FF: Forbidden Fruit: Ch2 Complete Pg 7 24-5-12 - Page 6

Oh no! Such a small part.
Anyways loved it to the core.
Prithvi - the captor's misery was depicted very well. I'm sure his guest of honor will create troubles to increase his misery.

Continue soon...

Originally posted by: ...Tich...

Oh no! Such a small part.
Anyways loved it to the core.
Prithvi - the captor's misery was depicted very well. I'm sure his guest of honor will create troubles to increase his misery.

Continue soon...

Originally posted by: Sohil_Gupta

Well its just an instance...the complete part would be much longer i guess...
i am really glad you liked it...
why so?? you being evil in wanting to see prithvi in misery...Hear...Prithvi Fans hear...here's one out for a danda (Over to you ladies😉😆)

I will try my best

Hahaha yahan mujhse bada prithvi fan koi nahin hai. Waise if damzie doesn't create troubles toh love-story mein tadka kaise lagega? Seedhi saadhi hai toh maza kya hai 😉

nice and small part Sohil.. waiting for the next one.. hope its long enough to give us the captor and the captee's interactions..

Hi Sohil, after long time u updated that also very small updation. but its very interesting, liked it. pl continue soon

Pehle toh itne dino ke baad update kiya aur upar se itna chhota...u just strated and u ended it so fast😔

Hey Sohil !!

Sohil...

Loved d update even though it was small...😛 very well written👏...!!! N Guest of honour smirking like dat...look at d guts...😛 Now plzzz cntd d story ASAP...warna u knoe ppl already started giving u warnings here...N I dnt want Writer himself being kidnapped by angry fans...😆😆 Trust me ppl here r capable of dat...😉😆




-Nitika

NOTE: As much as i love enjoying the status of being the most lazy updater on the forum i will definitely want this thread and story to be locked up like this...and so 8th feb is the final day from when i will start updating regurarly after all the rush in my life..those interested in NOT reading it any more may let me know

Originally posted by: Sohil_Gupta

NOTE: As much as i love enjoying the status of being the most lazy updater on the forum i will definitely want this thread and story to be locked up like this...and so 8th feb is the final day from when i will start updating regurarly after all the rush in my life..those interested in NOT reading it any more may let me know

Ahhh !!

Finally ur back * Fingers Crossed*

of Course we wanna read d story yaar ...yeh bhi koi poochne ki baat hai ...w8ng very very eagerly for the story to unfold



Khwahish😊
😊