Evil Saas Poem - for real

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Posted: 14 years ago
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I don't know why but I have a real honest, nearly guttural, hatred for this character. So much so that instead of SaaVan inspiring me to make a poem - the evil saas did.

The poem describes the evil saas's entry into the restaurant and her taking Saachi to the washroom. I hope you enjoy, but I am hoping that even more than enjoyment, it leaves you a little disturbed with the mood it creates. (thanks for the pic Jaan!)



Sinistress

The evil woman rumbled in

Dark clouds shrouding her

With ominous shadows.

The ground shook

A jackal bellowed

She made her presence known.

Her sinister eyes narrowed in

Dark coals of cold

Sharp steel.

She spotted her prey

Innocent, quivering, meek

Just as she had hoped

To enjoy.

With false smile and hidden scorn

She hissed closer

Smacking her fangs

Speaking sweet poison

From her icy forked tongue.

'Here you are', she sneered

Sending chills across her

Victim's soul

The blood having just run cold.

She lay her hand

Iron talons clamping down

On her kill's shoulder

With a squeeze

She communicates

There is no way out.

Come with me.

You are done.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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HI Anu
Your poem is marvellous !👏
But I do not think the character of evil saas is worthy of these verses
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Anu, this has truly sent chills up & down my spine. Like you were hoping, it has left me (at least) a little disturbed. However, I know and agree with you completely. This was truly her. Brilliantly written and very apt n suitable to the character.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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^^^
@Jaan - thank you! I know she was a complete monster and I was hoping to convey that.

@Su - thank you! Evil Saas is worthy of the verses if it makes her out to be a complete vile beast.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Beautifully written, Anu👏👏. Appropriate for the Evil saas, whom we all loved, to hate. Your lines did bring back those dreadful memories.😔 I was actually visualising those scenes as I was reading the poem.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Superbly written Anu. leaves a chill in my spine to even think abt her.Wonderfully done poem to describe her intentions very well.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Anu that is very well written👏 It freaked me out !!😲
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very nicely written anu.she is not an evil saas she is a devil saas.😡.This devil always gives bad memories to me.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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well written, Anu!!! 👏👏 what a witch that lady was!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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this poem perfectly suits the evil saas!! nice job...really well written!!👏

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