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NIVEDITA AND VIREN: HUM TUM
CHAPTER 27

They all reached Shimla in the night very late. All went to their house to rest as tomorrow they have to get up next day in the morning. But Viren did not want to get back to Sood's house and came near Nivedita.

Nivedita said "Viren you must go back. It's night already." Viren replied "no I am not going. I want to talk with you." Nivedita said "ok say what you want to say." Viren looked around. Siddharth, Niyati and Divya were standing there.

He said "here, no way. Let's go somewhere else where we will be alone." Nivedita understood his intentions and said "ok I am coming with you." Viren got happy and held her hand to go away from there. Nivedita stopped him and said "one minute Viren, let me tell Niyati di about it."

Viren got scared and said "no Nivedita don't do this. She will be very angry." Nivedita smiled and said "Niyati di there is some problem. Please come here."

Niyati came and said "what happened Nivi? Viren you are still there. Go to your room now. You will get late for college tomorrow." Viren makes a sad face and leave from there. He went towards the door and looked back at Nivi who was laughing at him.

In the morning, Viren got up early and got ready for the college. He came downstairs for the breakfast. He saw that he woke up very early and everyone is still sleeping. He went back to his room and began to see his family album.

He saw there one pic of his mother Chanchal, his father Jawahar and him during his childhood days. He remembered his childhood days when he craved for his mother's company but she was always busy with the office work and he then remembered how Niyati cared for him since childhood.

He became a bit sad after remembering his mother. He got up and dialed a number. A lady picked up the phone and said "hello." Viren wanted to reply his mother back but no voice came from his throat.

Chanchal said "hello who is there? Why you people call when you don't want to talk." Viren still does not say anything. Chanchal realized something and said "Viren it's you beta. Viren how are you beta?"

Viren hang up the call without any reply. He was very sad after hearing his mother's voice. He was still in thoughts when Niyati came in his room to wake him up and saw that he is awake. She said "good Morning, my bholu brother."

Then she saw Viren sad and became serious. Niyati said "Viren what happened?" She looked around and saw the family album there. She understood and said "you called up mumma na?" Viren nodded in agreement.

Niyati came near him and placed her hand on his shoulder and made him to move toward her. Niyati said "Viren you must not be sad. You know Mumma loves you. She calls me up daily and asks about you. She wants to talk with you but you never talk with her. She loves you very much."

Niyati said "what if mumma is not there. I am here with you na. Taiji is also with you and she also loves you very much. We all love you Viren." Viren smiled sadly and hugged Niyati.

After few moments, they broke apart and Niyati said "Viren do you remember about our bet? Well I won the bet and you must follow my one order." Viren said "tell me what I can do for my lovely sis?"

Niyati said "then promise me you will not become sad ever. You will always remain happy and you and Nivi will be together always."

Viren got emotional and said "di, you love me so much. I often wonder what I would have done in my life if you were not there for me always from childhood. You always care for me so much. Love you di. Be there for me always di."

. Niyati said "off course I will be always here for my sweet bholu." Viren smiled and hugged Niyati again. Niyati who began to cry after seeing Viren sad wiped her tears quickly so there Viren don't see them. Niyati said "acha come downstairs for the breakfast." They both came downstairs for the breakfast.

After eating the breakfast, Viren bid good bye to Niyati and Vandana Taiji. He came out of the house. He started to walk towards the Sharma' house thinking ' Nivedita always get me late. Today I will teach her a lesson.'

He entered in the house. Suddenly Nivedita came out for the college. Viren looked at Nivedita and got memorized due to her beauty. He forgot what he was thinking few moments before. She was looking very beautiful in a dark blue chooridar suit.


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NIVEDITA AND VIREN: HUM TUM
CHAPTER 28

He came near to her and said "you are looking so beautiful today." Nivedita felt shy and began to look downwards. He continued "see this is the effect of my love for you, so that you are looking so beautiful today."

Nivedita looked at him and smiled. They both got lost in staring at each other when Viren's phone rang up. It was Vicky who called him to ask that he left for college or not. Viren lied that he left for college and hang up the call. He told Nivedita to hurry up for the college.

They both left for the college on Vire's bike. They both reached college and began to walk towards the canteen as Vicky told them to come there. They both entered in the canteen.

Meanwhile all were waiting for Viren and Nivedita as they all were up to something. They all saw Viren and Nivi coming towards them. Siddharth said "Remember what we all planned for them. Divya, Sneha and Shruti you three take Nivedita away from Viren in the class while I, Vicky and Vishal will take care of Viren in the canteen. Viren teased us a lot, now it's our turn."

Viren and Nivedita joined all of them. After 5 minutes, Divya, Sneha and Shruti got up and said "Nivi come it's time for class. We must go."

Nivedita agreed and left with them while looking at Viren. Viren who was also looking at Nivedita felt like to join her and said "guys, we must attend the lecture otherwise Mishra sir will be very angry."

Siddharth replied "no Viren we are not going in the class. Today we planned a full day bunk plan for us." Viren said "Siddharth, I can't believe that it's you who want to bunk all the classes today." Siddharth replied "Viren I got bore as I attend all the lectures daily. I also want some change today."

All the time, Viren tried a lot to go to the class but Siddharth, Vicky and Vishal stopped him from doing this. Viren got very impatient to see Nivi but he did not get any chance to see Nivi till the lunch time. On the other hand, Nivedita also tried a lot to see Viren and talk with him but Divya, Sneha and Shruti stopped her.

In the lunch time, Divya, Sneha , Shruti and Nivedita came in the canteen but Siddharth, Vicky , Vishal and Vicky were not there. Nivedita felt very sad, she wanted to see Viren.

Nivedita was talking with Divya, Sneha and Shruti when she saw Viren hiding behind wall in the canteen and trying to grab her attention with making funny hand movements and funny faces. She saw him and nodded in his direction quietly.

He indicated her to come in a nearby class room and left from there silently. Nivedita said "di, I am going to Mishra Sir. I have some doubts to ask him." Divya replied "ok go."

Nivedita left from there and entered in a class where Viren indicated her to come. She saw that it was all dark. She said "Viren are you here? Viren?" She felt someone closing the door and looked back. She felt very happy to see that it was Viren who locked the door of the classroom. He turned towards her and smiled.

They both started to walk towards each other. They both were looking at each other very lovingly. They both came near and stood there for few moments while staring at each other.

Then they hugged each other very tightly. Since arriving in the college, it was the first time they both were feeling happy and relieved after seeing each other.

Viren said "I was waiting to see you Nivedita, missed you so much. I was feeling like it's been ages since I saw you last time." Nivedita smiled and said "I was also feeling the same Viren. I wonder why our friends are behaving like they don't want us to remain together." They broke apart.

Viren said "Nivedita if my remaining day passed with out seeing you anymore, then I will go mad." Nivedita said "but what can we do?" Viren thought for few moments and said "idea, we must go out of college and visit some places in Shimla since it's been ages since you visited Shimla last time in your childhood." Nivedita said "ok Viren let's go. But what we will say with our friends?"

Viren thought for few moments and said "let's get disappear from the college with out telling them otherwise they will cancel our plan at the moment they heard about it. You go out of the class before me and meet me in the parking stand." Nivedita nodded in agreement.

Nivedita came out of the class quietly and made sure that anyone is not watching her. Then she began to walk towards the parking stand of the college carefully looking all around making sure that her friends are not there.

Viren too got out of the class room after 5 minutes and reached to the parking stand managing to escape from the sight of their friends. He met Nivedita there. They both smiled at each other and left on Viren's bike from the college.

After they were gone, Divya, Siddharth, Vicky, Vishal, Sneha and Shruti came out from their hiding place and congratulated each other as their plan worked successfully as they prevented Nivedita and Viren from meeting in the college so that they both get irritated from them and go out together.


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Posted: 14 years ago
thank you friends for all your lovely comment ...i am very glad that you all liked my update...i have updated another two chapters...kindly forgive my mistakes...i will try to update another chapter as soon as possible
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Excellent Chapters Dear, SO Nivren Meeting ChoriChori, Chupke Chupke, Sooo sweet
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow Neetika... Great chapters:) feel bad for Viren coz his mother never has time for him. Luckily he got his sister, nivi and his friends:) so happy NivRen sneaked out to be alone together... Can't wait for you next chapters. Thanks dear. Back to school for you tomorrow. Good luck with it swti:):):)
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Felt bad for v and his mom but he has got nice sister and friends. Lol they thought they are leaving everybody. Nice work by friends.
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful both part
love it core
ty 4 pm
thanks double treat
love the flaw of the story
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Posted: 14 years ago
nikiii 🤗 love the 2 parts waaaw amazing januuu...really awesome...viren and his mam hope both will be together soon :)...i really enjoy while am reading jannn love u so much and love ur ff *hugs*
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey awsom sweety..thatz one bunch of very nice friends or wat..loved it sweety..expecting only nivren magic in the coming chapters...love u and keep rocking..
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely chapters dear :)))))))))) hugs for ur chapters :) 🤗 .continue soon sweet heart :)

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