MN OS GALLERY...FRIEND AHEAD OF HUSBAND..Pg 67... - Page 47

amazing ending... loved it. keep writing😛

just awesome.

Mahaaa

U ended my fav OS???????

Kyun bhai????itna beharam tum kaise nikli?? Itna jalim kaam kyun kia??:(

By GOD – mayur and their unique fight- GOD in dono ko Oscar milna chaiye..LOL LOL

 

Hehehehehe mayu took nups bag and nups took mayank bag.. pher start huye another fight..

 

Hey hey- love at first sight . bapre ye maynk tou chupa rustam nikli..:D :D :D

But nups- she was nautanki , drama queen as usual.  She don't want to marry this langgor. But maynk isn maynk . he knew how to manaofy Nupur.. ye banda nupur se yes bola he liya… GOOD GOOD…

 

Hello ji- apne keh diya aur maine maan liya- huh -itna easy nehi hai meri sweetu .. tum itna galadfemiya lekar khushfemia main maat raho..

Mujhe at least  3/ 4 update aur chaiye. And its not req, its an order ------koi plz nehi bolungi .. strictly keh rahi hu I wanna see mayur fight more with their cute romance

So shuru ho jaw… I wanna next part soon

Take care

note: waiting for next part,. update nehi karoge tou baa tnehi karungi. humari dosti khatam...:( :( :(

it ws simply da best

not fair maha!
y did u end it soo soon!😭
cute update dear!!
finally nups got ready 2 marry mayu!
luvd it
keep writin more on MN🤗

lovely end dear...this is somehow offbeat...!! i always love to read ur written pieces,i wish it had more parts isnt it possible to continue with it??  :)


plzzz maha,if its possible do come up with few more post marriage chapters of them..😳😳 it wil b a treat to read..cant u consider it dear plzzz??😉
Edited by palz_ArTi4ever - 12 years ago

NICE N CUTE OS...LOVED D WAY U ENDED DIS OS...FRIENDSHIP S JUST D BEGINING OF THEIR BEAUTIFUL RELATIONSHIP...WELL WRITEN..👍🏼

business trip: 

beautiful with a pinch of fun...a trip to remember...akhir yeh bala uski gala parh hi gayi😆...amazing update maha...!

p.s...sorry for this late and short comment 😳...u know why its is so...!
Edited by valliyah - 12 years ago