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ohk guys....plz plz plz dun throw chappals at me for writing this🤢....actually i had the concept in mind for quite a long tym...so i thought to pen it down!!!😃 ITS BASICALLY GEET VERSION!!!
P.S: MOSTLY WRITTEN IN HINDI...N E BODY PLZ CAN U DO THE "KASHT" OF TRANLATING IT FOR THE INTEREST OF THE READERS WHO FIND IT DIFFICULT IN HINDI???😳
Nahi……shayad nahi….in do saalon mein shayad hi meine unke bina jeena seekh liya hai……
Sab kehte hain ki mein paagal ho chuki hoon….to haan…mein paagal ho chuki hoon…Maan ko apne kareeb na paaker….apni beti ko apne kareeb na dekh kar…….ab to itni aadat ho chuki hai ke aansoon ne bhi saath chod diya hai…pehle mere gharwale….phir duniyawale…..phir Maan aur humari beti….aur ab yeh aansoo…sab ne mera saath chod diya hai!!!
Mein to sirf ek jism hoon…geet ki aatma to kab ki Maan ke paas jaa chuki hai…apni beti ke paas jaa chuki hai! Geet ka jism to ek dikhawa hai….bas ek chalawa…..duniya walon ko yeh jataane ke liye ke Maan aur apni beti ko khokar geet paagal ho chuki hai….
Par mein…jab tak mera jism mera saath nahi chodta….tab tak mein apne Maan ke kareeb bhi nahi jaa sakti….apne dono pyaar ko mehsoos hi nahi kar sakti!!! Kyun yeh duniyawale nahi samajhte ke mujhe iss haalat mein nahi jeena hai….kyun woh mujhe Maan ke kamre mein band karke rakhte hain….kyun mere jism ko marne ke liye nahi chod dete….kyun ab bhi mujhe aur Maan ko juda rakhna chahte hain???
Unhe to pata hai na ke Maan ke bina geet ka koi wajood nahi….. maan ke bina geet ki saansein nahi, dhadkanein nahi… duniya bhi nahi! Phir kyun mujhe unke paas jaane se rok rahe hain??? Ab na to mein jee sakti hoon…na hi mar sakti hoon……
Babaji ne mujhse mera sabkuch cheen liya…meine unse koi shikayat nahi ki…par ab jis haalat mein mujhe rakha hai, bas ab ek hi leher uthti hai dil mein….(dil (smirks)…kaisa dil….jo Maan ke bina dhadakna hi nahi jaanta???)….MEIN GEET HOON….SABKE DIL KI AWAAZ (aisa Maan ne kaha tha)…Maan KE DIL KI AWAAZ…SABKI ZINDAGI KA EK ATOOT HISSA…….PHIR KYUN KIYA MUJHE SABSE PARAYA…..SABSE ALAG???? AB TO BAS YAHI LAGTA HAI KE "MEIN HOON GEET……SABSE PARAYI!!!"
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so guys...how was it??? do leave sum comments for this BECHARI WRITER and do press the LIKE button!!!
P.S: MOSTLY WRITTEN IN HINDI...N E BODY PLZ CAN U DO THE "KASHT" OF TRANLATING IT FOR THE INTEREST OF THE READERS WHO FIND IT DIFFICULT IN HINDI???😳
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"Maan….Maan….Maan…where are you??? Aap kuch
bolte kyun nahi??? Maan….."
My voice always dies in this never
ending darkness…I wonder….can't he really hear me??? Kya woh mujhse itne door
jaa chuke hain kea b woh mujhe sun bhi nahi sakte……mujhe mehsoos bhi nahi kar
sakte???
Nahi……shayad nahi….in do saalon mein shayad hi meine unke bina jeena seekh liya hai……
Hansi aati hai mujhe jab mein do saal
pehle hue us kaali raat ke bare mein sochti hoon….jisne mujhse mera sabkuch
cheen liya…jisne meri zindagi, meri saansein,,,,,mere ehsaas mujhse cheen liye…who
accident…huh….
Babaji bhi kitne ajeeb hain na……ek pal
unhone mujhe kitni saari khushiyan di….kitne hi khwaab dikhaye mere Maan ke
saath…aur ab……mein is band kamre mein padi hoon…unki raah taakte……
Sab kehte hain ki mein paagal ho chuki hoon….to haan…mein paagal ho chuki hoon…Maan ko apne kareeb na paaker….apni beti ko apne kareeb na dekh kar…….ab to itni aadat ho chuki hai ke aansoon ne bhi saath chod diya hai…pehle mere gharwale….phir duniyawale…..phir Maan aur humari beti….aur ab yeh aansoo…sab ne mera saath chod diya hai!!!
Mein to sirf ek jism hoon…geet ki aatma to kab ki Maan ke paas jaa chuki hai…apni beti ke paas jaa chuki hai! Geet ka jism to ek dikhawa hai….bas ek chalawa…..duniya walon ko yeh jataane ke liye ke Maan aur apni beti ko khokar geet paagal ho chuki hai….
Par mein jaanti hoon……geet to sirf aur
sirf Maan ki hi hai….jahan Maan…wahin geet! Jahan Maan ki aatma….wahin geet ka
ehsaas……jahan Maan ka jism…wahin geet ki saansein!!!
Bas ek baat ki tasalli hai mujhe…mere Maan
aur humari beti…dono ek saath kisi door jagah surakshit hain….jahan unhe koi
choo bhi nahi sakta…jahan un dono par koi aanch bhi nahi aa sakti!!!
Par mein…jab tak mera jism mera saath nahi chodta….tab tak mein apne Maan ke kareeb bhi nahi jaa sakti….apne dono pyaar ko mehsoos hi nahi kar sakti!!! Kyun yeh duniyawale nahi samajhte ke mujhe iss haalat mein nahi jeena hai….kyun woh mujhe Maan ke kamre mein band karke rakhte hain….kyun mere jism ko marne ke liye nahi chod dete….kyun ab bhi mujhe aur Maan ko juda rakhna chahte hain???
Unhe to pata hai na ke Maan ke bina geet ka koi wajood nahi….. maan ke bina geet ki saansein nahi, dhadkanein nahi… duniya bhi nahi! Phir kyun mujhe unke paas jaane se rok rahe hain??? Ab na to mein jee sakti hoon…na hi mar sakti hoon……
Babaji ne mujhse mera sabkuch cheen liya…meine unse koi shikayat nahi ki…par ab jis haalat mein mujhe rakha hai, bas ab ek hi leher uthti hai dil mein….(dil (smirks)…kaisa dil….jo Maan ke bina dhadakna hi nahi jaanta???)….MEIN GEET HOON….SABKE DIL KI AWAAZ (aisa Maan ne kaha tha)…Maan KE DIL KI AWAAZ…SABKI ZINDAGI KA EK ATOOT HISSA…….PHIR KYUN KIYA MUJHE SABSE PARAYA…..SABSE ALAG???? AB TO BAS YAHI LAGTA HAI KE "MEIN HOON GEET……SABSE PARAYI!!!"
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so guys...how was it??? do leave sum comments for this BECHARI WRITER and do press the LIKE button!!!
MAAN VERSION - COMING SOON!
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