Awww u don't need to say sorry,it's ok😊Originally posted by: _Akanksha_
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-EDITED-sorryyy for the late reply! i got held up in stuff yesterday & i forgot that i had to unreserve, lol.anyway, when i opened the PM, i was like.. ''maha update? kaisa maha update?'' & then i saw it and i'm like.. AWWW. it started off with a fight which was nicely executed. i kinda forgot why asmin is angry & then i remembered the car scene and i'm like..OHHH. lol. i loved kruti & shlok's interaction. kruti is a STRONG character & i loved the little insight that her parents died n yeah. but why does she hate the raichands for it? guess we'll have to wait n watch, huh? the asmin-daksh part was SO CUTE. 😳 aanchal-daksh were ADORABLEEE. aww, aww, daksh is baking a cakee ! gosh, reminds me of liz's update, where yuvi & ashi burn the cake. LOL.continue soon .. && sorry once again.
thanx alot🤗wonderful update👏👏
so finally daksh proposed to asmin😳😳and aanchal also saw arjun holding her photo😳😳ohh so daksh is making a birthday cake😳😳thanks for the pm😊update soon😉
thanx😃
thank u 😃Originally posted by: anurag24t
Nice update and continue soon...
Aish:"mamma mamma"
(Madhu turned to her smiling)
Madhu:"happy birthday sweet heart……………….tumhare bhaggu tumhe lambi umar de"
Aish(irritatingly):"yah yah thank u but pahele ap mujhe ye bataye k kal rat main kiske room me sowi thi?"
Madhu:"kyu apne room me hi toh thi"
Aish:"no……mera room itna girly nahi ho sakta"
Madhu(smiled):"oh vo saab……….vo maine karwaya hai tumhare birthday k liye"
Aish:"what?mere birthday k liye?mamma you know na k mujhe ya saab pasand nahi hai"(suddenly she noticed the whole house was decorated with the same things)
Aish:"hey bhaggu……………….mamma what is thi……..apne pure ghar ko bimbo type bana dia hai or upar se roses vo bhi pink? yak yak……
(Madhu got serous)
Madhu:"bakwaas band karo"
(silently Arjun came & hugged her n Aish got shcked)
Arjun:"happy birthday Asmin ki bacchii"
Aish:"tumhe toh kisi horror film me hona chahiye tha………..kitna darate ho yaar"
Arjun:"chodo in saaab baato ko maine tumhare sarey friends ko invite kar dia hai…………sham ki party k liye"
Madhu:"ab tum apne room me jaao…………..maine tumahri almari me ek sundar si dress rakkhi hai………….tumhe wahi sham ki party me pahenna hai"
Aish:"dress??what dress?mamma apko pata hai k mujhe wo saab bimbo type dresses pasand nahi so why new dress??"
Madhu:"don't forget that u r a girl……………..ladkio ki tarha behave karma sikho"
(she left)
(Aish went to her room)
(in Daksh's house at night)
(he was dressing up for party)
Daksh(looking at himself in the mirror):"hooh………….aaj main Asmin ko impress karke hi rahunga"(full of confidence)
(in Dobriyal's house)
(the house was looking fabulous……….all the guests were talking each other…………..Arjun wore a white sherwani n Anchal wore a pink lahenga,it was so pretty glitter work in upper part)
(Daksh & Princi entered in the house n Arnab came to join them)
Arnab:"hello mr.Rajwansh………..welcome to the party"
Princi:"very nice pary mr.Dobriyal………….by the way where's the birthday girl?"
(Daksh was already trying to find out her……………looking around the house)
Arnab:"vo ready ho rahi hai………abhi atihi hogi"
(Daksh wore a red shirt & black coat)
(Kruti n Shlok was also there……………….Shlok was standing with Chandeena & Kruti was staring at them strangely)
(Arjun took the mike)
Arjun:"may I have your attention please"
(everyone listened to him)
Arjun:"humari jhalli si birthday girl or meri pyari si sister……………here she comes Asmin Dobriyal"
(spot light on her……………..she was coming throw the steps wearing a red red lahenga…………………….lower part was designed with some colourful stones & upper part was backless n a little short & various design…………………she was looking like a everlasting angel…………………it was a madly smile on Daksh's face,he was staring at her………………in other side Kruti was making her face like she don't care n Shlok also staring at her)
(she came down from steps n Arnab & Madhu came to her)
Arnab:"happy birthday my gundi daughter"(hugged her)
Madhu:"happy birthday beta"(hugged)
(then Arjun came)
Aish:"so mr.bare bhaiyya…….where's my gift"
Arjun:"yeh party………..yehi toh hai mera gift for u"
Aish:"you such a idiot"(she left)
(Anchal came to him looking at Aish)
Anchal:"Asmin kitni pyari lagrahi hai na?"(smiling)
(Arjun looked at her)
Arjun:"tum bhi kuch kam nahi ho"
(she looked at him)
(Aish start talking to the guests but suddenly she saw Daksh was staring at her)
(Daksh smiled)
(she turned her face in other side………………..Kruti noticed that)
(Kruti thought)
Kruti:"yeh Daksh uss Asmin ko aise kyu dekh raha hai?kahi usse pyaar toh nahi karta hai…………….noway……but agar sach me karta hai toh?...main aisa hone nahi dungi"
(Anchal came to Daksh who was sitting in bar drinking soft drinks)
Anchal:"tum Aish k liye kuch nahi laye?"
(Daksh turned to her & smiled)
Daksh:"laya hoon but not now……………..sahi waqt aney pe dunga"(again turned to table)
(after some time Aish cut the cake………….as usual everyone was singing the birthday song……………..after cutting the cake Shlok came to her)
Shlok:"happy birthday Asmin,wish you many many happy returns of the day"(n gave her a locket)
Aish:"what is this?"
Shlok:"yeh ek locket hai………….isse all time apne sath rakhna……….it'll protect you"
(Aish laughed)
Aish:"what mujhe protect karne k liye?but kisse?"
Shlok:"aise hi kisi khatre se…………hamesha apne paas rakhna"(he left)
(Aish confusedly looking at him)
(after some time start dancing)
(Daksh went to Aish to offer her for dance but Kruti came in middle)
Kruti:"hey Daksh…….wanna dance with me?"
(Daksh was confused between 2 girls…………..he wont to go with Aish but even he asked her Kruti asked him so had no choice…………..he went with Kruti in the dance floor n start dancing)
(Aish was staring at them……………..she was so jealous n Daksh also looking at her,then Shlok came to Aish & offered her for dance)
Shlok:"Asmin………..would u like to dance with me?"
Aish(smiled):"of course"(they were went to floor)
(it was playing a soft music n all the couples were close to each other………………Anchal-Arjun was also dancing together……………………..then all boys changed their partners & Aish came to Daksh………….their eyes met,staring at each other n Kruti saw that)
(Meera was watching them)
Meera:"kitne pyaare lag rahe hai dono ek sath"(smiling)
(suddenly she noticed Kruti…………she felt the same feeling what she felt for Shlok so she came to Shlok n went in a corner)
Meera:"tumhe uss ladki k bareme kuch pata hai"
Shlok:"vo Kruti hai"(looks like he was trying to hind something about her)
Meera:"kya chupa rahe ho?"
Shlok:"waqt aney pe zarur bataunga but not now……………….please trying to understand"(he left)
thanx😃Originally posted by: abhayfan_dishu
nice update
thank u😃Originally posted by: anurag24t
It was a great update...
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