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Posted: 13 years ago
 
                                                               
 
 
 
@ Kiran, lol I'm so happy u edited ur comment...πŸ˜‰, u liked d pic thanks babez, I knew u wud, oh huni I'm soo glad it bought a smile 2ur face, seriously, first of all I really wanna say I just luv d way u pick each n every detail n tell it d way u fink lol...I luv dat abt u hun, oh btw d connection of Dutta bein alive wid d cell is d fact dat he answered it, but he didn't speak cz of d bad reception lol..πŸ˜›
n even if Dutta did run on battery power, den he wudn't be ne gud widout his sim innit, lol sim being Naku, woteva dey r they'll both be adhoore widout each other...πŸ˜†
..Well yeah Dutta's chagned cz of Kishore tellin him about her innocence b4 d crash, so der ain't nuffin 2 hold him bak now...😊
wen u wrote wife I was lyk huh..but den I membered dat der married lol...cn u believe it I almst 4gt
well wot can I say Gaurav's bin around alot, so he knows too much, n Naku has known him since childhood, which is where Naku gets her independent personality 4rm lol, well woteva bit of independence she has...πŸ˜†
yeh I fink 2 a degree every1 has common sense n no one can be truly as dumb as they show in d serials sumtyms, well I fink she convinces Dutta mainly bcz he's in luv wid her now, so if she ask him 2 jump he js gonna say 'how high babe'...πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰
lool yeh berries according 2me, dat  wz d 1st fing u able 2 find out in d wild lol, not apples...πŸ˜†πŸ˜³, n even Dutta cnt help it even he knows he's got a chance in d forest alone πŸ˜‰
 
yeah he makes her sit on his shoulder, lol is dat wot u dream of sitting on ur man's shoulder...πŸ˜†, I wud prob flatten him 2 death if i eva sat on ma man's shoulder hehe...😳😳😳😳😳, but yeh I wuda thght u wud've wanted Dutta 2 slip his fingers thru her slit lool, altho dat wudn't be ryt in dat case, d other tym he felt free 2 chek her out, now he's in luv wid her, so he's lookin at her wid respect now, n besides woteva is hers is now his...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜³
 
yep der finkin shows d direction of der thghts, she alwys luks on d gud side n he on d bad side lol, but u no ur thgt on dem 'dat she's d startn he d end' is actually a much nicer meanin hun...πŸ‘, I soo feel u r actually a part of dis ff lol u really get in2 it, n ur comment really shows dat so thanks darlin', n ur reaction 2 chokin well ditto wid Naku's feelings hun, I'm sure dats how she felt 2...πŸ˜‰, n if only Dutta looked at us all lyk dat...😍
 
His sarcasm cums naturally wen Gaurav is in ? lol, yeh baby der head ova heels 4 each other 2, yeh all der confessions r out, n d hug weren't spose 2b der, but wen I finished writing dat convo it js seemed ryt, in fact der weren't spose 2 b a hug in dat update at all, but I guess der wz...πŸ˜†
lol I know u luvin my Dutta, now we're gonna b fighting ova him...πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
 
yeh d tree scene I actually luved myself, cz 4 d update I had actually make n account n carve d tree offiacially on website, n 4me dats actually becum a memory 4eva, so I jus had 2 create a scene around my tree lol, n made it eternal, n u know d weird part wz, wen I wz gonna write it, the minimuim amount of characters u can use was 2 n d max wz 3, n I wz lyk now what !!!   coz u hav no idea how much I wanted 2use dat pic of d carvin...n u had to hav a sign in d middle...so I wz heartbroken 4 a while, n got n idea of writin ta-sha instead n it turned out even better than I cud imagine...did u click on d link below...❓
 
n babez SR not yet, afta der wedding lool...😈...boys will b boys, but girls hav cnt giv dem evryting on a plate...spesh Naku
 
...n hey hey wots dis abh Naku meri heroin hogi lol, wen she does suttin gud u say 'meri Naku/my Naku', n wen it doesn't go ur way ur say 'teri'...lmao gal u crack me up literally...πŸ˜‰
 
...knock knock, cumout of tashaland lol...three's a crowd...hehe...πŸ˜†πŸ˜›
 
ooohh dw abt Jaggu Dada I luv him already, he's gonna be a real eye opener 4 both Dutta n Naku, everyone plays der part in my ff hun, trust me...πŸ˜‰
 
huni I luv luv luv ur comment lol, n trust me I'm grinnin 2..😳 so lots of muahzz...😊
ofc u'd luv d theory wid Dutta n nose ting lol, dat wz d reason he wanted 2 kiss her...I know u 2well...
 
n thank u 4ur comment hun, n notice how u didn't write update soon lol, gud going...ur so satisfied wid dis one, dat u either 4gt or ur nt bothered abt d next one lool...either way suits me...πŸ˜› luv ya babe !πŸ˜‰
 
 
         
 
 
@ 007, btw not in real lyf ma cheeks ain't cute n chubby lol, do not be decieved πŸ˜†, but ur still welcum 2 pull dem, cz once u do dat den 4sure they'd b red...πŸ˜›, will save me 4rm using my blusher loool...πŸ˜†, oops I spoke 2 soon, now I gotta pull my blusher out agen...hehe...huni weneva I talk 2u, I always no I'm gonna b in 4 a tough fight wid u lol ur '007', it ain't kwl 2 speak wid u widout a little fight...πŸ˜›.  aaww dw abt taana I'm js kiddin hun, n yeh chik lol, all ma gals r chiks darlin's babez, n wot not lol...n hun ma idea of chik ain't malika sherawat...🀑🀒, so dw aisa nahin hoga aur naahin hoga ur safe 4rm badnaami lool...πŸ˜‰
 
 
 
 
 
@ Alveera, thanks babez, πŸ€—
 
 
 
 
 
@ Mish, no problemo...u take ur tym, I dnt want u2 waste tym here commentin rather den studyin huni, so ur off d hook babez...n d fact dat u luved it is enuff 4me...πŸ€—...ok dat enuff luv lol get bak 2 revision...! 😑 πŸ˜†
 
 
 
 
 
@ meriyaar, fank u, fank u fank u, cz u sed it 3 tyms I feel obliged 2 say it 3 tyms 2 lol, it adds effect dnt u fink...ok dnt answer dat...im jus goin mad here 4 no apparent reason lol...
..but no honestly, thank u, n Im glad u thought so, cz it wz Dutta's feelings dat were a little tough 4me 2 bring out...😳😳, so I got him 2 ask Naku's 1st lool...😳😳, well I'm glad sum1 lyked d 'almost kiss' lol, everyone's angry wid me cz they didn't kiss, but I want d 1st kiss 2b special...is dat so bad...πŸ˜•πŸ˜†, I will defo try 2 update soon...πŸ˜‰
 
 
                          
 
 
 
@ Pooja, first of all thanks soo much gal, I hav 2say dat thru ur comment I literally had a sweet smile on my lips dat I cudn't wipe off until I finished readin all ur comment, ur words r in actual fact very sweet n lovely thank u agen, oh god I' so glad u fink dis is so far d best, cz I actually had 2 put a lot of mental stress in dis update lol...😳😳, it was kinda of a challenge in a way, n oh fank god ur not upset wid d long updates, after dis next one I will defo try n shorten dem tho.
 
Well I guess wid ur comment u covered d whole chpater pretty well hun, n d weird fing is d line u picked happend 2 pop in der at d spare od moment, it js sounded so ryt at d tym, n as 4 her confession of tellin him of her luv on d wedding day, I fink dat bit wz important in d serial itself cz she neva wanted him 2 luv her bak, well she did, but not in dat sense...lol...but she simply wanted him 2 know, I mean it cant possibly b dat bad in real lyk, can it...?? Well ne wy I fink dat point wz overlooked in the drama, so I guess I pointed it out here...😳
Yeh u'll find out bat Jagtap nex, he's only gonna b in d single update, but his story will hold strong ground in d whole ff itself..😳, glad u lykin Gaurav tho..πŸ˜›
 
oh no dnt say dat, dnt expect ne fing 4rm future updates lol, js read it as u go along, cz I den I start 2 wonder if everyone's gonna b waitin all dis tym n den it turns out their long wait wud b disappointed by me, n I dnt want dat...lol...but yeh ur defo ryt abt d dhoka part, altho dats his famous lines lol, I'm sure I'll manage 2 squeeze those lines in sumwer hehe...
no no hun, thanks 4ur fantastic comment...πŸ˜‰
 
 
 
 
 
Thank u girls,
 
 
lots of luv 2u all..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi Tinker, ZABARDAST update, aur kiya kahu mast mast, u have coverd it all, yaar, even the lines that u have used about the ROOP part, that they are both one in any form,  it is good that dutta is a little jaelous of gaurav, because he knows that nakku has spent move time with gaurav the nshe has with dutta and also that gaurav knows nakku a million times more then dutta knows her.. aur Jagtap, i hope he has a honeymoon suit for them at his LOVE HOUSE lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

KEEP IT UP YAAR, LOVE YA
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tinkerbe11

 
                                                               
 
 
 
@ Kiran, lol I'm so happy u edited ur comment...πŸ˜‰, u liked d pic thanks babez, I knew u wud, oh huni I'm soo glad it bought a smile 2ur face, seriously, first of all I really wanna say I just luv d way u pick each n every detail n tell it d way u fink lol...I luv dat abt u hun, oh btw d connection of Dutta bein alive wid d cell is d fact dat he answered it, but he didn't speak cz of d bad reception lol..πŸ˜›

OH Get IT now :D

n even if Dutta did run on battery power, den he wudn't be ne gud widout his sim innit, lol sim being Naku, woteva dey r they'll both be adhoore widout each other...πŸ˜†

hehehheh Dutta black berry Naku his power sim :P


..Well yeah Dutta's chagned cz of Kishore tellin him about her innocence b4 d crash, so der ain't nuffin 2 hold him bak now...😊

yeah but D is D , u cant accept him to think right :P
but u like to give surprises , or may be this was a much needed space from outer world thy need :D

wen u wrote wife I was lyk huh..but den I membered dat der married lol...cn u believe it I almst 4gt


Dont worry hon , im here to remind u that :P

well wot can I say Gaurav's bin around alot, so he knows too much, n Naku has known him since childhood, which is where Naku gets her independent personality 4rm lol, well woteva bit of independence she has...πŸ˜†

LOl
 
yeh I fink 2 a degree every1 has common sense n no one can be truly as dumb as they show in d serials sumtyms, well I fink she convinces Dutta mainly bcz he's in luv wid her now, so if she ask him 2 jump he js gonna say 'how high babe'...πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰

ehehhehehehh true true !
he is blinded by her Love :P
lool yeh berries according 2me, dat  wz d 1st fing u able 2 find out in d wild lol, not apples...πŸ˜†πŸ˜³, n even Dutta cnt help it even he knows he's got a chance in d forest alone πŸ˜‰

true , good research i must say or should i say , how many time have u lost in jungle :P
 
yeah he makes her sit on his shoulder, lol is dat wot u dream of sitting on ur man's shoulder...πŸ˜†, I wud prob flatten him 2 death if i eva sat on ma man's shoulder hehe...😳,

babes i have weired dreams just like me :P
i love public affection and man showing what he is capable to do and man should be powerful not like some chusa hua mango , k u flatten him :P


 but yeh I wuda thght u wud've wanted Dutta 2 slip his fingers thru her slit lool, altho dat wudn't be ryt in dat case, d other tym he felt free 2 chek her out, now he's in luv wid her, so he's lookin at her wid respect now, n besides woteva is hers is now his...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜³

OH yeah and i agree now he knows she is all his :P
mental satisafaction :P

 
yep der finkin shows d direction of der thghts, she alwys luks on d gud side n he on d bad side lol, but u no ur thgt on dem 'dat she's d startn he d end' is actually a much nicer meanin hun.
.
thanks dear 
.πŸ‘, I soo feel u r actually a part of dis ff lol u really get in2 it, n ur comment really shows dat so thanks darlin', 

actually u know when u write ur update , i got myself to somewhere where the scene is actually happening , when reading this update i was on the tree , looking at them dreamingly :P
n ur reaction 2 chokin well ditto wid Naku's feelings hun, I'm sure dats how she felt 2...πŸ˜‰, n if only Dutta looked at us all lyk dat...😍

I know :D
 
His sarcasm cums naturally wen Gaurav is in ? lol, yeh baby der head ova heels 4 each other 2, yeh all der confessions r out, n d hug weren't spose 2b der, but wen I finished writing dat convo it js seemed ryt, in fact der weren't spose 2 b a hug in dat update at all, but I guess der wz...πŸ˜†
lol I know u luvin my Dutta, now we're gonna b fighting ova him...πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

Bring it on !
 
yeh d tree scene I actually luved myself, cz 4 d update I had actually make n account n carve d tree offiacially on website, n 4me dats actually becum a memory 4eva, so I jus had 2 create a scene around my tree lol, n made it eternal, n u know d weird part wz, wen I wz gonna write it, the minimuim amount of characters u can use was 2 n d max wz 3, n I wz lyk now what !!!   coz u hav no idea how much I wanted 2use dat pic of d carvin...n u had to hav a sign in d middle...so I wz heartbroken 4 a while, n got n idea of writin ta-sha instead n it turned out even better than I cud imagine...did u click on d link below...❓

yes i did and instant5ly fall in love , its like jaise D got the pic , u have kept a memory with taht tree too :P
btw im thinking to plant a tree with K +D on it or may be full name :P

hehehehehhheh
 
n babez SR not yet, afta der wedding lool...😈...boys will b boys, but girls hav cnt giv dem evryting on a plate...spesh Nakus
thts why i love my Naku :P

...n hey hey wots dis abh Naku meri heroin hogi lol, wen she does suttin gud u say 'meri Naku/my Naku', n wen it doesn't go ur way ur say 'teri'...lmao gal u crack me up literally...πŸ˜‰

babes it was just a milli second away , i was all ready for it na πŸ˜‰
 
...knock knock, cumout of tashaland lol...three's a crowd...hehe...πŸ˜†πŸ˜›

ok then i will shift to Kitaland :P
Kiran and Dutta :P
hehehehhehh
 
ooohh dw abt Jaggu Dada I luv him already, he's gonna be a real eye opener 4 both Dutta n Naku, everyone plays der part in my ff hun, trust me...πŸ˜‰

completly trsuting u :D
 
huni I luv luv luv ur comment lol, n trust me I'm grinnin 2..😳 so lots of muahzz...😊
ofc u'd luv d theory wid Dutta n nose ting lol, dat wz d reason he wanted 2 kiss her...I know u 2well..
. yes u do 
n thank u 4ur comment hun, n notice how u didn't write update soon lol, gud going...ur so satisfied wid dis one, dat u either 4gt or ur nt bothered abt d next one lool...either way suits me...πŸ˜› luv ya babe !πŸ˜‰ oh i didnt ,actually u see i was lost in Tasha land so thast why now read 

update soon :D
 
 
         
 
 

Thank u girls,
 
 
lots of luv 2u all..


my comments in blue :D
Edited by kiran255 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hello hello ...i have been missing in action over here lol

and me getting right to commenting asap


srry for delay
Edited by dg0628 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

^ ^ ^

 
 
 
Hey hey luk who's showed up lol...😲
 
god girl ur jus soo early.. !!  πŸ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tinkerbe11

^ ^ ^

 
 
 
Hey hey luk who's showed up lol...😲
 
god girl ur jus soo early.. !!  πŸ˜†



yup fawn here


btw i edited my spot
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Edited by dg0628 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
I want an update..Mommy...Its Mothers day  ...😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭Owaaaiiiyeee OwaiyeeeπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†Edited by meghaparti - 13 years ago
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^^ I love this girl ...yes keep at it hun, I'm with u ... πŸ˜†
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: dg0628

^^ I love this girl ...yes keep at it hun, I'm with u ... πŸ˜†



were u talking about meπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: meghaparti

I want an update..Mommy...Its Mothers day  ...😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭Owaaaiiiyeee OwaiyeeeπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

 
 
lool mothers day's gone hun,  n even if it wz mothers day hows dat spose 2 relate 2me 😲😲😲😲
...aur huni itna ro do gi tho Babi kya karegi lool, n Fawn u gangin up on me...not fair..
 
 
ok jokes apart girls, js w8n a little while 4d update pls, I won't be able 2do it yet...sorry😳😳
 
 
 
...n yep Tink's gonna fly ova 2 Fawn's spot n chek out ur comment hun...πŸ˜‰, but I won't b able to reply 2nyt, so bear wid me pls...n no I dnt mean ur clothes lol hehe...πŸ˜†