Hey Khushbi,nah dear galiyaan nahi phekungi...yoour poem was superb!
toucing ...those who r in love can actually feel it! 😳😍if thats the case wid them I mean...lol nt talking abt "we r forever n ever after" people. 😉😆nice nice..keep it up. 👍🏼
Hey Khushbi,nah dear galiyaan nahi phekungi...yoour poem was superb!
toucing ...those who r in love can actually feel it! 😳😍if thats the case wid them I mean...lol nt talking abt "we r forever n ever after" people. 😉😆nice nice..keep it up. 👍🏼
Khush ,
Khush ,
Will definitely check out . In fact I have been reading quite a lot of stuff on the first writing challenge and its all so nice . No doubt about all our writers ; they are all really very talented and have supreme imagination. Discovering these FFs and other writing has been such a pleasant surprise.
Originally posted by: hapinezz13
Hey Khush,
This is such a beautiful piece...so much love intermingled with pain...it breaks your heart to read this one...no wonder it sapped u of ur enery...tum intni deep baatein likhogi sweets toh tumhe Maa bolna padega...loved it!!
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