Pot of Gold - AR[DMG] FF - Page 19

 

I'm reserving this box too, for the comment to this (Final 😲) part.

 

I'm going to jump in straight with the quotes from this part:

 

"that was when Mary was born" Uff! This was such a powerful line. It gave quite a phoenix-like imagery to Mary's character. The fire had not only killed Rahul, but evidently, Riddhima too. But out of the ashes had come none other than Mary. Having said that, of course, I realise that Riddhima hadn't actually died; Armaan's taken care of that.

 

"May be it was time to heal, and time to move ahead for both of them, that's why fate had thrown them together once again." I can't actually pinpoint why I loved this line. Was it that it told us that Armaan and Riddhima would inevitably move on and be happy together? Or was it that it gave a sense of completeness, as it encompassed their past, their present and their future? I'm really not sure, but Aria, this was a beautiful line.

 

"how come, you are still here today…?" This made me wonder whether Armaan had questioned himself regarding this, at all, before Riddhima had asked him. I mean he'd convinced himself that he was here for Rahul, and he does later ponder over whether he's stayed because Mary is Riddhima (or vice versa). But until Riddhima had asked him, had that even crossed his mind?

 

"nothing was worth more than now" Riddhima had always lived in the past. It's why she'd decided to go back to the diner, and why she's become Mary. Armaan, however, had more often than not, thought about the future. He had moved away for his future's sake and he'd lost everything in New York because he'd invested in the future. But to be honest, they were both somewhat happier now than they had been for quite a while. There were together, in the present, in the now, and that was the source of their new found calm

 

"it's been the kind of reprieve which has inexplicably calmed me…" This, in a sense, follows on from what I said earlier. At this moment in time, despite all the emotional turmoil, and river of feelings, they'd reached a sort of tranquility. And this line just hit that point home brilliantly!

 

"my pot of gold…" I had wondered where your title might fit into the scheme of things. And I'm glad you chose to show it where you did. It really gave a lovely rounding off point to the FF. It was like the end of a rainbow. Only, it's not quite the end, is it? For Armaan and Riddhima, it's almost like a new beginning.

 

You know what I loved about your FF as a whole? There was so much subtlety in it. The Armaan-Riddhima love story was slow, and not in your face. It was always there, and as a reader, you knew they had a strong binding relationship. But it never really hit you until the very end. An absolutely fantastic FF Aria!

I understand now why you said, it had to happen. I wasn't aware it was a short series, for whatever reason and was wondering how you'd bring it all back. Looked much further ahead into the story, i did...it does change your thoughts when you know how long and in depth its going to be. 

It was a fun series, right amount of curiosity..story..feelings..imagination and character stretch. Usually i don't like no-endings (cuz its the writers job to imagine and write up...lol) but i feel i wouldn't have liked the ending you'd have put up..there can be no 'correct' ending to this!

Listen to more songs and keep these coming :) 

Cheers!! 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ps. Good luck for the remaining papers!

 

 

 

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