SRFF DMG3-Phir bhi saath hai hum Epilogue Pg 124

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Posted: 13 years ago

#741

DJ... this ending is too emotional... so so so sad for me... I can't take this... i can't stop crying... how can you do that DJ... 😭 😭 😭
MAY BE it is the right ending, but i can't accept it... i hate sad endings...
Anyways thanks for this beautiful FF ... you're are a brillant and talented writer...
I planned to do some Christmas shopping today... but not anymore, don't feel like going... cause i can't stop my tears... WHY THIS SHOULD HAPPEN TO SR?????? 😭 😭 😭

Edited by mala1108 - 13 years ago

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Gina Calabrese

@ginac

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#742

DJ I hav just read the last 2 updates and I can only say one thing. U N B E L I E V A B L E!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The conversation between Riddhima and Rohan reduced me to tears. Every emotion and every heart beat was felt in ur writing. I understand that we all wanted Ridz and Sid to b 2gether in the end but I can totally understand where u r cuming from . INDEED SIDDHIMA WERE STAR CROSSED LOVERS. DJ U R AN AMZING AND GIFTED WRITER .🤗 I cant tell u how much I am gonna miss reading ur ffs. They were truly a treat for me after finishing work and cuming and seeing ur msgs that another update was up. TOTALLY LUVED READING UR WORK.😛😛😛😛

DJ I WISH U EVERY SUCCESS IN UR FUTURE AND GOD HAS SPECIAL PLANS FOR U. U R NOT ONLY A TALENTED MAN BUT HAV SUCH A CHARISMA WITH UR WRITING THAT I AM SURE THIS IS THE PERSON U REALLY ARE ALSO. THANK U SOOO MUCH FOR GIVING US THE MOST AMZING FFS I HAV READ TO DATE. 👏👏👏👏

DJ PLS DONT STAY AWAY FROM WRITING . PLS CUM BAC AND GIV US MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!🤗

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-Harshu-

@-Harshu-

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#743

' Phir bhi saath hai hum '

Wow!! what a PERFECT title for this beautiful story :D

It reminds of these lines ..

'' Badle raaste jharne aur nadhi..badle deep ki tim tim ..
Chede zindagi dhun koi nayi ,badle barkha ki rimzhim..
badlengi rituein adda ...par mai rahungi sada ussi tarah teri bahoon me bahoon dalke har lamha ..har pal ''

Though SR r not standing together holding each others arms BUT they hold a very SPECIAL / IMPORTANT place in each others heart which no one can take :)

From long ago I knew this is how ur gonna end this FF etc but still I kept reading the FF to knw what make u decide this ending ? How will Ridz leave Rohan & let him go away with Sid ? What explanation she'll give for this decision ? How will b the last convo b/w SR ?? Etc .

And this part answered all my Q's :)
The SR fan in me is a li'll unhappy & u knw why :P but if I see this story as a neutral reader this ending is beautiful :)

Just like Kavitha I too ve a li'll prob with Ridz explanation of Rohan's love being shared etc bcz as she mentioned all children love to b shared b/w 2 parents .. no matter how much Sid love Rohan ...he can never b able to fill Shilpa's place in his heart ...only Ridz can fill that place & we saw that in Ridz -Rohan convo in the last update where he missed Shilpa & found a motherly affection in Ridz :)) so IMO he would ve got a mother in Ridz if SR got together which he miss in his life :)

Other den this I agree with almost all ur explanations like SR's past & family acceptance etc bcz Sid can forget what Ridz did to him but neither Ridz nor their families can forget this atleast not so easily.. being their family they will encourage / support them but somewhere 'that' thought will always b there in their mind & it will take some time to accept Ridz like b4 ...

SR's silent convo & Ridz rply to Juhi wen she asked her whether she love Sid or not ? was the highlight of this part <3 it was simple yet beautiful :) from the beginning till the end I was crying like a baby :'(

LOVE the fact that they understood well that they still love each other :) but I think as time goes they'll realize the need of their togetherness ;)

As for the epilouge I just wanna mention these lines..

' mujhe juda hokar..tumhe doore jaana hai pal bhar ki judai fir laut aana hai ' 😉

I think u got what I wanna say 😉

at the end I just wanna say ur a BRILLIANT writer bro :D the way u understood each character & showed them in ur FF is just amazing !! Esp the most confused character on earth Riddhima :P
The way u wrote abt her is fantastic & to a certain point u redeemed this character :)
This FF is very special to me :) will miss it :((

PS - Banners r gorgeous <3
PPS - Give me a handkerchief bcz I'm still crying after reading this part ;p
PPPS - there was no need for u to mention my name & thanking me .. I'm ur li'll sis na so I'm always there for u ..whenever u need me luv ya 🤗

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Gina Calabrese

@ginac

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#744

Nami, Sehreen, Harshu, Sayo 🤗🤗🤗🤗 My amzing jaans I feel so privileged to be among such beautiful hearts such as urselves. Luv u all hamesha!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank u for all ur efforts in keeping DJ on his toes. lolzzz

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-Harshu-

@-Harshu-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#745

Ridz - pass rehkar bhi thi doori ..jaane kaisi thi majboori waqt voh bhi ajeeb tha..jab tu mere kareeb tha 😭

Sid - kho gayi tu ye kis jahaan me..mai yahaan hoon dekh toh zara 😃

Ufff I'm going pagal 😕

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whispa

@whispa

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#746

DJ😳

First of all I want to say how much i have loved reading your FF. It was like reading a book, so lovingly written with such vivid details. The emotions you evoked in the viewers is a testament to your wonderful skills as a storyteller. You brought each and every character to life not just Sid and Ridhimma, but characters like Juhi who was so kind hearted that you instantly fell in love with her and Rohan who had lost so much that you just wanted to hug him and tell him everything was going to be fine.

I have read the other comments and I see that you had always intended SR to separate. Im going to be honest, I dont like sad endings and so I didnt like this one. But that doesnt take away from your writing skills at all. You are the storyteller and it is your perogative how you see your characters and how you wish the story to end.

And DJ, theres no need to thank me for helping you translate some part of the FF. It was my absolute pleasure.

I know this is not the last of your storywriting, at least it better not be!😛 You are so talented that it would be a shame if you did not write more stories in the future. Im looking forward to you continuing your other FF soon. And hoping for a happy ending this time.😳

Its been an absolute pleasure to read your story DJ.

Edited by -Farrah- - 13 years ago

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fariya94

@fariya94

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#747

okayyy so we cum to the end of this ff.i somewhere knew that this is going to happen but i wanted to see how u do it...but trust me bro i am crying for SR not being together😭 but at the same time i give u a standing ovation👏 for giving this ff such a beautiful and perfect ending.though ur ff has ended but i see a new start in it...

so its my suggestion and request to u that plzzz whenever u start ur new ff ..start it from here and nxt time SR should be together...

u thanked all of us for supporting u through out this ff but i wanna thank u for giving us such a beautiful ff that with every update we craved for more and more...u took us to a beautiful SR JOURNEY...

will miss this ff alottt...

p.s-now we have ur ss but plzz do not separate sr in that..do do jhatke bardaasht nhi honge..😛

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huma khan

@humafaiiry

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#748

Oh ma God! I jst cant expres in words hw beautifuly it was writen! Sr unike ending. . . . . Dey r miles apart stil dey r so near to each other! SR bond was n is a unike bondng, 1 cannot put it in words! I jst luv da concept f ur story! U hve done ful justice to each n every character! 👏 A standng avotion 4 dis amazng ff! 👏 I want to apoligyz 4 nt cmentng, as i was havng tests! bt i read ol ur parts in 1 go. . . .n ma lyk buton s nt workng 😆 So dats y i m unable to lyk it!But in short it was a super duper amazng ff! ❤️

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sajni786

@sajni786

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#749

DJ...

I will only sum up ur FF with these few words from the movie "Kisna" which summed up Sid and Riddhimma...in ur FF as well as DMG... U portrayed the poignant SR...the unbreakable bond they had in the most apt n beautiful way ever...Sadly tho...the writers of DMG failed to bring out this beauty of SR...*sigh*

"Kabhi-kabhi hum ek doosre ko khokar bhi toh pyar ko ooncha darja dete hain... Judaa rehkar pyar ki oonchaaiyon ko praapt karte hain. Har pyar milan to nahin. Judaai bhi toh ek pyar hai...!!!!!!!!!" 😳

Edited by sajni786 - 13 years ago