FF-'DESIRE'--Part 12'the Prom night'part-2 pg 47 - Page 16

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Jolie,

amazing FF, read all the chapters for the first time n was mesmerized with fact that this FF seems very real to me.


will be looking forward for ur update.

again great show dear keep it up

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Posted: 13 years ago
Wonderful FF update Neha. Avi finally sees that Arpi is his true love. The Avita scene was so romantic. That RV is a jerk, poor Arpi has to be saved before he performs his sinful deeds. Good thing Avi stayed back and now he will beat up RV for hurting Arpi.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Nidhsara

Oye RV jaldi marne ka shok hai kya...this is whatcame to my mind after i finishd the chapter...becoz soon he is going to be raita...with special garnishings...and i was right Arshikha is onto Avi only for his money i guess......well girl you are in for shock of your life...kyunki chahe zameen asmaan ek ho jaaye humare Avita ko darthi mei koi alag nahi kar sakta.....loved it Jo...update soon...love u


Hey nidh sara thanx for ur comment dear,
@bold i really like it "...with special garnishing"πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
@red huun dear, it was same Avi with same money when she ditched him earlier

think more why she returned nowπŸ˜‰

keep on thinking will try to update soon .😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: komalSingh

Hey Jolie,


amazing FF, read all the chapters for the first time n was mesmerized with fact that this FF seems very real to me.


will be looking forward for ur update.

again great show dear keep it up


Oh Thankyou soooomuch dear for ur lovely words😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Sidda8

Wonderful FF update Neha. Avi finally sees that Arpi is his true love. The Avita scene was so romantic. That RV is a jerk, poor Arpi has to be saved before he performs his sinful deeds. Good thing Avi stayed back and now he will beat up RV for hurting Arpi.


hey Sidda
thanx for likin it dear,😳
ya finally avi realized his feelings for Arpi
But kya keh paayega,πŸ˜†
n what about Arpi πŸ˜•
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Sidda8

Wonderful FF update Neha. Avi finally sees that Arpi is his true love. The Avita scene was so romantic. That RV is a jerk, poor Arpi has to be saved before he performs his sinful deeds. Good thing Avi stayed back and now he will beat up RV for hurting Arpi.


hey Sidda
thanx dear for liking it
ya finally he realized his feelings for Arpi
but kya keh payegaπŸ˜†
n what about ArpiπŸ˜•
n Rv will try his best to hide Arpi i m assuring you for thatπŸ˜‰



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Posted: 13 years ago
Edited my reply on page 20...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
I have to still comment on the previous parts. Will do ASAP. Pls Bear with Me. For Now Part 9: Im going Insane.. Neha Baby... I want to hug u tight.. Im totally deewani of ur FF & ur wonderful writing. I dnt want to cum out of this ff. Why did U stop? Im sure the next update will a thunder storm. U always suprise me everytime I read ur FF.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey.. U selected dat song what I sang for my Jaanu.. Tujhko Jo.. Btw.. I'll be singing the same in my OS. So Pls dnt get angry on me.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jes_jade

Yayy..1st one to comment after so long...πŸ₯³πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Woww...woww....wowwiiieee!!!!!!!πŸ‘πŸΌ
πŸ‘πŸΌ

This is update is just excellent..fantastic...mindblowing!!πŸ‘πŸ‘Thankyou soooomuch dear😳

I don't knw hw to react....I got so engrossed in it dat even though it was a long part but I still felt it was short..πŸ˜†

Hats off to u Neha!!!
wooooow😳thanx again yaar😳😳

First of all so many questions crossing the minds of AVITA....why can't they see the answer dat is so clearly in front of them.....I can't wait to see them together..
😍😍

Secondly..Arshika's character still is a suspense for me..πŸ€”
πŸ€”huun it mean for the first time i succeed to conceal a cheracter's realityπŸ˜†

Thirdly....dat RV...such a big *beep beepπŸ˜‰* 🀬
🀬🀬
Hope he gets his full doses frm Avi.....
😈😈 will try to give your regardsπŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Loved both the songs dat u selected...In short..I am totally in love with ur FF...
😍😍thanx for liking songs dear these are frome my fav list😳😳

Plzz plzz update soon...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Can't wait to read the next action & dhamaka filled dhagaddum update!!
😍😍

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