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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely chapters dear, so nice sister-brother bonding,viren is very lucky to have niyati like di... Gud friendship also... Keep posting soon dear... 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb superb!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! plaz dear continue .
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Posted: 14 years ago
neekita i started readimg ur ff tonight and i cant beleive it i finished reading all the chapters tonight itself for 2 hours all i did was read your ff it was really interesting and i really loved it i cant beleive i didnt start reafing this the moment your posted them it was really good cant wait 4 your next update please make it soon. and pm me if you can
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NIVEDITA AND VIREN: HUM TUM
CHAPTER 29

Viren was driving the bike very fast so that Nivedita hold him tightly. Nivedita was enjoying the bike ride very much as she was very happy that she is alone with Viren. She love Viren and she also wanted to spend some time alone with Viren. But due to her shyness, she did not say this to Viren.

Viren stooped the bike in front of a big restaurant. He turned to Nivedita and said "Nivedita I think we both did not have the lunch till now. So let's go and have lunch." Nivedita agreed and they both went inside the restaurant.

Inside the restaurant, Viren ordered burger and French salad. When the waiter was gone after taking their order, Nivedita said "Viren I am not going to eat burger or French salad either if you want you can eat. I don't like it." Viren said "ok tell me what you want to eat?"

Nivedita smiled and said "the food I want to eat is not available here. Wanna know what I like to eat the most?" Viren said "off course I want to know." Nivedita said excitedly "then leave this and come with me." Viren left from there with Nivedita.

They both went away from there on Viren's bike. Nivedita told him to go to the market nearby their house. They both went there. Viren stopped the bike in front of the market.

While Viren was looking for the parking to park his bike there, Nivedita got down from the bike and went inside the market excitedly. Viren entered in the market and began to search for her. After 5 minutes of search, Viren saw her nearby a Golgappe stall waiting for him.

He came near her and said "what are you doing here Nivedita?" Nivedita replied looking very happy "Viren you know what I love eating Golgappe." She asked the owner of the stall to give her golgappe to eat. Nivedita was eating while Viren was watching her and smiling.

Nivedita looked at him and said "Viren you too eat this." Viren first got hesitant as he never tried it before. He tasted it for the first time and his eyes began to water as they were too spicy. Viren yelled "water." Nivedita got tensed and said "there is not water Viren. What I do?" Nivedita got an idea and told Viren to wait for her.

After 5 minutes, she came holding a plate full of Jalebis in her hand. She grabbed one from the plate and stuffed it in Viren's mouth. Viren felt quite good after eating it. Nivedita began to laugh at Viren.

Then Viren said "now too much eating. Let's go to my favorite place in Shimla." Nivedita said "your favorite place? Where it is Viren?" Viren said "Wait Madam wait to see it."

Then they both left from there. Viren stopped his bike near a hill and said "Nivedita we will walk towards my favorite place from here." Nivedita agreed and they both began to walk.

After half an hour of walking, Nivedita got tired and said "where is it Viren? I got tired." Viren looked at her "My jaan, just walk for 5 minutes more."

After 5 minutes, they reached to their destination. Nivedita got memorized by the beauty of the place. It was behind the hill and it was so covered with forests that even sunlight was not there very much. When she reaches there, she felt like its night already. She began to look around.

Viren stood there watching Nivedita and smiling at Nivi's facial expressions as he knew that she was very happy to see this place. Nivedita turned towards him and said "Viren this place is so beautiful."

Viren smiled and said "you don't know that I always like beautiful places like this and love beautiful girl like you." Nivedita felt very shy and turned away from him.

Viren held her hand and pulled her toward him. Nivedita broke free from Viren's clutch and turned away from him again.

Viren smiled at her shyness and made her turn towards. Nivedita jumped at his touch on her body. Her heart was beating very fast at Viren's touch. Viren looked at her began and held out his hand for dance.

Nivedita took his hand and was about to dance when she said "Viren there is no music here." Viren smiled and said "there is Nivedita." He looked at Nivi's eyes and began to sing and they both began to dance.


Kuch khwab dekhe hai, kuch rang soche hain
Ab maine kal apne tere sang soche hain
Iss raah mein jab bhi, tu saath hoti hai
Kisson ke panno si har baat hoti hai
Rooh jo huyi meri fida, toh pal mein uthi koyi sada
Ke dil se huya judaa judaa, toota main iss tara
Sadka kiya yun ishq ka, ke sar jhuka jaha, deedar huya
Sadka kiya yun ishq ka, ke sar jhuka jaha, deedar huya


Viren held Nivi close to him and felt her getting nervous due to this closeness. Then he saw Nivi looking towards him all looking very happy and she began to sing:

Tere mudne se suraj udh gaya

Teri roshni ke saaye mein main dhoop si khili
Mera aasman bhi chota padh gaya
Mujhe jab se hai baahon mein teri panah mili

Viren felt very happy and continued the song:


Woh thehri teri adaa adaa, ke ruk bhi gaya mera khuda
Toh mujhpe yeh asar huya, toota main iss tarah
Sadka kiya yun ishq ka, ke sar jhuka jaha, deedar huya
Sadka kiya yun ishq ka, ke sar jhuka jaha, deedar huya


At the end, Viren held Nivi by her waist and they both began to look at each other. Nivedita felt very shy and hugged Viren tightly. Viren moved Nivedita hair from one side.

He was very close to her. Nivedita felt his breathe falling on her shoulder. Then Slowly Viren kissed her on the neck. Nivedita felt herself going red on the face and hugged Viren more tightly.


Edited by edwardcullen19 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks you dear all of you for your dear comments...i am sorry i can't reply to your comments as i am in a hurry...i will try to update another chapter as soon as possible...kindly forgive my mistakes
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Posted: 14 years ago

wow so romantic chapter 😉 viren shouting for water after eating golgappe reminds me of nivren mirchi scene miss them so much 😭 loved this chap so much

pls continue soon sweeti love u 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
neetu... nivren in deserted place singing and dancing...😳 romantic chapter... continue soon..
Edited by Alphabet26 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
😛hey neetika my sweetie
its a wonderful chapter😃
so nivren r having a nice time while roaming around😳
golgappe, my fav too...
song ...so gud
all in all its a very cute chapter👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow such a romantic chapter... Full with NivRen magic:) thanks swti. Can't wait for more.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Neeti hug and mwah to you... So so romantic,, wholesome fabulous chapter sweety... But missing our ccbm and niviren... 😳

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