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Posted: 13 years ago
Lojain that's for you...I have not watched the segment but i wrote this based on the pics...now will watch the segment.....

Hope you all like it


All the Soods are at the dinner table happy and enjoying meal…….they are happy cause they think CC has changed for good……but there is one person missing …..well and that's our VIREN SOOD……Nivi is so engrossed with the Soods and happy cause dear MAA has accepted her that she initially does not notice that Viren's missing…..in the middle of dinner when Viren has still not turned up she starts looking around for him….she asks Nandu and our Bandhu also does not know……She calls Viren to check where he is and he tells her that he is out for some work, whereas he is very much in their room preparing a surprise for Nivi…..After dinner everyone is chatting, but Nivi's mind is diverted as its late and Viren is not back yet……Finally everyone decides to retire to their rooms and Nivi does not move…..DD tells her don't worry Viren will be home you go and to your room…….Nivi listens to DD and goes to her room…..The door is closed and Nivi wonders why the door is closed as they always leave it open……

She gives a push to the door and its dark…..she is a bit scared and wonders why it is dark in the room …..she steps in and trying to get the light switch…..and suddenly the door behind her closes and she gives a jerk…she feels someone's presence…..and asks who is in the room…..she calls out to Viren…but no answer…and then suddenly she finds herself grabbed by someone and a hand over her mouth……and then a voice…..maine socha tha meri biwi duniya ki sabse bahadur biwi hai aur itne se andhere se dar gayi……Nivi says Viren tum yaha, lekin tum to bahar gaye the kam se…..Viren says main yahi tha aur tumhara liye ek surprise plan kar raha tha aur intezar kar raha tha…..Nivi says kaisa surprise aur ye light kyu band hai…..Viren tells Nivi itni bhi jaldi kya hai …..he walks Nivi to the middle of the room and holds her from behind and whispers in her ear…I love you…..and gives her a kiss on her cheek…..Nivi is unable to move and Viren slowly tightens his grip…..then he picks the remote to the music system and switches it on and the music Bahon Ki Darmiyan starts playing…..he releases Nivi and switches the light…..the room gets dimly lit and know Nivi can see that the whole room is decorated with flowers and candles…..and fully a romantic atmosphere and the breezing slowly into the room…..Nivi turns to Viren and asks him ye sab kya hai….Viren says hamari nayi jindigi ki shuruwat……he slowly walks towards Nivi …Virens eyes locked with Nivis…….Viren grabs Nivi's hand to pull her towards him but Nivi shys away …Viren still has his grip and walks towards her and holds her from back and caresses her face and Nivi tries to break the grip and walks towards the window and looking out and the breeze blowing and curtain flying lightly…..Viren walks behind her and the curtain falls on their head…..Viren turns Nivi around and looks in her eyes and Nivi apni aankhen sharm se niche jhukati hai…..Viren lightly hold her chin and lifts it up …..he then gives her a kiss on her fore head and the two hug…..he then brings Nivi to the bed and sit down…….Nivi  turns away from him….Viren moves towards her and slowly pushes her hair back and kisses her neck then cheek and slowly holds her and caresses her…the he gets up and lifts Nivi and puts her down on her side of the bed…..he climbs the bed from his side and moves towards Nivi's end…..Viren tells Nivi ki aaj maine bed ka ye fasla bhi par kar liya, aur aaj hum dono mein koi fasle nahi rahenge….Viren then hold Nivi and lies down and switches the lights off……rest is your imagination…..😉

Edited by Raj_Luv_NiViren - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome raj.....❤️
i loved it❤️
 
hey raj.............
y dnt u tell hina to post....... part 2 here....?
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow Raj awesome.... I'm so happy, we finally getting what we want. Thanks for the scene....:):):)
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Posted: 13 years ago
raj - hina yarrrrrrrr u r great love it
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Posted: 13 years ago

Love u Raj, it was awesome 👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Posted: 13 years ago
part 2  continued from where raj left off :
the moonlight from the closed curtain was the only light which showed  in their room.. he lie on the bed and turned towards she shyed away ..  he removed a strand of hair from her face using his lips ...   then he trailed his hand down her face stopped at her neck and  gave her along passionate kiss on the neck  .. niviv had by now lost all control..  he then trailed his hand down her back .. her turned her face twords her and gave her a sweet smile... he then moved more closer.. and pulled her closer to himself .. he felt her breath on him,  she felt his  heartbeat... he made love to her and while doing so he looked straight into her eyes.. their world seemed to change  .. they then became one while the moon and stars witnessed their love making ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
add me also :)
this is Swathi :)
one scene from my side...
NivRen in their room...Viren is doing some office work...Nivi enters with some coffee..Viren looks at her from corner of his eye and again continues his work...Nivi comes near Viren and takes away the file and says.."ab bahut ho gaya...tumhare paas itna bhi time nhi ki apne patni se pyaar se baatein kare :(" and she walks to the window..
Viren then smiles :) , follows her and hugs her from the back...
Nivi then turns to him and sings their song....Pal Pal....

They start dancing...

Clock stikes 4 in the morning...Nivi is shocked but Viren with a wide naughty smile on his face sings....Char baj gaye lekin party abhi baki hai ;) :P

guys forgive me if its full 2 FALTU.....

Love NivRen
Edited by GSPriya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

hi swati and sarahagstn..welcome aboard....

swati ur scene is so cute and romantic..loved it....

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Posted: 13 years ago
ha....really ???
wow....thanks a tonne
😃😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Posted: 25 February 2011 at 4:06am | IP Logged
Thats wonderful yaar,  another scene,  Nivren in room,  Viren sitting all sad in the room Nivi enters the room and starts singing,

yeh hai Reshmi zulfon kaa andheraa naa ghabraye
jahan tak mehek hai mere kesuon ke chaleaiye, 

Viren will be all shocked and will start singing
Yeh kyaa ho raha baba yeh kyaa ho raha hai

Nivi will reply kuch nahi nahi pyar ho raha hai