**THE WAY I LOVED U**[FINISHED] - Page 20

lykd it vry mch trisha....do cntinu...add me to ur pm list too😊Edited by Nidhsara - 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Nidhsara

lykd it vry mch trisha....do cntinu...add me to ur pm list too😊

oh..thank u

sorry trish 4 posting my comment so late

Originally posted by: sanjna4

sorry trish 4 posting my comment so late

actually was busy incontest

so coming to update

i love d way daksh ws getting j of shlok

and as alws daksh and asmin r superb

nd i dnt knw whom to choose 4 asmin both r rockstars

u r makin me confuse

nd aanchal and arjun are super romantic

keep updating soon

and lovely updates

thanx Sana😃

Gr8 update.. Shlok-Daksh-Aish part was Great.. Angad do u wanna partner was amusing.. Anchal-Arjun locked in library how romantic.. Update d next part soon.. n plz do pm me.. lol..

hey

 

Anchal:"what? lock ho gaya hai?"
(arjun trying to open the door but no results)

(suddenly Anchal remember 1 thing)

Anchal:"oh no.............i was forgot k ye door sirf bahar se khulta hai"

Arjun:"what??toh aab kya hoga?"

Anchal:"I don't know………..agar ki yaha nahi aya to ye darwaza khulna namumkin hai"

(they both r look scared)

(Arjun sat on a chair)

Arjun:"fine….toh kissi ka wait karte hai"

 

 

(in other side……………..Aish came out from the class room…………..thinking about Shlok)

Aish:"Shlok mujhe apna pura naam kyu nahi bata raha hai? I'm sure koi garbar hai………………mujhe pata karna hi parega ki usska sir name kya hai but how...yah….college records me usske bareme koi na koi information mil jayegi…………….mujhe principal sir se baat karni paregi"

(she went to the princi's office………………..princi was doing some works)

(Aish knocked the door)

Aish:"may I come in sir?"

Princi:"yes…..

Aish:"hello sir…I'm Asmin Dobriyal"

Princi:"oh to tum ho Asmin…………….Daksh se tumhare bareme suna tha"

Aish:"Daksh se???"

Princi:"lekin tum yaha……………Daksh ne kuch kaha?"

Aish:"no sir……….actually mujhe ek student k bareme information chahiye thi"

Princi:"information?............kisske bareme?"

Aish:"Shlok……………..mujhe usska sir name nahi pata…………..maine usse pucha bhi lekin no ans"

Princi:"dekho………kissi studen k bareme koi info or kissi student ko dena humare college rules me nahi hai……so I'm sorry"

Aish:"plz sir…………mera janna bohut zaruri hai"

Princi:"I'm sorry miss Dobriyal……………lekin main kuch nahi kar sakta"

Aish:"fine sir"

(she left the office very sadly)

(came out from office)

Aish:"aab kaise pata karu k ye wohi Shlok hai ki nahi"

(suddenly she starts smiling…………..she have a plan)

 

 

 

(in library)

Anchal:"abhi tak koi nahi aya"(she looks very scared)

Arjun:"don't worry kuch nahi hoga…..main hoon na"

(Anchal looking at him & smiling)

(suddenly the light was gone)

(Anchal screamed)

Anchal:"oh god..ye light kaise chali gayi?Arjun tum yaha ho na?"

Arjun:"ha main yaha hoon……tum daro mat"

Anchal:"mujhe andhere se bohut dar lagta hai"

(she came closer of Arjun…………….then hugged him…..the same way Abhiya hug in old library)

Arjun:"Anchal…………main yaha hoon tumhare sath"

(she looking in his eyes)

(they staring each other)

 

 

(after college in Dobriyal's house)

(Aish trying to talk with Arnab)

Aish:"papa ek bar meri baat sunlo na"

Arnab:"noway……I'm sure tum koi ulti sidhi zid karogi………….mujhe kuch nahi sunna hai"

Aish:"hey bhaggu………..mujhe aapne ek aisa papa dia hai jo meri baat hi nahi sunte hai"

Arnab:"tumhare bhaggu ko blem mat karo………………….tumhari zid sunke koi bhi aisi baat karega"

Aish:"fine……..aap sune ya na sune main bol rahi hoon………………college main ek ladka hai………

Arnab:"wait wait wait……….ladka?...........aab ye ladke ka kya chakkar hai?"

Aish:"papa aisa kuch nahi hai………………..aapko yaad hai bachpan me mera ek dosst tha Shlok?"

Arnab:"ha ha…………..Raichand's ka beta"

Aish:"right…………………uss ladke ka naam bhi Shlok hai"

Arnab:"to?"

Aish:"toh main soch rahi thi k kahi vo yehi Shlok to nahi?"

Arnab:"tumne usska sir name pucha?"

Aish:"pucha tha lekin ussne koi jawab nahi dia……………..so main kahe rahi thi k agar aap kissi tarha pata lagate ki vo kon hai toh….

Arnab:"okey main dekhta hoon……………par kuch kaha nahi jaa sakta hai"

Aish:"jitna ho sake utna hi karna"

(she hugged Arnab)

 

 

(in Daksh bedroom)

(he was thinking about Asmin)

Daksh:"mujhe itna farak kyu par raha hai?Asmin Shlok k sath raheti hai to mujhe kyu bura lagta hai?................kahi mujhe usse………………nahi nahi……….ye nahi ho sakta …………..uss wacko k sath main……………..lekin mujhe pahele kabhi kissi ladki k liye aisa feel nahi hua………………oh god main pagal ho jaunga"

(he went to sleep)

awww......... Edited by sanjna4 - 13 years ago

hei trish,
ok no pbm..finish off ur exams 1st then aaram se update karo..ur mom has taken leave for ur sake na dont make her tensed..by the way update was nice..very good still now no one came to open the library?misha ban gayi detective..trying to find out shlok's surname..so she remembers shlok-her childhood frnd..wish they relive their childhood moments..ok lets c..wat u hav for us regarding shlok-aish..continue when possible..
luv,
ramani

aww, achal arjun locked, and achal ko yaad aaya ki door bahaar se khulta hai😳 lol