New ff *Kitani mohobbat hai* C ARING 5

Posted: 2011-06-10T00:22:46Z
Index caring gesture pg 5Edited by Ashima_Mishal - 2011-06-11T15:18:30Z
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Posted: 2011-06-10T05:26:40Z

plz cont...

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Posted: 2011-06-10T05:56:20Z
Looking forward to it hun... Big smile
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Posted: 2011-06-10T06:52:59Z

INDEX...Part 1...face 1...Tongue

Part 2...Pyaar kii 3...Smile
It begins from thelast scene of yesterday's episode...a sad priya recalls hurtful but true words of her mother..ram puts a hand on her shoulder and says-EXCUSE ME...startled priya turns around and the two stare at each other...PRIYA was shocked that someone had actually walked upto her and excused himself! THE IRONY of the incident humoured her but she remains expressionless ...WHILE RAM had his own strange feeling to handle...he had never had the time or heart to admire any woman...but this lady standing in front him seemed to demand notice thanks to her elegant presence and teary eyes which seemed to want to say something to him!...PRIYA says softly-jii?...RAM realises he was speechless and so he replies fiddling into his pocket--woh...darasal...( he takes out his phone and opens his inbox)...yeh address poochna tha aapse...RAM looks at his inbox stunned!..there was no message fwd by vikram and as he scrolls through the inbox...he recalls that he had been screening his inbox to empty it and must have deleted it by mistake!...Wondering if fate was agreement with his point of view too...he dials vikram's phone...meanwhile the liftman tells that the lift was working again and priya helps the old woman into the lift and as ram talks on phone a slight cute smile crosses his lips as he finds himself impressed by priya's kind the time priya comes back she hears him tell vikram-haan tu jaldi se msg kar main wait kar raha hoon...DISCONNECTING the phone he turns to priya and says sheepishly and embarassed-woh msg delete ho gaya...bas msg kar raha dubara...THE LIFT OPENs up and without saying anything else...the two get into it...ram looks at the wall of his side and priya stares at hers...when the msg doesnt come ram glances at his phone and is stunned to see that there was no signal!..ANGRY he blurts out-DAMN IT! JUST THEN the lights go out and the lift jerks and comes to a halt...the two are left shocked and sparing stares at the walls of the lift they look at each other...
Edited by Ashima_Mishal - 2011-06-11T03:09:08Z
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Posted: 2011-06-10T06:54:23Z
Hi hbuy updated thoda short hai but next part wil be long pukka :)
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Posted: 2011-06-10T06:55:58Z
Hey february flower updated hope u enjoy it :)
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Posted: 2011-06-10T08:26:38Z
can't wait for the next part!
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Posted: 2011-06-10T08:41:05Z

it was nice reading the first part .. update soonSmile
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