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Posted: 12 years ago
Lol lipsha how sweet of u dear...it just shows how much u lykd the update...next part kal bas phir mera kaam khatam afterall it wil be monday :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey february flower soo glad u lyk it dear i soo wish that they show ram priya wedding jaldi se!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally its sunday ..bas monday aa hii gaya and soo last update for this weekend..hope u all had some timepass with this ff...anyways...here's the next part...in TWO POSTS...~Ram looks around frantically...wondering how long priya wont start panicking again...disheartened he realises that there wasnt even a landline connection to contact the local authorities...frustrated he turns around and finds priya leaning against the wall and standing with her eyes closed...ram found himself attracted to her...and silent he admires how simple yet gorgeous she looked...a cute smile lightens up ram's face as he gazes at priya and the lines play in the background *kuch saaz hai...jage se jo the soye..alfaaz hain..chup se nashe mein khoye..nazar hii samjhe yeh guftagu saari..koi arzoo ley hai..angdayi ye pyari..jadoo sawar hai na ikhtiyar hai..shayad yeh pyar hai..pyar hai shayad~.. THE SONG ENDS...and ram's phone beeps..taking out from his pocket he sees it was vikram's message..at last ram had got the address...but now his concern was the terrified woman standing next to him...and seeing the signal bars back..an elated and relieved ram calls up his office telling them about the stuck elevator and his location..in no time guards and lift repair men come and bring out ram and priya from the lift..PRIYA LEANS against a pillar as ram watched her worriedly...she looked pale...tired and worn out..seeing her like that troubled and angers ram as he turns to the secratary of the society who had reached there too and says sternly-KAISI MANAGEMENT HAI AAPKI Mr. Desai? Kya tareeka hai? Lift theek nahin chalti hai toh issey change kyun nahin karatey..THE SECRATARY apologises with folded hands-ma af kar deejiye sir..society ke fund ke paise kam padtey hain aur...AGITATED RAM TAKES OUT HIS CHECKBOOK..cutting a check of ten lakhs he thrusts it in his hand saying-AAPKI society ke funds ka kya jhamela hai I just Dont care! But by the next 48 hours i want this damn thing to be changed! And thats it!... PRIYA LOOKS AT RAM stunned...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Everyone leave from there..priya walks upto ram and says-iss sab ki kya zarurat thi Mr.?..SMILING RAM REPLIES-ram..ram kapoor..(priya smiles sheepishly as he goes on)..aur iski bahot zarurat thi..aap theek toh hain? PRIYA NODS HER HEAD SAYING-thanks..aap koi address pooch rahe the na? I am sorry meri wajah se aap late ho gaye..RAM grins-aapki nahin us lift ki wajah se..he takes out the phone while priya is all smiles as she takes the phone from him..but just as she sees the address her smile vanishes and she stares at ram shocked as the add was hers! RAM NOTICES the surprise in her expressn and asks-kya hua? Kya main galat jagah aa gaya? PRIYA REPLIES-ji nahin par yeh address humara hai aur aap?! SPEECHLESS RAM just watches priya..how reluctant he had been to come to that place..how silly excuses he had been putting up with vikram to avoid going there..and now..JUST MOMENTS AGO HE WAS THANKFUL TO BE there by that woman's side as she faced her worst nightmare..aur abb her house and family were where ram was against marrying his beloved sister..PRIYA SPEAKS UP breaking the silence-main priya hoon..kahiye aapko kya kaam hai..~PRIYA~ SUCH A SWEET NAME..ram thinks to himself and smiles inwardly amused that he was Actually Admiring a woman's name!.. STILl finding hard to find words ram remains silent..just gazing at her and not knowing that soo that woman was going to be his life and later his Love too...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww Ashima!!!Ram is just too cute...πŸ€—
I loved it when Priya asked him "What the need was to do all that Mr..." Simply brilliant!!!
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Edited by FebruaryFlower - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks february flower...soo glad u liked this part too...bas abhi monday aa gaya soo see u all with this ff next weekend...
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Posted: 12 years ago
😍😍😍😍😍 um gazing too😳☺️
lovelyπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh anamika how sweet ur smilies say it all :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you Ashima!!! Loved it!! Wish this would actually happen! ahhh sooo sweet...waiting for the next part!! πŸ˜³
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Posted: 12 years ago
hello ashima😊😊😊
very nice updateπŸ‘πŸ‘
luved the way you write the partπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
continue soon
shreya😊😊
Edited by shreyamathur_18 - 12 years ago