FF "Dadi's Revenge" UPdated chapter 16 pg31 - Page 5

loved it...Mina your're a brilliant writer no doubt about that.⭐️👏..and your imagination is just too good...i can clearly picture everything in my head😍

dadi dadi dadi!! u gotta love her.. now what did they do with arjohi's room??  raj is too innocent! just love him..

hey Mina thanks buddy what a great part yaar , i really enjoyed it......guess what i'm going to read it again, hehe...........

Hey it ws gr8 prt..kash aisa show me bhi hota..luvd it...nw plz cntinue nxt prt soon...:)

mina dear thanxxxxxxx so much.as usual i never want ur ff to end but it does😭can u update soon plssssssssssss.i know we are pestering you but what can v do? u r 2 goodddddddddd!!👏i check every hr tosee if u hav written or not.. u got us addicted to ur lethal nasha, now keep giving us doses promptly or we'll die.......hehehehe.

loved it loved it loved it to the core....omg it was so adorable and cute i just didnt want it to end....the way arjun took care of her...i could visualise the whole scene with karan and kritz...and dadi is rocking it as always....wah wah wat a punishment and it hasnt started yet....he almost dropped her seeing the single bed lolzz what will he do when they'll have to use it...oh god its goanna be just like the handcuffed in cottage night....m loving it...update soon....lets c wat arjuhi do next....

mina!!! 

gr8 part dear osamnnnnnnnn !!!!!!!!!!

just brilliant

hi, just found your ff, its great. can just imagine this happening in the show. and dadi shes the best. please update soon