SwaRon OS - Without You - Page 11

Originally posted by: NamD

loved your OS. I had tears in my eyes, while reading. Really your writing style is awesome.
Hope to read more of your works. Please pm me if you already anything posted

Originally posted by: tashu20

beautifully written...heart touching 

have tears in my eyes...loved it...😊

Originally posted by: ShrutikaSwaRon

Just loved it

Originally posted by: Suku_SwaRon

It is most touching OS i hve read. Words are not enough to express the beauty of this OS. But cant control my tears when i read that swayam died.  Swaron milne se pehele bichad gaye😭 You have done a wonderful job Pree.

Originally posted by: -Jum-RulzZ-

i dont knw wat to say!

but i started crying fr diss.. and i didnt read the one wer uu wrote in the top dat swayam is dead already but.. i... i am Speechless! i cant utter any word nw!
I literally cried after the story ended!
Beautiful..
Impossible to compliment! i wish.. swayam hadnt died!
but.. It really..really.. made me cry!
a real tear dropped dwn wen i came tu knw Swayam died! alredy!

Originally posted by: basket_101

Whoa...
I just read this OS..

That was sooo heart-breaking!!

I was honestly on the verge of tears!

You've written it very well!

Love the ritual of her writing letters every year..

And also the ritual that she shared with Rey

It was very beautifully written!

Do pm me if you write more!! =)

Originally posted by: mahak_28

i knw i hv read it late bt i cldnt stop frm cmnthng...gosh it is so so touchng...i dont hv words 2 explain hw i m feelng ryt nw...d stry has chnged snce u wrote dis os...bt i cld still feel sharon moving n evrythng happng...

u r wndrful writr...:) kudos :)

Originally posted by: mohitmohanty19

Yar tune tho rula diya mujhe...;(...aaj thak mee kabhi koi pm padh ka nahi roya lekin aaj ...aashu apne aap aa gaye...handoff...u r great...

Originally posted by: rutujak

awww... had a small tear in my eyes yar...😭

Originally posted by: -Jum-RulzZ-

in literal tears after reading it the 3rd time!