Thnks to writers,Geet is nw a one sided love story

When the new writers took over,initially they brought a fresh feel with "Maaneet Romance flourishing" only to realise they wud be making the most " stupendous" blunders which wud ensure downfall of Geet.

The present writers must be applauded for "Amritsar track" which is indeed brilliant,their work in creating "Jugnu Mama" is also appreciable...Lucky and Jugnu mama wud be missed for sure and amritsar track too.

But Amritsar track cud have been better and cud have easily extended for a longer period had the writers taken into consideration the "Sensitivity of Maaneet relationship" and more importantly " what fans feel for them and vision of fans for Maaneet aka Drashmeet."

If you check the latest TRP's of Geet then you wud realise "Geet" has actually not done well and infact has done worst performance ever and despite a fantastic track on.

Blunders which are unacceptable to fans and loyal viewers and which has ensured "Geet" will have a tough time ahead for sure in winning back fans and TRP's.

The mistakes which writers made and mistakes which can still be rectified if the writers take a note of it or someone informs them to consider and work on it:

1) Geet forgiving Dev:

Probably the biggest factor in many actually leaving the show and add to it the frustation of watching Arjun and Annie earlier and Geet's reaction followed by Maan calling her "Begairat".

Where makers went wrong was "Justification"...given for Geet forgiving Dev...which was stupid and simply unacceptable.

a) Makers never showed "Dev's intent to pay back for his deeds...merely asking for an apology for a crime bigger than rape and Geet simply forgiving burst the bubble.

Many related to "Geet's strong character and since the theme of episode is on real life social issue her character got appeal and was related and connected to which was destroyed in one scene "where Geet plays holi with Dev"

Agreed it was a part of build up to Amritsar track...

But how cud Nissar and others forget the fact that fans wont accept this "scene" leading to future track getting rejected badly..

What was lacking was justification:

Atleast if makers before all this had shown "Dev" trying to find out evidences to push himself for a trial...and make sure he faces law..it wud have proved his intention to face law and pay back for his crime...

Had Dev been shown informing "Geet" that he has himself found evidences and soon he wud be submitting those so that he and NainT face trial and pay for their crime wud have won hearts of fans as well..making them relate to

"geet forgiving Dev"

But certainly not allowing him to touch her again and certainly not show the kind of comfort she is been made to show with Dev in Amritsar track.

To all those and many and plenty in numbers..just disconnected from geet's character right from the holi sequence and what followed next was even more unfortunate when Maan despite being right was made look " guilty" and Geet throwing attiude and not even showing signs of regret...

All the blunders by writers which not only ensured that " A fantastic Amritsar Track " wud not be accepted to its potential but also faded and ruined the fantastic work which previous creatives did with "Maaneet's Romantic Image.."


Well this mistake can be still rectified if makers quickly show a scene in coming week where "Dev" informs Maan and geet about his determination,will and intent to face law, becoz for him along with facing law it was important that geet forgives him..

Ideally shud have been shown before Geet forgives Dev but then even now it wud do and calm down fans who are now away from series Geet...

Few more blunders coming ahead and which can be rectified...coming next..

Please note:

4) Maan's character assacinated too written on page 2...

 

I know your heart is crying like me. Feeling so help less.  But the CVs are hell bent in destroying their story.  They have bcom stubborn, that audience should watch what they show.  Now after seeing so called SR, my feeling is what is the use of eye locks when we dont get see simple kiss also.  I will not be surprised, if loyal audience start to loose their interest in them. So no point in raising our voice. Its a waste of energy. They are dumb and blind..

Though you mentioned the character assassination of Geet (very well done there), I feel you should also have mentioned the character assassination of Maan ever since the Amritsar track started.  There once was an aura about Maan Singh Khurana but that doesn't exist anymore.  Even though Maan has forgiven Dev for Geet's sake, I'm actually not comfortable even with their relationship.  A heart-to-heart talk between Maan and Dev was very much needed for Maan to understand that Dev is indeed guilty.  A mere lecture behind why Geet forgave him shouldn't have been all to have them go back to all brotherly love.  Even in regards to couple dynamics, Maan has just ended up becoming a joru ka gulam who puts up with all his wife's tantrums. The Maneet jodi per se no longer holds the same charm as before...plainly because they are no longer Maan and Geet but rather Gurmeet and Drashti.  The original characters of both have long been lost along with the story.

The CVs had many tracks to explore before they even needed to revisit forgiving Dev for his sins.  To think all this has happened in less than a year and Geet and Dev sharing the comfort level shown, is just not digestable.  Vicky & Sameera are tracks both the CVs had left open but decided to ignore/forget.  Sending Geet back to school would be a great track considering the social theme but instead they have Maan tell Geet that he wants to be a Papa.  I no longer relate this show to the Geet I used to watch...it has now become just any other show.

 

What was missing and where "SR" went wrong was where the director ended it when ideally it shud have begun from that point..

"Clearly the hugs and atleast few romantic touches on face atleast..few eyelocks...while the process was on..everything which we as fans know "maaneet' aka "Drashmeet" are comfortable doing and have been doing were missing and that is why fans were left disappointed becoz they knew what was possible to show and hence disappointment was the regret that it cud have been shown and not on what was shown.

Ideal scenes in "Maaneet Suhaagraat"...

a) The moment Maan unties and loosesns "Geet's knot on the kameez " Geet pushes herself back towards Maan and raises both her arms in the air and dissolving herself in Maan,while Geet raises her arms and holds Maan back on his neck...

b) Maan pulls Geet closer by holding her tight and bringing hercloser to him with Geet locked in arms of Maan ...

c) Geet looking side ways back and with emotions of love oozing out both in eyes of Maan and Geet both look deep in the eyes of each other...

d) Followed by a camera trick where "Maan" actually keeps his lips on Geet's chin but if you shoot from an angle focussing the camera on Geet's face one wud feel it is a lip lock,which was certainly possible to show...

e) After this camera trick Geet loosens herself and and Maan kisses from the side on eyes of Geet and rest his hand moving upwards...left to imagination of fans where,just giving "geet's expression to make fans visualise what is on..why to show it onscreen...

f) Geet turning back and hugging Maan and so does Maan hugging Geet and a passionate hug where they are holding each other so tight that even air cant pass between them..

g) Geet kissing Maan on his ears or cheeks show it where ever and Maan's expressions...

h) Both coming out of the hug and as usual what can be shown...Geet kissing Maan's forehead...followed by she kissing Maan's eyes and Maan looking deep in eyes of Geet asking for more and more love from Geet...

i) Geet trying to lie down and Maan holds her hand and pulls her back as yet another passionate hug happens and Maan this time coming down and giving just one kiss deep in Geet's neck and then coming up and this time it is Geet looking deep in eyes of Maan and asking for moore and more love...

j) Maan and Geet coming close to each other holding each other's face and breath high and faces and lips at kissing needle distance...

k) Maahi in the background as Maan and Geet hug each other yetagain and this time Maan holding Geet and lieing her down with him on her side ways..first trying to clear her hair on face...and an eyelock as both admire each other...

m) Maan kissing Geet's forehead and Geet's eyes expressing passion and followed by Maan keeping his head deep in Geet's neck and Geet hugging and holding Maan tight on his back...

n) Maan rolling back and Geet on top of Maan and then Maan again rolling and this time Maan on top of Geet...

Maan moving down and Geet's head side ways as Geet spreads her arms and Maan on top of her..screen fades,job done...the max u cud show ...

Maan rubbing her nose with geet's nose as both smile and then ...a scene where hand or rather palm gets locked becoz nothing more ca be shown...and we relate to understand that...

o) After the "consummation" a scene where Geet is sleeping on Maan's cheast hugging him sideways..on top of him...

It was no wonder that "SR" was ruined becoz under the present team of writers and the director it was always going to be ruined,simply becoz they do not have the understanding and idea of how comfortable Drashti and Gurmeet are and more than that how comfortable they were before,making many feel scene before proposal of Maaneet were far more passionate becoz of the way they were shot and were still passionate till the time Maan Singh was there directing the series Geet.

Why Maaneet SR was a flop rather bigger flop than Ram Gopal Verma ki 'AAg" and Farha Khan's "Tees Maar Khan."

1) The director and writers clearly lacked build up where all of a sudden just for the sake of showing and rather rushing "SR" in mahaepisode they planned an "SR" which lacked build up and what was more funnier was "Maan asking for it"..as said earlier in my article where I am giving blunder points maade by writers and why Maaneet effect is loosing its shine under the present writers.

"Present writers are making every single Maaneet high point look a formality and Suhaagraat was made one formality after Maan was made to ask for it rather than both Maan and Geet feeling for it which is a true" Maaneet Character".

Maaneet dont have to ask for "SR" they have to feel it and which was only possible after the letter reading and reunion scene,but as claimed earlier and now proved..till the time present writers wud be there every Maaneet moment will be made look a formality with no proper build up and no proper execution from the director...

What was shown?

The director ended the shot where actual "SR' shud have begun and he ensured that fans wont just crib but bash and insult and give every single reaction which will make sure the creatives will feel insulted.

Well the creatives themselves made sure they will get insulted...

If you look at past scenes ideally these were the shots and scenes which cud have been easily shown in "Maaneet Suhaagraat" had the director shown the will to stretch "Maaneet Suhaagraat" more than the other shit and crap which was served to fool fans.

What makers showed in "SR" was school going baby romance and add to it what was shown yesterday,one never felt 'SR" happened as Geet was sleeping on the otherside and scene began with Maan staring at her...

"One never felt "SR" happened becoz director never made fans feel it and writers showed and wrote it as a formality and director madde sure it looked like a formality..."

Hope the makers after reading this article and understanding what went wrong in "SR" work upon it or someone informs them to work upon it and show it again,becoz the mahaepisode which had "SR" in it cud have easily calmed down all fans who were disppointed and also cud have made sure that many new and old viewers joined the show and followed it..

It actually ended ensuring many wud either stop watching the show after feeling disappointed or wud have no more hopes left with the show,resulting in further decline and downfall of the most romantic pair on this planet and the most loved series..

"Maaneet" and "Series Geet" left in its worst possible state due to major major creative incompetant work.

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