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SaJan-SaJan

@SaJan-SaJan

Goldie

Posted: 13 years ago

#711

hi.. sry 4 d late rply...

was a bit busy...

read d last 3 parts...

loved it wen geet did watever maan told her 2 do without even asking once y he was doin all ds....

dadima is having a future plan... superb...

NT is such a big gambler.. evn her family disowned her..wat else can v expect anyway...

as 4 ur question,i wold love 2 see a special bond developing between maaneet coz of circumstances....

thnx 4 d pm..

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ada_angel

@ada_angel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#712

interesting update

thanxs fr pm

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ada_angel

@ada_angel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#713

that was a nice one...dadi is so smart

thanxs fr pm

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Hinal.94

@Hinal.94

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Posted: 13 years ago

#714

will you like to let circumstances develop a bond between Maaneet?

No i wouldnt let them bond bcoz once they reach delhi maan will have his own life to live but he can only help geet when she has to face dev or something related to it n otherwise geet will be with dadima so i dont think so it will happen

n loved the updates n yes want to know more about nt's past

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preethia

@preethia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#715

well nice update.............weekend was busy with personal work didnt get any time to read the updates..........

well abt nt past i wud say enough of her in that one update..............pl no more .............

abt the maaneet bond ofcourse yes yeh bhi koi puchne wali baat hain.............

maaneet bonding and dm having hopes.........lets c how things turn out for them...........

i am eager to know wat happens next..............when they reach delhi..............or is maan going to b telling her abt dev and all when they travel or r u going to let some time for it..................

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SIYAHI

@SIYAHI

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Posted: 13 years ago

#716

oyye aren't you updating? I really am anxious about the sameera case

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SIYAHI

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Posted: 13 years ago

#717

oyye aren't you updating? I am really anxious about the sameera case

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564326

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Posted: 13 years ago

#718

Originally posted by: DILIBADAAT
oyye aren't you updating? I am really anxious about the sameera case

relax no Sameera now

Sameera will enter in bits and peices

just at present

Maan's family structure in coming update

Later Dev in the coming next later punishment

Later Geet's education

Sameera will only be mentioned now and then

Shruti

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564326

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Posted: 13 years ago

#719

Part 16

They settled down and started the journey behind the car, soon Maan got irritated with the speed of the car so he over took and went ahead, he now and then looked at her,

she was lost in her thoughts, it looked as if she was talking to someone, she kept looking at the sky time to time,

the change of her expressions indicated she was quarrelling with some one, may the heavens above, she time to time uttered Babaji, as his observation continued he concluded that she was definitely talking to God addressing him as Babaji, and was arguing also.

Almost for 30-35 mins he patiently watched the charade but got irritated as well as amused witnessing her emotions from the sweetest to the bitterest. She sure loves talking, though he had not seen her do much talking but he was sure she is a complete chatter box

M: if you are done scolding your Babaji, then you better give him a break, he needs to listen to other people's plea also.

She just looked at him with a shocked look and made a face similar to a 5 yr old who has been caught red handed

M: you can talk to me

She shrugged

M: I can be a good listener, and you know I am

She ignored

M: you love talking

She nodded

M: then talk to me

She turned her face in opposite direction

He was irritated, here I MSK, people die to talk to me and this chit is just ignoring me, he stopped the jeep and was about to shout at her,

She indicated 1 min then made a prayer and said "you said that if I as much as uttered a word you will throw me out of the jeep'

M: oh! Ok, that's why you were quite, and I thought you were

She looked innocently at him

M: forget it, you can talk ok I take my words back, you can utter few words

G: only few words (innocently)

M: ok more then few words

G: then it is only possible if you do the talking and I do the listening

M: me talking to you

G: yes

M: and what will I talk to you

G: any thing may be about Delhi where you are taking me

M: yes, I need to tell you a lot before we reach there, and I said that I will tell you the whole truth

G: that Dev is your bro

M: step bro

She gave him a surprised look

M: let me tell you from the beginning and before you face Dev

G (interrupted): he is in Delhi?

M: yes

G: from when?

M: I called him; he came in, in the morning

G: does he know that you know me

M: no

G: why?

M: some things need to be sorted out face to face, now come sit in the jeep I will tell you every thing from the very beginning while be shorten the distance to Delhi

They sat and started the journey

M: now I'll begin and listen carefully

She seemed lost just nodded

M: I did not hear a yes

G: yes

M: what?

G: yes

M: louder, I am hard at hearing

G; YES Mr. MSK I give you an ear, and now do you hear or I have

to shout so as to break your ear drums

M: nooooooooo, ok I'll start

You have met my DM Savitri Devi wife of late Mr. Manavendra Singh Khurana, she had two children Devendra and Vinita, Devendra my late father was married to Meenakshi my late mother.

precap: Maan's past (pls no Sameera in this)

pls post your comments you know you all are my motivations

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KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 13 years ago

#720

awesome part. loved it.
aww geet talking with her baba jee.
msk having memory problem khud hi chup rehne ko kaha tha then bola baat karo.
good ggeet gave him right ans.
loved their scene and conversation
so maan telling everything ,
I know it, he will tell .
Dev is in delhi and it's knew by geet, maan told it to geet.
dev is maan's step bro.
waiting for maan's past more.
update soon.

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 13 years ago

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