SRFF DMG3-Phir bhi saath hai hum Epilogue Pg 124

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Thank you all so much for your immense encouragement for my first FF. I started it somewhere in December 2010 and now it is on the 86th part. This is the third thread to the FF. I think I have stretched the FF beyond control and hence now starts the wrap up of this FF. The previous thread has 130 odd pages Hence starting a new thread where I shall post the upcoming parts.

The Link to the previous thread which contain Part 1 to 53 is

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/37479451

The Link to the previous thread which contain Part 54 to 85 is


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1614852/sr-ff-dmg3-phir-bhi-saath-hai-hum-part-85-page-133


To whom have not read before -

This is my first attempt on writing an FF So please do let me know your feedback.

I would like to thank Monty She got me thinking to write one and Also to Shruti and Sudha who thought it may be an ok idea as they kind of know what the end would be like. Thank you all for encouraging me.

You can also visit my blog to post comments there in case you feel more comfortable commenting there https://whatdjthinks.blogspot.com/


Any feedback & constructive criticism welcomed


This is a leap of 10 years from where DMG was left. This shall contain all characters

Index

Part 86 - Page 1
Part 87 - Page 6
Part 88 - Page 9
Part 89 - Page 13
Part 90 - Page 18
Part 91 - Page 22
Part 92 - Page 30

Part 92 - Page 33 - English Translations ( courtesy Farrah)
Part 93 - Page 36
Part 93 - Page 36 - English Translations ( courtesy Neet)
Author's Note - Page 44
Part 94 - Page 47
Part 95 - Page 51
Part 95 - Page 55 - English Translations
Part 96 - Page 56
Part 97 - Page 60
Part 98 - Page 67
Part 99 - Page 72
Part 100 - Page 75
Part 101 - Page 78
Part 102 - Page 81
Part 103 - Page 83
Part 104 - Page 85
Part 105 - Page 88
Part 106 - Page 89
Part 107 - Page 94
Part 108 - Page 101
Part 109 - Page 110
Part 110 - Page 115
Epilogue - Page 124


Part 86

The bell rang and instantly Rohan was at the door to greet the visitor His favorite - Sid

He called out in sweet voice Sid!!!

Sid felt his heart would burst of love All his anxiety to meet Massi washed away the very moment he heard Rohan's voice

The minute Massi opened the door Rohan ran into Sid's arms

Sid felt he had the entire world with him Rohan presence seemed to the peace back into his life

They moved in and settled down Rohan did not let Sid be alone for a moment They both needed each other and they both recognized it well

All three had dinner and Massi took Rohan to put him to sleep

Sid sat by Rohan's bedside till Rohan fell asleep Massi slowly eased Rohan's head off her lap and was about to leave when Sid opened the conversation

Sid: Massi Aap se kuch baat karni thi

Maasi: Rohan ke baare mein

Sid: Nahi ...

Maasi: Phir?

Sid: Chaliye bahaar chalte hai

They moved to the kitchen Massi cleared the kitchen while Sid filled her in about Riddhima Massi listened to him carefully as she worked her way around

Finally she settled down on the table when Sid put out his question to her 'kya yeh theek hoga ki hum Riddhima ko Rohan ke baare mein bataye ...'

Maasi: Par pata ke kya hasil karna chahate ho tum ...

Sid: Main manta hoon ki usse bahoot dukh hoga lekin ...usse saachai aur chupnana theek nahi hoga aur ...

Maasi: Aur ?

Sid: Kahi main Rohan mein Riddhima ke liye umeed dekh raha hoon

Maasi: Yane ?

Sid: Riddhima ek Bahoot achi insaan hai ...maana ki bahoot cheesey huyi hai hum sab logo ke beech lekin usme uski koi galati nahi thi ...usne bahoot dukh dekhe hai bahoot akeli hai woh aur Rohan uska yeh akela dur kar sakta hai Aur Rohan ko bhi sab jyaada ek maa ki zaroorat hai aur Riddhima uski massi hai aur maasi maa jaise hi hoti hai aur Riddhima ek bahoot achi maa sabit hogi ...aur yeh bhi sochiye ki agar sab kuch theek hota toh Shilpa ki bhi pehli choice Riddhima hoti

Maasi: Pata nahi ...par mujhe hamesha aise hi laga ki Shilpa hamesha yehi chahati ki tum Rohan ki parvarish karo '''..par agar tumhe aise lagta hai toh theek hi hoga ''..tum dono Riddhima aur Shilpa ko achi tarah jaante the '''.. aur Rohan ke baare mein tum kabhi koi galat faisala nahi looge '' Par kya Riddhima Rohan ko apna sakegi '' aur yeh bhi hum sochana chahiye ki Riddhima se aaj bhi ek aur insaan juda hai '''. armaan

Sid: Wohi chinta mujhe bhi sata rahi hai '''

Maasi: Ek baat toh hai ''' mujhe nahi lagta ki jiss armaan ne Shilpa ka saach Riddhima se itne saal chupaya woh Rohan ko accept kar payega ''''

Sid: Maasi armaan ne jo kuch bhi kiya ''' pata nahi kyu '''.lekin woh ek achaa insaan hai '' uska Riddhima ko saach na batane ki koi wajah zaroor hogi ''..

Maasi: Wajah jo kuch bhi ho ''.par dus saal bahoot lamba waqt hota hai '''. Aur kya usse ek baar bhi nahi laga ki Riddhima ko apne behen ke baare mein bataye '''. Main yeh baat nahi maan sakti hi inn poore dus saalo mein usse ek bhi mauka nahi mila '''.. aur agar mauka nahi milta toh mauke banaye jaate hai '''.. Mujhe nahi lagta ki armaan Rohan ko apna payega ''' Aur Riddhima '''jitna maine sunna hai ''.. uski zindagi sirf armaan ke irdh girdh ghoomti hai ''.. mujhe nahi lagta ki woh armaan ke khilaaf jaa kar Rohan ki zimedari uthayegi ''. Aur uthani bhi nahi chahiye '''.. Chalo ek baar maan lete hai ki woh maan jaati hai ''. Aur hum usse Rohan ki zimedaari saup dete hai '''.. aur agar kal iss par se Riddhima aur armaan mein mann muthav hua toh Rohan par uska bahoot bura asar padega'''.. Usse kabhi na kabhi aisa zaroor lagega ki humare liye woh sirf ek bhoj tha aur isiliye humne aisa faisala liya ''''

Sid: Maasi ''' Rohan bhoj nahi hai mere liye ''.. main sirf uski bhalayi chahata hoon '''.aur Riddhima ki khushi bhi ''.

Maasi: Maloom hai Siddhant par iss par sochne ke baad mujhe aisa lagta hai ki hum yeh faisla bavanao mein beh kar le rahe hai ''' kahi na kahi '.. hum apne aap ko Riddhima ko apne behen se door rakhna ka doshi maan rahe hai aur shayaad uss rishtey ki kami hum usse Rohan saup kar poori kar rahe hai '' tum samaj rahe ho na main kya keh rahi hoon

Sid: Shayaad aap theek keh rahi hai ''.. shayaad mera usse ab kuch na batane ka faisla hi sahi tha '. Aaj agar main usse Rohan ke baare mein pata bhi deta hoon aur woh usse apna bhi leti hai phir bhi Rohan woh insaan hoga jo Riddhima ko hamesha yaad dilata rahega ki usne zindagi mein kya khoya hai ''''

Maasi: Aur hum Riddhima ko kya jawab denge agar woh yeh poochti hai ki Shilpa ne ya hum dono ne usse yeh baat kyu chupayi ''

Sid: Hmmm hum usse yeh bhi nahi keh sakte ki maine armaan ko bahoot pehle yeh sab baate pata di thi '''' aisa kiya toh Riddhima aur armaan ke rishtey pe bahoot bura asar padega ''..

Maasi: Hmmm

Sid: Humara chup rehna hi achaa hai '''. Yeh raaz raaz hi rahe toh acha hai '''..

Maasi: Hmmm yeh hi sahi hai ''''

Sid: Thank you Massi ''..

Maasi: Ab yeh sab sochna chodo ''.. chalo ab sow jao tum bahoot thake lag rahe ho ''.

Sid: Hmmm Goodnight!!!

Maasi: Goodnight!!!

'Papa'

Juhi shook Riddhima to get hold of herself. 'Kya hua Dr Shashank ko?'

Riddhima: Mumma ne call kiya tha ''' Papa ki tabiyat bahoot kharaab hai ''.. woh unhe Sanjeevani leke jaa rahi hai ''' Juhi ''.

Juhi: Easy Riddhima ''' don't panic ''. Tum Aunty ko samjha rahi thi na toh ab tum aise kaise panic kar sakti ho '''. You have to be strong ''' don't worry ''.. chalo jaldi se tayaar ho javo ''. Hum abhi nikhalte hai ''..

Both quickly got ready. Riddhima opened her cupboard quickly grabbed her bag and stuffed some clothes into it. She knew she would not be able to return home for some days. Her parents needed her.

Padma had checked on him at regular intervals. Every time her concern rose She had thought of calling Riddhima but refrained as it was very late and did not to alarm her She had thought of waiting for day break. At around two in the morning things seemed to have gone out of hand Padma had called for the ambulance and had Shashank admitted to Sanjeevani While waiting for the ambulance she called Riddhima to inform her of Shashank's health.


Link to the next part


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/43173544

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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG😲😲

I was totally shocked when i saw your pm Last Update😡😡

congrats 4 ur third thread ...😃

awesome update buddy...😃

i feel so bad finally sid and maasi had decided not to disclosed the truth abt shilpa and rohan to riddhima😭😭😭

i hate that monster Hormaan just becoz him riddhima doesn't know abt her relation with shilpa😡😡

And you buddy do continue pm me when u updated it 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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First of all you desrve a whack for scaring us all like that!! 😡 "last pm" i believe! 😡

hmmmff second of all you are mad to even think we are bored of ur FF It's definitely one of the most interesting intriguing realistic SR FF that's taking rounds! Undoubtedly one of my favorites! What makes it stand out from the rest in the detailing and explanation of each and every scene! You haven't left anything unsaid and have covered every nook and corner! Seriously it's like going through a research manual of DMG!! And i bet no one would have done the homework like you do before updating each and every part!! It's a PLEASURE reading it and i really dunno what im gonna do when you wrap this up! 😕 A part of me is sooo eager to know what's gonna happen next but then that would mean it's strolling towards it's end...😕
YOU MUST MUST MUST write a new SR FF once u wrap up this...!!!


P.s PM ME! 😛
Edited by miss_cullen - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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pm me when you update it
Edited by -Prithi- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Shocked...This is the emotion i felt when i saw ur pm, Last update
I was thinking how come u intent to end this wonderful FF

Congrats on the third thread👍🏼

I still think Sid should tell the truth to Riddhima

And do pm me😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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DJ.. Ur acting lyk a typical DK.. Wat does d title of d PM mean? 😡

Okay so u wanted us to mention dis 2 get d privilege of reading ur FF.. Here you go.. "PM me"

Now stop thinking dat ppl r fed up of reading.. 😡

Congrats on d new thread.. N don make Sid so nice dat hez sayin 🤢maan is a nice person! 🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Bro 1st of all Congrats on the third thread 🤗

OMG ur updating so fast 😆
I hav 3 updates to comment on :P

Will comment on all the parts together after my exams till den res 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Reserved and yes, pls do PM ME whenever you update!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey DJ thanx for the PM
both the updates no. 85 and 86 were lovely👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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brooo😡


i hate ur last pm😡


how dare u ask tht😡


i order u toPM MEfor an update😉


cumng to d part, i m so releived tht Sid is nt d one, thank god😊


cont soon n u betterPM ME😈

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