Guys,

Myself Priya & I am too SR/JERAN fan. I have started to write an SR ff, hope you liked it.

First of all I'll say SORRY b'coz I'll not be able to do PM's & I'll try to update once in week. So plz bear me for this.

 

Characters:-

Dr. Shashank Gupta (SG): Incharge of Sanjeevani.

Dr. Keerti: DO of Sanjeevani.

 

Dr. Riddhima Gupta (Ridz): Intern of Sanjeevni, D/o SG, best friend of Shilpa Malhotra & Armaan Malik. 

Dr. Shilpa Malhotra (Shilpa): Intern of Sanjeevni, best friend of Riddhima Gupta & GF of Armaan Malik.

Dr. Armaan Malik (Armaan): Intern of Sanjeevni, BF of Shilpa Malhotra & best friend of Riddhima Gupta.

 

*** Ridz, Shilpa & Armaan passed out from St. Xavier college, they are the classmates.

 

Dr. Siddhant Modi (Sid): Intern of Sanjeevni, best friend of Yuvraj Obroi & Naina Mehta.

Dr. Yuvraj Obroi (Yuvi): Intern of Sanjeevni, best friend of Siddhant Modi & BF of Naina Mehta.

Dr. Naina Mehta (Naina); Intern of Sanjeevni, GF of Yuvraj Obroi & best friend of Siddhant Modi.

 

*** Sid, Yuvi & Naina passed out from MDS College, they are the classmates.

 

Dr. Jitendra Prasad (JP): Intern of Sanjeevni & buddy of Jignesh.

Dr. Jignesh (Jiggy): Intern of Sanjeevni & buddy of Jitendra Prasad.

 

*** Jitendra Prasad & Jignesh passed out from Govt. College, they are the classmates

 

And the story begins with first day in Sanjeevni………

Its 9.45 am

Shilpa: Hello, Ridz where r u? Come fast, U r getting late for the function. Ur father is already here.

On the other side

Ridz: I know Shilpa, but I can't. Right now I'm on bus stop, (Rids sees a bus is arriving) dekho shilpa bus aa rahi hai mai tume baad mein call karti hoon, ok, bye.

Shilpa: E….ek min. yeh bus, bus stop kya hai?

Ridz: Shilpa, main tumhe baad may batati hoon.

Shilpa: Ok…ok u come first will talk later, come soon dear.

Ridz: Yah, bye.

Armaan to shilpa: What happened? Everything is ok na…?

Shilpa: Yah……, (with rolling her eyes) I think she is coming by bus.

Armaan: What?

Shilpa: Yes, now let's wait her, as 12 mins are left to start the inaugural function.

 

Here on the other side……

Sid is driving his car very fast as he is getting late for the inaugural function, but suddenly his car gets break down.

Sid: Oh shit, ab tum ko kya hua? He gets down from the car & looks at the tyre which got punctured. Oh god, ab mai kya karo.  Ab itna time nahi hai ki main mechanic lauo aur ghadi thik karu. I have to go, hurry up dude only 10 mins are left.

Just than he sees a bus which will be passing through Sanjeevni. He parks the car aside, takes keys & run to catch the bus.

 

Aur yahan Ridz bus mein chadne ki koshih kar rahi hai, par log use chadne de toh woh chadegi, aur idhar sid bus pakdne ke liye dud raha hai, finally sab log chadne ke baad ridz bus main chadti hai,( bus mein bhid honeke karan ridz steps par kahadi hai aur sid chalti hui bus pakadta hai)  par tabhi ridz ko piche se zor se dakha lagta hai mudke dekhti hai to ek ladka (sid) uske piche khada hai,  usee who gusse se dekhti hai, tabhi ridz ke dhyna mein ata hai ki us ladke ne uske dupatte ko pakda hai aur dupatta ridz ke gale se hat/gir raha hai toh woh us ladke se kehti  hai…..

Ridz: O, Mr. mere dupatte ko chodo.

Sid: Dekhiye maine jaan bhujkar aapke dupatte ko nahi pakda hai, woh to bus mein chadte waqt mere haath mein agaya aur vaise bhi mujhe yahan pakdane ke liye kuch mila bhi nahi …

Ridz: Phir bhi mera dupatta chodo..

Sid: Par main……

Ridz (angrily): Maine kaha na mera dupatta chodo & without thinking she tries to remove her dupatta from his grip, in this process sid losses his balance & unknowingly sid ka haath ridz ke kamar pe jatha hai...

Ridz: Batmeez, batameezi ki bhi koi had hoti hai, meri kamar ko chodo. Tumhe ungli kya pakdi ab tum toh mere haath ke piche hi pad gaye, chodo mujhe.

Sid: Dekho mujhe koi shauk nahi tume pakdke khade rehne ka, majboori hai, agar maine tumhe choda toh main bus se bahar gir jaoonga. Try to understand me.

Ridz: Tum gir jao ya bhad mein jao mujhe usee kya? Now u just removes ur hand from my waist.

Sid (to himself): Sid kuch kar nahi to yeh chudail tumhe kaccha chaba jayegi, is chudail se bachna hai toh tujhe kisi aur ka sahara doond na padega & just than he sees a handle & he removes his hand from her waist.

Ridz (to herself): Iditot kahi ka, agar mujhe kahi aur mila toh mai iska jina mushkil kar doongi.

Sid (to himself): Is chudail ne toh mera din hi khrab kiya, bhootni kahi ki.

 

After 10 mins…

Yuvi: Utha Sid utha, yeh sid phone kyun utha nahi raha hai.

Naina: Yuvi chalo chalte hai, function shuru ho raha hai, lets go.

Yuvi: Naina lekin sid ab tak nahi aaya hai.

Naina: Don't worry Yuvi, woh aa jayega, tum chalo. She grabs his hand & takes him insides where function is.

 

Armaan: Shilpa, let's go inside nahi toh pehle din se hi punishment shuru ho jayegi.

Shilpa: Par…. Ridz.

Armaan: She'll come. Don't worry.

 

And the functions begins

Dr. Keerti welcomes all the Administartives, Management & staff, followed by Dr. SG speech & at last the time comes to interns introduction. Here Sid & Ridz get down from the bus & run towards Sanjeevni as fast as possible. Both reaches at the same time asks for permission to come inside function hall.

Sid & Ridz (at the same time): Excuse me sir, may I come in. (both looks at each other in anger).

Dr. Keerti: No, you can't just wait outside till the function ends. 

Ridz: But Mam.

Dr. Keerti: Just follow the orders.

 

Sid & Ridz stands outside the function hall.

Ridz: Tum mera piche kyon aaye ho?

Sid: O hello, Yeh Sanjeevni Hospital hai, yahan par kuch log sikhane aate aur kuch log ilaaz karwane.

Ridz: Dekho, tum mujhe jaante nahi main kaun hoon?

Sid: Nahh.. mujhe acchi tarah se pata hai ki tum un logon mein se ho jo yaahan par apna ilaaz karvane aate hai. But u don't worry tumara yahan pura dhyan rakha jayega.

Ridz: Main yaha ilaaz karvane nahi, karne ke liye aayi hoon tum jaise badmashon ka…

Sid: O really than I'll be waiting for that moment.

 

And here the function ends. Arsh & Yuna comes to wards their mates.

Yuvi: Sid tu kaha tha? Aur tu phone kyon nahi utha raha tha?

Sid(frustration): Kya batau yaar, aaj na mera din hi kharab hai, Subha ke saat (7) baje ka alarm lagaya tha, woh nau (9) baje baja, ghar se nikla toh car ne sath choda, jaise-taise bus mili toh bus main yeh chudail mili, aur ab yeh aisa khad hoon… yahan pe…….

Naina: Sid… chudail, yeh kaun hai….

Sid (angrily): Wohi jo mere saath bahar khdi thi, pata nahi kya samajti hai aapko, than he narrates them the bus incident. Acha hai bus se hi aati hai agar gadi ya bike aati toh shayad parking area apne naam hi karvati.

Naina: Aur phone?...

Sid (guilty): Woh silent pe tha………… sorry yaar meri vajah se tum dono ko pareshani hui….

Yuvi: Bas kar ab, chal…… chalet hai, waise bhi aaj nahi classes hai aur nahi duty.

Sid: Matlab?

Naina: Matlab aaj ke liye chutti ho gayi hai.

Yuvi: To Chale…..

Sid: Par kaha….

Yuvi: Tu bas chalne ka kaam kar….

 

And here

Shilpa: Ridz tu intne gusse mein kuyn hai…. Aur tu yeh bus main kyon?

Armaan: Shilpa let her cool down… she will explain you….

Ridz: Batmeez kahi ka……..

Armaan: What?...

Ridz: No no no….. tume nahi.

Shilpa: Toh phir kaun?

Ridz: Wahi jo mere sath bahar khada tha…

Armaan: Ab uska kya connection?

Ridz: Pata hai usne mujhe than she narrates the whole bus incident.

Shilpa: Oh god, tu isliye gussa hai, par mujhe nahi lagta usne tumhe cheda hoga…

Ridz: O hello tu uski dost hai ya meri, jo tu uski side le rahi hai.

Shilpa: Sorry, yaar main toh bus……chod naa usse, by the way yeh bus kya chakkar hai?...

Ridz: Woh papa ne kaha hai ki mujhe atleast do (2) mahino tak bus se ana padega, taki main iss duniya aur behtar tarike samaj saku.

Shilpa: R u sure u will do that?

Ridz: Obviously, from tomorrow onwards I'll be on time.

Both Shilpa & Armaan: All the best.

Armaan: Lekin ab to hum yaha se chal sakte hai na, so lets go to canteen.

Shilpa : That's good idea, come lets go.

Ridz: Ya..

 

Par tabhi Dr. SG aate hai aur who Sid aur Ridz ko apne cabin mein bulate hai.

Inside Cabin

Dr. SG: Interns introduce yourselves.

Sid: Dr. Siddhant Modi, sir.

Ridz: Dr. Riddhima Gupta.

Dr. SG: Toh Dr. Siddhant & Dr. Riddhima, aap jante hai na ki aaj apka Sanjeevni mein pehla din tha aur aap pehle din hi late. U must know that the First impression is the last Impression aur aap aisa impression dena chate hai apne seniors aur collegues ko.

Ridz: Papa…. Woh…

Sid (thinking): Papa……. Yeh Dr. Shashank Gupta aur yeh kya naam bataya isne a..a..a..a..a..a..a  haan  Dr. Riddhima Gupta, so Gupta fly, toh isliye bhaav kha rahi hai, ab to isse thik karma hi padega.

Dr. SG: Wait Dr. Riddhima, aap apni personal aur professional life mix kar rahi hai, right now u r intern of this hospital not my daughter.

Ridz: Sorry sir, aage se aisi galti nahi hogi & from tomorrow onwards I'll reach on time sir.

Sid: Sir, even I'm sorry aur main apko aage se shikayat ka mauka nahi dunga.

Dr. SG: That good, both of you may leave now.

Sid & Ridz: Thank u sir.

Outside cabin they both look each other angrily & walk with their respective partners.

hi...priya  Edited by NaGeSwArI - 12 years ago

loved it

gud start please continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks guys for your lovely comments.

Nice start :)

SR's 1st meeting was similar to SidNa meeting ;)) Sanjeevani scene was nice :) Can't wait to see Batmeez & Chudail's noke jhok lol

Continue soon...

Nice start do PM me next time.

nice start

nice start...do pm me...

Guys first of all I say sorry, b'coz I don't know how to do PM's. So here enjoy the Part II.

 

Part II

 

Next day in Sanjeevni…….

All interns were at nurse station waiting for briefing as Dr. Keerti was not yet come. Sid came running as he is getting late for the briefing & he got bumped with rid who is also waiting briefing.

Rid (pain): Ouch… (she looks to the person who bump her & gets angry).

Sid: O shit! kis musibat se takraya mein.

Ridz: Hello! Ek to mujhse takrate ho aur upar se sorry bolne ki wajah tum mujhe hi………,

Sid: Oye andhi ho kya? Jaan bhuzkar  nahi takraya.

Ridz: Tumhe toh itni bhi tameez nahi hai ki ladkiyon se baat kaise karte hai….

Sid: Nahi, kush….., lekin chudailo ko kaise handle karte main achi tarah janata hoon….

Ridz: Chudail……tumne mujhe chudail kaha.

Sid:  Lo ab to bhairi bhi hogayi.

Ridz: Tumse toh baat karma hi bekaar hai..

Sid: Toh maine kab kaha ki mujse baat karo… jab dekho toh apna radio on karti ho….

Ridz:  Mind ur language. Tum-tum….tumhe main chodungi nahi.

Sid: Janta hoon, mere khoon ki pyasi jo ho….., bhtakati aatma ….

Ridz: You ………,

 

Everyone is laughing at looking both of them. Yuvi Sid ko aur shilpa ridz ko chup rahne ko kahte hai par yeh dono unki sune toh. Tabhi Dr. Keerti ati hai aur sab logon ko duty assign karti hai. Dr. Armaan & Dr. Jignesh – Path Lab, Dr. JP & Dr. Naina - Childrens Ward, Dr. Yuvraaj & Dr. Riddhima – OPD, Dr. Siddhant & Dr. Shipa – General ward.

 

At path Lab…

Armaan: So, Dr. Jignesh right?

Jignesh: Ya, but u can call me Jiggy. All my friends call me Jiggy.

Armaan: Jiggy, sounds nice. So, lets start work.

Jiggy: Ya sure.

 

In childrens ward….

JP: Flowerji…

Naina: What?……flowerji?

JP: Haan…woh hum na sab ladkiyon ko flowerji kahate hai, kyonki woh phoolon ki tarah najuk hoti hai na isliye….

Naina: Ooh..

JP: Toh aap flower ka naam kya hai?

Naina: Naina Mehta aur tum.

JP: Jitendra Prasad par hume sab JP kahte hai..

Naina: OK so JP nice to meet U.

JP: Me too….

Naina: Toh shuru karein hamara kaam……..

JP: Haan ji bilkul.

 

At OPD…

Yuvraaj: Excuse me.

Ridz:  Yes,

Yuvraaj: hi, I'm Yuvraaj, for friends Yuvi.

Ridz: I.m Riddhima.

Yuvraaj: Actually muje na aap se kuch bath karni thi.

Ridz: Yah..

Yuvraaj: Woh main aapse sorry kehna chata hu.

Ridz: Sorry, kisliye?

Yuvraaj: Woh Dr. siddhant u..…….

Ridz: Ek sec. tum kyon sorry keh rahe ho, jisse kehna hai usse toh is bath ki fikhar hi nahi…so plz tum rahne do.

Yuvraaj: Actually who aisa nahi hai par pata nahi kyon aap par itna gussa hai, I don't know why?

Ridz: Shayad isse pehle kabhi mere jaisi ladki se pala nahi pada hoga.

Yuvraaj: Nahi aisa nahi hai..

Ridz: Plz leave that matter. Uski wajah se hum apna time kyon khrab karein. Lets do our work.

 

And here in the general ward…..

Shilpa: Hi, I'm Shilpa Malhotra.

Sid: Siddhant Modi.

Shilpa: Siddhant, nice name.

Sid: Thank U. But u can call me sid, if u likes.

Shilpa: Sid, so friends.

Sid: Friends.

 

 

After finishing duties all were present in LR except Sid & Shilpa. They both came laughing at LR. Rid looks at them & gets angry. Shilpa notices that gives smile to ridz & goes towards her.

Shilpa: Excuse me everyone, First of all, Hi to everyone Myself Shilpa, meet my best Friend Riddhima. (Slowly to Rid) say hi to them.

Ridz: Hi.

Shilpa: And he is my soul mate Armaan.

Armaan: Hello everyone.

 

Sid: Okay, so now its my turn, myself Sidhant, so hello to everyone except..

Yuvraaj: Sid..

Sid: Okk… he his Yuvraaj my buddy & she is Naina my Gf & Yuvi's best friend.

Yuvraaj & Naina: Sid..

Sid: Just kidding yaar, I mean  Naina is Yuvi's Gf & my friend.

Yuvraaj & Naina: Hi, guys.

JP (slowly to himself): Gayi bhais pani mein..

Jiggy (slowly): Kya

JP (slowly):: Matlab iss flowerji ke saath bhavra bhi hai aur mali bhi.

Jiggy (slowly): JP shayad tu bhul raha hai ki yaha par tumhari aur ek flowerji hai, woh dekho, Dr. Riddhima.

JP(slowly):: Haay dayya, hume kya pagal kutte ne kaata hai,  jo humein unke gusse ka shikar hona hai, waise bhi unhe dekhte hi hume pasina atha hai.

 

Jiggy (to all):  Guys ab hamari barri. Main Jignesh aur yeh Jitendra Prasad.

JP: Aur aap hume Jiggy aur JP bhi kanke bula sakte hain.

 

Shilpa: So i think we almost know each other to iss nayi dosti par coffee ho jaye, what u guys says.

Naina: Not bad idea.

Armaan: So lets go.

 

After having coffee everyone leave to their houses. JP & Jiggy goes to their hostel, Naina went with Yuvi on his bike.  Sid was in his car passing through Sanjeevni bus stop where he spots Armaan & Shilpa. He immediately stops the car.

 

Sid: Hey Armaan & Shilpa, what r u doing here?

Shilpa: Waiting for the bus.

Sid: Bus, (reminds him the incident between him & rids) come on guys I''ll drop U.

Armaan: Thanks sid, but we are not the one who waiting for the bus but its riddima. With that Armaan moves aside so that sid can see ridz. Both avoids each other.

Sid: Ohh,  I think I should leave now. So see you tomorrow. Bye.

Armaan & Shilpa: Bye.

 

At home……

Modi House at Dining table…..

Sid's Mother (SM): Toh hamare laad sahab ne aaj hospital mein kya-kya kiya.

Sid: Toh aapke laad sahab ne aaj naye dost banaye, duty ki aur chu……

SM :  Aur  chu….kya…

Sid (himself): Nahi nahi us chudail ke barien mein mujhe mom ko nahi batana hai warna woh mujh pe hi gussa karegi.

SM :  Aur  kya…

Sid: Aur Chuti hogayi……

Sid (himself): Thank god, bach gaya.

Wjile eating food.

Sid (himself):  Par ek bath samaj mein nahi aayi why she must be traveling by bus. After all she is Dr. Shahank's daughter, so whats the chakkar?    By the way Sid. Why u r so worried about her.? Don't forget, she is the great, greatest chudail of this world.

 

Gupta House in Ridz Bedroom….

Dr. SG to Ridz: Beta kaisa raha tumara aaj ka din.

Ridz: Accha tha papa. Aaj humhe duties assign ki thi. Aur papa patha hai aaj main hospital mein time bhi pohchi. Kalse main wahi bus pakdoongi.

Dr. SG: All right beta, chalo ab so jao. Good Night.

Ridz: Good Night dad. (SG leaves the room)

Ridz (herself): Bus se yaad aaya, uske pass toh car hai, fir kal woh bus mein kyun…, god knows. Ridz tu us kum dimag wale insaan ke bare mein kyon soch rahi hai, tu shayd bhool rahi hai woh kitna batmeez hai.