Hi Sohil, interesting update but very small. I think the man clad in black is prithvi. pl. continue .
Originally posted by: khwaish.e.arsh
hey sohil !! Hey Khwahish๐
very nice update ...
intrestng first part ... thanks a lot
so damzie is kidnapped nd illa has a secret ...ooohhh i like it already ... i am glad you do
so is d kidnapper Pri by any chance ?...i like the grey shades u give him ...i'm really hoping he is not all goody goody types ๐ณ it's good to be bad๐
so much suspense ...
continue SOON ...u know agar story mein suspense ho toh readers ko zyada w8 karana paap hota hai ๐๐ aur w8 karane se suspense badhta hai๐๐
w8ng very eagerly fr nxt update ..nd pm me wen u do will pm asa i update
--Khwahish๐--Sohil๐
Originally posted by: akansha_lnmdj
continue soon.. will try mah best to...i think dat is prithvi in black..it is for you to guess
Originally posted by: shalini_s
Sohil.. finally u've updated this FF.. Damini kidnapped on her wedding day.. wonderful start.. do write more..
Sohil...
veryyy veryy interesting.. but wats this soo short n u hav left us dangling.. hope u hav plans to update soon.. me liking the suspense n all but wud wnt to know wat hpns next asap... sooo hoping u update very soon ๐
Originally posted by: Preeths609
Wow nice start. It looks interestin. Lookin forward for de next part
Originally posted by: ...Tich...
whoa!!! nice part sohil.. kidnapping!!!! i liked the start..
update soon..
Originally posted by: crazypridaholic
Sohil...
Wow LOVED dis part...!!! Whoa air thick with tension m liking dis suspense๐ณ...!!! Cntd soon n plzz dnt make us wait for so long...!!!-Nitika
Originally posted by: deereyedgal504
Hey Sohil Bhaiyaa.. Hey ๐
Finally u updated...intersting start...Damini getting kidnapped ๐ฒ evil me...muhahahaha๐Waiting for the next part...and thanks for the PM. will update asap๐Snehal
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