FF-"DESIRE"--Part 12"the Prom night"part-2 pg 47 - Page 17

Hey.. U selected dat song what I sang for my Jaanu.. Tujhko Jo.. Btw.. I'll be singing the same in my OS. So Pls dnt get angry on me.

Originally posted by: jes_jade

Yayy..1st one to comment after so long...🥳😆😆

Woww...woww....wowwiiieee!!!!!!!👍🏼👍🏼

This is update is just excellent..fantastic...mindblowing!!👏👏Thankyou soooomuch dear😳

I don't knw hw to react....I got so engrossed in it dat even though it was a long part but I still felt it was short..😆

Hats off to u Neha!!!wooooow😳thanx again yaar😳😳

First of all so many questions crossing the minds of AVITA....why can't they see the answer dat is so clearly in front of them.....I can't wait to see them together..😍😍

Secondly..Arshika's character still is a suspense for me..🤔🤔huun it mean for the first time i succeed to conceal a cheracter's reality😆

Thirdly....dat RV...such a big *beep beep😉* 🤬🤬🤬
Hope he gets his full doses frm Avi.....😈😈    will try to give your regards😉😆😆😆

Loved both the songs dat u selected...In short..I am totally in love with ur FF...😍😍thanx for liking songs dear these are frome my fav list😳😳

Plzz plzz update soon...😃😃

Can't wait to read the next action & dhamaka filled dhagaddum update!!😍😍

Originally posted by: KriYa_life

I have to still comment on the previous parts. Will do ASAP. Pls Bear with Meits ok u read them n like them its enough dear😳. For Now Part 9: Im going Insane.. Neha Baby... I want to hug u tight.. Im totally deewani of ur FF & ur wonderful writing.hehehe n i m deewani of ur writing n ur Avi😉 I dnt want to cum out of this ff. Why did U stop? Im sure the next update will a thunder storm. U always suprise me everytime I read ur FF.thanx for ur comment dear n you give me shocks by avi's deeds😆

btw the song thing happy to know u liked it n more happy to know that u r planing it in your OS wow,
me too love the song now i m waiting fro ur OS dear😉

Updated my post on page 20😉

Hey Neha👏👏👏👏

Originally posted by: Vistaa

Hey Neha👏

 

 

Sooo romantic and sooo sad too...hopefully the reunion will be soon😆

 

And that RV😡

 

Thanks for the pm dearie and so sorry for the late response.its ok di😳

 

Take care and looking forward to the next part😊

 

Vista

 

 

 

thanx for ur words di😳
im really waiting for ur Avdhesh's story's update,😳

Originally posted by: prash_t

Hey Nehaaa🤗🤗


Sorry sweetie...Updated my post after a looo...ng timeits ok sweety but i was waiting😆😳

But...this part made me speechless...oye hoe itna kharab tha😆😆😆

I love both the songs...❤️ nd it suited them also😳ooh thankyou dear😳

I read it again and again...😳u r realy so sweet😃

Finally, Avi came to knw abt his true feelings  When Arpi would come to knw😕may b in next or never

RV is a🤬ya he is🤢

Wht is he upto😡  I think Arshika does not love Avi I dnt knw why she is doing this😡hope can explain in next😉


The romantic moments of Avita...were juz superb👏 Well Done sweetie...

                       



M eagerly waiting fr next part😉
                                  
                   

Thaaankyouuu😳😳😳😳😳

hey jo
i m waiting eagerly for next part dear

hey Danno dear,
thanx for waiting  dear,
try to give Pre in two days😉
just want to make it a bit interesting 😉
almost done with half part today but still feeling something lacking🤔

Originally posted by: joliefille

hey Danno dear,
thanx for waiting  dear,
try to give Pre in two days😉
just want to make it a bit interesting 😉
almost done with half part today but still feeling something lacking🤔

ya ya i know
suspence bana rahi hoo naaa🤣😉