A Mistake Of Our Life - Mayur SS.. updt pg36

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monalisa1234

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Posted: 14 years ago

#61

plzz radhika,do continue with ur ss..its really good one..

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Sania

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Posted: 14 years ago

#62

nice concept Radhika!

loved all the updates

this story is realy interesting

would love to read further parts

plzzz continue soon

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Babaji Ka Thullu

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Hey frnds radhi here... well here is the nxt part..
n one more thing m going rajasthan for 15 days
so will nt be able to updt this SS for 15 days sry
4 dat... here is the part hope u like it...

PART 4

Mayur were in car nw...mayank was driving car n Nupur
was sitting beside him...she was crying...mayank again
n again looked at her...
Mayank:Nupur me tume ghar pe drop kar deta hu...
bt Nupur was lost in her thoughts...
Mayank(in mind):kya beet rahi hogi is pe...??? lagta haii muje
ab Nupur se humari shaadi ke bareme baat karni hi hogi..
mayank silently drove car...they reached to Nupur's house..
n mayank stoped the car.. Nupur looked up n saw her
home...n looked at mayank...
Nupur:mayank tum muje ghar kyu laaye ho... hume office jaana
haii waha bahut kaam haiii...
Mayank:andar chalo...
Nupur saw his face n didnt argue.. as she knew he is in
nt mood to argue...mayank came out of care n shut the
door n went to her side.. n opened the door of her side
...Nupur silently came out n mayank shut the door...
watch man opened the main gate seeing Nupur n wondering
she was nt at home...strange... both silently walked in.
they entered n saw benji was talking on phone...
Nupur was scared wat she said to him... benji turned
n saw them..
Benji:i will call u bbye n cut the call...
Benji:are aap log diii aap is waqt ghar pe ??? ye to chamatkar
ho gayaaa... benji laughed... n sw their faces...
n felt sumthing serious...benji went to Nupur...
Benji:di aap ki tabiyat to thik haii na kuch hua to nahi???
he checked her forhead...Nupur scared.. n mayank saw her.
Nupur:nahi benji mein thik hu...
Mayank:benji wo tumhari diii ko na sir me thoda dard ho raha
tha.. is liye meine socha ki wo drive nahi kar paayegi
to mein chhod ne chala aaya...
Benji:dii aap bhi na itna kaaam karti hoo ab aap rest karo
chalo... n mayankthnks mayank...
Mayank:thnks kaisa...
Benji:ohkk chalo ab andar...
they went to Nupur's room...
n Nupur sat on her bed... benji askd servent for juce..
Nupur:benji mein thik hu...
Benji:muje pata haiii diii is liye aap abhi ghar aayi haii..
n Nupur n mayank looked at each other...
n put his mobile on bed.. n made her drink juce...
Nupur:benji mere sir me thoda dard haiii.. abhi rest karungi
to thik ho jaaungi...
Benji:accha thik haii aap rest karo.. mein chalta hu aaj meri
class haii...
Nupur:ok bbye.. n smiled...
Benji:bbye dii bbye Mayank...
Mayank:bbye n mayank too smiled...
n benji left the room...
Nupur:mayank aaj nahi to kal benji ko pata chal hi jaayega
ki mein pregnanat hu...
Mayank:ddekho Nupur... n they heard a voice pregnant...
they turned n saw benji...
Nupur:benji... Nupur was socked she thought benji had left.
benji came in n went to them...
Benji:abhi aap ne kya bola dii aap pregnant ho????
tears were started to fell frm her eyes...
n she was scaring... n mayank was also socked n didnt
knw wat to do...
nupur:nahi benji wo.. benji..
benji went to her n sat beside her.. facing her...
n saw her scaring face... she was scaring n sweating...
Benji:mein apna mobile lene aaya tha aur meine suna aap Mayank
se keh rahi thi ki muje aaj nahi to kal pata chal hi
jaayega ki aap pregnant ho... dii ye...
Nupur couldnt met her eyes with him...
n benji understood... n totally socked to hell...
first he didnt believe on his ear...
Benji:diii aap pregnant ho???... asked in hard tone...
nupur:benji wo main.. benji ...
Benji:aap pregnant ho ya nahi...???? asked angrily..
Mayank:benji tum aise kaise baat kar rahe ho...
Benji:ek minute mayank mein dii se baat kar raha hu...
diii jawab do di...
nw Nupur totally scared... she couldnt utter a word...
Benji:jawab do diii... he raised his voice
fully... n mayank saw Nupur's condition...
Mayank:haa wo pregnant haiii...maa banne wali haii wo...
he said in angry tone... n Nupur cried even more...
Benji:kyaa???????? par kaise????? diii aap bataoo...
aap ki to shaadi nahi huyi aap pregnant kaise ho sakti
ho...
Nupur:benji wo...n was crying n crying...
Benji:god damn it benji ke aage kuch to bolo... kiska
baccha haii ye.. aap pregnant kaise huyi... kyunki
aap ki abhi tak shaaadi huyi hai...
Mayank:benji tume Nupur par kyu chilla rahe ho...
Benji:to aur kya karu Mayank dii kuch bol nahi rahi haii...
sirf ro ye jaa rahi haii...kiska baccha haii ye.???
kyu pregnant huyi ye...???kuch nahi bol rahi haii wo...
Mayank:wo mera baccha haiii benji... said without raising
his voice...benji again hell socked...
n Nupur's condition omg wt so say... totally broken..
Benji:tumhara baccha??? he asked confusingly...
Mayank:haa Nupur is pregnant of my child.. mera baccha pal
raha haiii uske andar...
n benji became angry... as he knw abt mayank's love...
Benji:matlab ki tune meri diii ke sath n held him frm his
collor... n Nupur scared.. she stood upp ..
Nupur:nahi benji isme mayank ki koi galti nahi haii...
benji meri baat suno ...
benji left his coller...
Benji:par dii mayank ne abhi bola ki ye baccha uska haii...
Nupur:haa ye baccha mayank kaa hi haii... n nw again broke...
Benji:par dii mayank to... before he could complete his
sentence..
Mayank:benji Nupur ko rest karne do tum chalo mere sath
mein tume bata ta hu...
benji was really angry... as he knw mayank loved Sneha
n nw he his father of her sister's child...
Benji left the room in anger..
Mayank:Nupur tum yaha rest karo main benji se baat karta hu..
Nupur:par mayank wo bahut gusse me haii ...
Nupur:janta hu meein uske gusse ko aur usko bhi... tum
fikar mat karo mein use baat karta hu aur wo tumse
gussa bhi nahi hoga... i promise main sab thik kar duga.
Nupur took medicine n layed on bed n crying...
mayank came out of room... n saw benji was sitting
there...
Mayank:benji...
Benji:muje sach bataao mayank... tum to Sneha se pyar karte the
na.. to fir meri dii ke sath kaise...
Mayank:benji wo sab humari galti ki wajase hua haii...
Benji:Galti???
Mayank:haa galti A Mistake Of Our Life...
jab hum london gaye the...
n told everything...
us raat nashe ki wajase Nupur ne aur meine wo galti
kardi... aur us ki wajase aaj wo pregnant haii..aur
is liye wo baccha mera haiii...
benji was hell socked...
Benji:galti kardii mayank tum to Sneha se pyar karte the na..
aur to fir kaise galti kar di tumne...
nw mayank was crying...
Mayank:mujse wo galti ho gayi benji... hum doni main se koi
ye nahi chahta tha... par humse ho gaya...
Benji:Mayank galti ho gayi... tum jante ho iska asar kitna
hoga.. meri dii par kya beete gi...tumto Sneha se shaadi
karke apni zindgi jee loge par meri dii kya karegi
mayankkk?????????
Mayank:main Nupur se shaadi karna chahta hu...
benji again socked...
Benji:mayank.. tum dii se...
Mayank:haa benji mein Nupur ko aur humare bacche ko unke
saare hakk dena chahta hu...
Benji:aur pyar ka kya mayank.. wo to tum Sneha se karte ho..
Mayank:wo muje nahi pata ki mein ye kaise kar paaungiii..
par mein Nupur aur hamare bacche ko har khushi dunga..
saare hakk.. sab kuch dunga... aur py...aur un par
koi aach nahi aane dunga...plzzz benji muje maaf kardo.
plzzz... n he folded his hands...
nw benji calemed...he n went to him n gv him warm hug..
as benji knw mayank needed it...
Benji:par mayank agar tum dii se shaadi karoge to.. Sneha
ko kya kahoge??
Mayank:abhi sirf muje Nupur or apne bacche ke bareme sochna
haii or kuch nahi...
benji was sumhow happy on hearing these...
bt then again serious..
Benji:tumne dii se baat ki...???
Mayank:nahi ki haii...or tum Sneha ke baareme use mat
batana.. main use bata dunga...
Benji:to chalo use baat karo.. kyunki mein tum dono ki
shaadi jald se jald chahta hu... taaki kisi ko bhi pata
na chale ki dii shaadi se pehle...or thik haii mein
nahi bataunga... par meri dii ko us wajase..
Mayank:aisa kuch nahi hoga... hum aaj shaam hi shaadi kar
lenge...
Benji:dii se baat karte haii...
n they went to room...n saw her crying silently...
n Nupur saw both of them...
Nupur:benji wo bas hume galti ho gayi thi ...
benji went to her n hugged her..
Benji:bas dii ab or nahi.. wo sirf ek galti thi... me us
galti se nafrat karta hu aap ko nahi...
n they broke the hug...
mayank also came to them...
Mayank:Nupur wo... Nupur mein ..Nupur mein tumse shaadi
karna chahta hu...
again Nupur socked... suddenly... bt she knw the
fact...
nupur:par mayank hum..
Mayank:Nupur hume shaadi karni hogi...ise pehle ki tum par
ya humare bacche par ungli uthe...
Nupur:mayank... n looked at benji...
Mayank:benji maan gaya haiii Nupur... n Nupur felt relief.
Benji:dii mein chahta hu ki aap dono ki shaadi ho jaaye..
Mayank:to bolo Nupur shaadi karogi mujse...
n Nupur nodded... she had to do for her child...
Benji:thik haii mein mandir me pandit ji ke paas taiyari
karvata hu... mayank tum dii ko le kar aa jana...
Nupur:par benji mein...
Benji:aap ki shaadi haii diii taiyar ho jaao...
n left the room...
Mayank:tum taiyar ho jaao mein thodi der me tume le ne aata hu.
Nupur:mayank hum kuch...
Mayank:kuch galat nahi kar rahe haii... ye sab sirf hum apne
bacche ke liye kar rahe haii... aur is shaadi ke baad
sab thik ho jayega...tum taiyar ho jaao...
n mayank left the room...
n Nupur went to washroom.. n washed her face...
n came out n wear simple red lahenga having light work..
she was being ready..
Nupur(in mind):apne bacche ke liye muje ye sab karna hoga..
uske hakk ke liye.. agar maine aisa nahi kiya to use
pita ka pyar kabhi nahi milega... use mere pyar ke sath
sath mayank ke pyar ki bhi jarurat haii.. aur mein mayank
ko aur uske bacche ko ek dusre se dur nahi rakh sakti..
ye shaadi karni hogi.. jitna mera hakk haii is bacche
par utna hi mayank ka haii... aur agar wo ye hakk mang
raha haii to muje dena hoga... aur mein bhi to yahi
chahti hu ki mere bacche ko uske saare hakk mile...
n heard sound of door... n saw mayank there...
mayank looked at her ...n saw a beauty in red...
for sum moments mayank memorised.. bt soon come to
his sense...Nupur saw him in benji's simple kurta...
both came out silently.. n seated in car...
n soon reached to mandir.. n saw pandit ji n benji was
waiting for them... both were silent... both sat n
ritual started... pandit ji chatting mantras...
Pandit ji:ek dusre ko jay mala pehna do...
n they did dess...
then they sad n benji did gadhbandhan n
Pandit ji:ab phero ke liye khade o jaiye...
both stood.. up... n mayank held her hand.. n they took
seven pheras n in last Phera mayank was behind Nupur..
n phera's over...
Pandit ji:ab dulhan ki mang me sindoor bhar de...
n mayank took sindoor.. n removed her tiny mang tika
n filled her mang n she closed her eyes... n felt the
moment...
Pandit ji:ab dulhan ko mangalsutra pehnaiye...
n mayank tied mangalsutra around her neck...
Pandit ji:aaj se aap pati patni huye... aap dono saat jamno
ke bandhan me bandh gaye ho.. aaj se aap logo ka jeena
marna hasna roka.. sab rk dusre ke sath hoga...
ek dusre ka sukh dukh sab mera tumhara nahi humara hoga..
aur beta apni patni ka khayal rakhana...
Mayank:ji pandit ji...
Pandit ji:bhagwan ji se aashirwad le lo...
n nw Nupur had tears... both went infront of
god's idol n both folded their hands. n closed thier
eyes...
Mayank(in mind):god plzzz help me aap jante ho ki abhi me
kitni muskil me hoo plzz... mein sab sambhal saku
itni shakti dena muje.. mein apni patni aur apne
bacche ki hifasat kar saku plzz god...
Nupur(in mind):bhagwan jii plzzz muje shakti dena apne pati
ke sath reh aku apne bacche ko sambhal saku aur uske ghar
ko jo ab mera haii.. plzz bhgwan jjiii... muje sakti
dena...
both opened theier eyes.. turned n saw benji was in tears.
Nupur went to him n both hugged...
as they were jaan of each other... both cried a lot...
both broke the hug...
Benji:dii aap mat jaao na.. mayank humare ghar rahega kyu mayank??
Mayank:benji ro kyu rahe ho?? jab mann kare Nupur se milne
ka mann kare aa jana...
Benji:par mein diii ke bagair nahi reh sakta...
Mayank:to mere ghar par aa jaao... dahej me...
Nupur lightly glar at mayank...
Nupur:ab aise kya dekh rahi ho?? tum dahej nahi laayi to
dahej mang raha hu...
Benji:meri dii to tume de di...
Mayank:thnks benji warna pehli baar lyf me mein tumse' dar gaya
tha ki agar tumne shaadi ke liye haa nahi kiya to...
bt finally u said yes...
Benji:abhi aap logo ke bacche ke liye muje ye karna hi tha..
every1 bacame serious.,...
n benji n Nupur again cried...
Mayank:benji ab hume jaane do agar hum yahi rahenge to Nupur
ro ti rahegi aur uske liye rona thik nahi hai..
Benji:yahh i knw bbye dii n will miss u,...
again they hugged... n broke the hug..
Nupur:i will miss u too...
Benji:mayank dii ka...
Mayank:khayal rakhunga.. warna tu muje maar dalega...
both smiled...
n Mayur sat in car... n left for mayank's home..
Nupur:mayank wo hum ghar par...
Nupur:tum fikar matkaro wo main sambhal lunga...
they reached home... n mayank's mom shilpa opened the
door...
n sockeddd

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jiya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#64

nice update Radhika...

what I mostly like about this FF is that Mayank knows he is equally responsible for it and he is ready to bear the consequences..

continue soon

~jiya~

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Babaji Ka Thullu

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: jiya_angel
nice update Radhika...
what I mostly like about this FF is that Mayank knows he is equally responsible for it and he is ready to bear the consequences..
continue soon
~jiya~

Hey jiys thnk u so much for reading n commnting..

n m glad u like it...

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monalisa1234

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Posted: 14 years ago

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lovely update dear..enjoyed thoroughly...cant wait 4 mayur post marriage romance to get started..plzz make mayur fall in love asap.😳..plzzz update the next part soon..cant wait to read it..der mat karna

Edited by monalisa1234 - 14 years ago

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valliyah

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Posted: 14 years ago

#67

Lovely part...Mayur marriage😍...Mayank soo concerned abt her n child so sweet of him...good u cont plss update soon as can't wait to read ahead...thnx for pm...!!!