M/G FF: With all my love & heart forever PG 125 - Page 24

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Newdime

Chapter Five....

Geet: "Main theek hoon Maan aap kaise hain?"  She fought hard to control the normal form.

I wonder how did she fight hard...I would have gone all red😳😳
 
Geet:  "Ji Adi mere liye wahi usual."  
              Maan wondered what is her usual...
 
Awwww.....he wanted to know heheπŸ˜†. I would be curious too.....heheπŸ˜†
 


              With that end of the note Geet turned to look at the man of the topic, his back was to her.  She noticed how easily he was conversing with Adi.  He had his hand linger on Adi's shoulder as if two very old friends together.  That touched her, there was no act, and it was a very genuine gesture.  After all, he is not that bad overall and flirting is not bad right? 

Wohi to mein bhi kehti huin...watz wrong in flirting......πŸ˜†πŸ˜†β˜ΊοΈβ˜ΊοΈ
 
 
  Feeling the same sensation once again, they assured that there is something brewing in heaven. 
 
😍😍...Eh Khuda.....mere liye bhi ek!!! Please........kuch brew karo na.❀️❀️ I went flat just after reading the line Newdime...imagine.....what will happen...if that actually happens...heheπŸ˜†πŸ˜† Haiiiiiiiii (sigh)☺️


as if sensing her uneasiness without any second thought he lifted her up from the ground and started to walk at the back door leading Adi and Pinki behind them. 

 


          Geet started to feel better; Adi gave her the water to drink.  She took few sips out of it and put the glass aside on the bench.  Pinki and Adi asked her all concerned if she is ok.  She assured them that she is fine, as she was about to get up she hear Ayanna calling her name along with Jiju.  She gave her tight hug asking what happened and if she is ok.  Geet replied with ease that she is doing fine it was just a choke.  She noticed Maan stood at the side with a disturbed face; he looked like as if someone took his life out of him.  She felt the urge to touch and sooth those lines that formed on his forehead.  She wanted to speak to him and calm him down.  She found it outlandish as she thought of him like this. 

 

Usne baat ki kuch aise dhangse Sapne degaya hajaroo rang ke...karloo mai kiya apna haal ye dile bekaraar....


Sorry folks, to post it very late, I have been busy and lazy.  Hope that you will like this chapter.

Likes and Comments please...to get some more.πŸ˜‰

Edited by Water. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pushpi

Chapter 5 was ❀️ lovely

Shu yaar? Tame kem update vadhare ane vadhare short karta jao cho
Chado....but it was awesome. Now I cant wait to see Geet talk to him after what happened...
Oh and that song was perfect for this update 😍



Awee you loved it....
Chkori shookar kar..maroo original chapter was only around 600 words...I increased it to almost 1000.  Thats what I was struggling while you were online...

I'm trying my best to give some talking between them for you...you see...Now I know I can't be script writer.

Haina it was perfect song...phela nasha...
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update..................it was awesome.............thanks for the pm..............pl cont
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Newdime

Rachana someone beat you again...

 
Kaun?
Kab?
Kaise?
Kyon?
Kis liye?
 
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Posted: 13 years ago
tis okay :-) I still liked it very very much. Awzum
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pushpi

Ye kya ho raha hai? I turn my back and you both are now dancing together...tsk tsk tsk

 
What is wrong in flirting Parooo????πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 13 years ago


I think everyone should read your post then my Chapter...it was great...I laughed and laughed ...with your ehhh Khuda....
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Newdime



I think everyone should read your post then my Chapter...it was great...I laughed and laughed ...with your ehhh Khuda....

 
Nahin yaar......it is ur Chapter.😊
Ur limelight.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Water.

 
Kaun?
Kab?
Kaise?
Kyon?
Kis liye?
 



Pushpi ne....aur kisne Paroo ne?\\

Pushpi any shoon thayon che?  Lage che...kai doro pariyo che....
Kaun?
Kab?
Kaise?
Kyon?
Kis liye?

Baapre///bik lage che...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Newdime

 
Pushpi ne....aur kisne Paroo ne?\\

Pushpi any shoon thayon che?  Lage che...kai doro pariyo che....
Kaun?
Kab?
Kaise?
Kyon?
Kis liye?

Baapre///bik lage che...

 
Main hoon bas main hoon bas main hoon
Koi doosra nahiπŸ˜†
 
Haha I know! I was surprised she didn't know who the person was πŸ˜›