FF-"DESIRE"--Part 12"the Prom night"part-2 pg 47 - Page 11

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Joliefille!
Enjoyed this part too though it is difficult to read as there is some formatting problem.
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh dear,
I hate this net server just messed it up,
Will try to fix it soon, don't know what to do, thats why didn't updated the first pg n title,
Hope by eve can do something.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey jo this part was awsome.....thoughthere was some problem with the font........Avita as usual rocks..........but Mr. Thakur how dare you hug someonelse...i'll give you sound thrashing nxt time you do it.....lol.........poor Arpi......but who the hell is in his arm..........waiting on tenterhooks for the next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey JO πŸ€—

Just love it and OMG!!!!!! you are so amazing writer πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘



Dang you portrayed the their emotions very well and you call me master in emotions while it's you who it is 😑 🀣
i am truly impressed and proud of you dear πŸ‘
⭐️ πŸ‘

What a hug Joieeeee 😍 😍 😍

i know that girl is his former lover and she want's to come back his life but he is falling for Arpi..now the twist and turns...i am waiting for it and i will be the person to read it because i am gonna edit it 



love ya πŸ€—
Edited by yoga23priya - 13 years ago
angili thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg this is mind blowing part i can not wait for next parts this marvelous πŸ‘
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Posted: 13 years ago
omgggggggggggg
this part is also too good
that girl must be her ex gf
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hye jo,
i just loved this part so they started loving each other.
O i have involved a bit in your ff i can guess that girl avi's first love had returned but why she came back.

Waiting....to see next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update Neha!!!!πŸ‘πŸ‘

It was really sweet..😳😳

Frm the fall..till..they hug...all was so cute!!!😍😍

Who was the girl who hugged Avi??😑😑
Am sure she is dat senior girl who broke his heart..πŸ₯ΊπŸ₯Ί

Waiting for nxt....

Plzz update soon..πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Edited by jes_jade - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
JoπŸ€—πŸ€—

Who is tht girl....😑


I think its Arshika😑  I dont want her to come between Avita 😑

They both are already falling for each other😳

Again Superb lines of Romeo- Julietβ­οΈπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘


I love this play😳




                     



Update it soooooooooooooon..

Waiting fr next partπŸ˜ƒ





😑Edited by prash_t - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
WOW JO ANOTHER VRY EXCELLENT PART BY U 

LUVED ITTTTTTTTT😳

I REALY LIKE D WAY U PORTRAY D CHARACTER OF 

AVI N ARPI U PUT LIFE IN D CHARACTERS N WHILE 

READING I FEEL LIKE DAT I M SITTING N WATCHING 

IT ON STAGE IN REALITY  WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

U R AWESOME πŸ‘

(n hey i edited mah first post on page 12πŸ˜ƒ)
Edited by jasveensokhi - 13 years ago