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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: piya-

thanks 4 d pm frnd bt tell me mujhe pehle ke updates par pm kyun nahi kiya... m sad 😭😭😭 

 
neways... next time se don't forget to pm meπŸ˜›
 
awesome update
 
love- piya


Sorry gal...won't forget to pm you next time πŸ˜‰...!! Glad you like the update! πŸ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago

Please leave your comments and let me know your views!! Sorry for any mistakes!!

Part 15

(Juhu Beach)

 

Geet: Theek hai friends...chalo beach pe walk karte hain...

 

Both of them remove their shoes and place them in one corner. They start walking on the coast line...waves are drifting in and out of their feet!

 

Maan: Hmm...tumme nature bahot acha lagta hai na?

Geet: haan..yaha ka khula mausam aur itni tandi tandi hawa...mann ko sukhoon milta hai! Aap ko pasand hai?

Maan: Nature aur mera ek purana rishta hai...jab main khudh ko akela mehsoos karta hoon tho main jungle main jahke wahi thode din guzaar leta hun...u know tent main! Aur trekking mera bachpan se shauk hai...

Geet: Tent main aap akele rehte honge per yaha ka khula mausam kit ho koi aur hi baat hai...aur maine bhi bahot trekking ki hain...

Maan: Tumne trekking ki hai? (He looked at her with a confused expression)

Geet: (Oh geet...tune yeh kya bata diya? Oh chaddo...babaji bacha lena) Haan...woh hoshiarpur main main aur bhai kehton main bahot chale hain...

Maan: (Geet tum bhi na...she thinks walking in fields is trekking) (He just was admiring her innocence) Hmm...trekking!

Geet: Waise aap mujhe ek baat bataiye..

Maan: Hmm...

Geet: Aap ladkiyon se itni nafrat kyun karte hain? I mean maine aap ko office main dekha hain...aur aap toh ladkiyon 10 feet ke distance main rakte hain!

Maan: Nahi aise koi baat nahi hain...bas koi achi ladki nahi milli...

Geet: Aap yeh kehrahe hain...ki aap ko koi bhi achi nahi lagi?

Maan: (Samne toh kadi hain) Geet main Maan Singh Khurana hoon...aur jo mujhe pasand ayegi woh sab se achi hogi!

Geet: Jab pasand ajaye...tab milwa zaroor dena!

Maan: Par tum ye sab pooch kyun rahi ho?

Geet: Sach batayon toh mujhe bahot ajeeb laga jab apne friends hone ka...

Maan: Oh...kyun main tumare saath dosti nahi kar sakta?

Geet: Maine aisa kab kaha?

Maan: Tumne aisa nahi kaha per tumara matlab yahi tha...

Geet: Par..

Maan: Mujhe kuch nahi sunna geet...iske liye tume sazaa zaroor milegi!

Geet: (Suddenly scared she asks..) Sazaa?

Maan: Haan...ankein band karo..

Geet: Par sir...

Maan: Geet...main tumara boss hun toh jitna kaha hain utna karo...

Geet: Par abhi toh dosti hui..

Maan: Aur abhi toh tumne mujhe phirse boss banaya...ab ankein band karo!

Geet: Murmers ' Yeh kaisa zulum hai babaji...(She closes her eyes)

 

Maan walks in the water and collects some water between his two hands. He goes to geet and pours all the water near her neck so the cold water trickles down her top, wetting her salwar, making it stick to her body like glue making her dress see-through and making her curves look more prominent.

 

Geet: (Shivers and opens her eyes) Ye aap ne kya kiya?

Maan: Maine kya kiya? (Starts walking backwards)

Geet: Main aap ko nahi chodungi! (She starts to run behind maan and splashes water on him) yeh lo aur yeh bhi...Geet Handa se panga liya! Ab main aap ko maza chakha thi hun!

Maan: Geet...Geet...rukho...Geet! (Geet is coming closer and closer)

 

As maan is walking backwards he looses his balance and pulls geet along with him. They both fall on the sand. The waves are have wet their clothes so they are drenched. Geet and Maan have an eye-lock. MAHIII...Maan tucks some hair behind Geet's ear. They are both lost in each other. Maan can feel the softness of geets body as she is drenched. Geet is the first one to come to her senses and she trys to get up but ends up falling on top of him again and her dupatta is stuck beneath him. He sees her struggling and smirks..

 

Maan: Ek minute Geet...(He makes her lie next to him and gets up and gets her up)

Geet yeh dehko tumne kya kardiya...hum purre bheeg chuke hain...

Geet: Yeh sab aapki wajah se huwa hain! Agar aap sharat na karte toh hamari yeh halat na hoti!

Maan: Ab bato...kya kare?

Geet: Aapne yeh hal kiya hai na...toh aap sochiye! Aur muhje bhook lagi hain...

Maan: Geet tum kitna kahti ho? I mean itna heavy lunch kiya hai aur yaha ahke gol gappe bhi khaein...

Geet: Kya khaein? Aap ne mujhe kaha khanediya?

Maan: Ab chalo hotel chalte hain...waise bhi no one will let us in any restaurants since we are drenched..

Geet: pata hain...per muhje hotel kahan jana hai...chalo waha ek waada pao ka stall hai...aur is masaum main waada pao khane kha koi aur hi maaza hai...

Maan: No ways...bahot sunli tumari baatein ab tum meri suno...

Geet: Mujhe kuch nahi sunna...main jarahi hun! (She starts walking)

Maan: Geet rukho warna...

Geet: Main jarahi hun waada pao khane...agar aap ko ana hai toh aye!

Maan: (Ab tum dekho Miss. Hoshiyarpur Express ki main kya karta hun!)

He walks over to her and picks her up in one swift movement.


Geet: Aap yeh kya kar rahe hain?

Maan: Maine tume kaha tha ki mat jawo warna...ab bugto!

Geet: Mujhe chodiye...

Maan: Chup bilkul Chup...tum ye mat bhool na kit um meri bhao main ho toh mujhe ek minute bhi bahi lagegi tumhe girnane main aur muhje theek se pado warna khudh gir jao gi!

 

Precap: Romance in hotel

Part 16

Edited by -maankimishty- - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update awww  water fight was sweet :D
nice Precap cant wait for the next one update fasttt :D
Edited by -sofiya- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
:) so romance started hmmm  
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update::
Love maans sazaa...so cute
Aww ther water fight was sweet
Lovely precap
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow amazing sazaa
wonderful oart
love it
ty 4 pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part plz update regularly i mean on daily basis
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Posted: 12 years ago
aakhirkar romance chalu ho hi gaya
 
nice part
 
love- piya
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice...

loved their romantic moment at the beach...

continue soon...

thnx for Pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079

nice part plz update regularly i mean on daily basis


I will try to but my exams are still on...they will finish next week and then you can have a regular update!!