PriDa OS: A Second Chance At Love(For Khush) - Page 3

Originally posted by: crazypridaholic

Mahammmm.....

Beautiful.....Marvelous.....OS ⭐️⭐️⭐️...!!! All dat angst part.....Brilliantly done 👍🏼....But so expecting it frm *Queen of Angst* aftr all... (as ppl call u here 😛😳...)...!!!

 

Alwayzz a treat to read ur OS's....!!! I still cnt get over *Tears of Blood*....dats a magic u created with ur write-up's 😳.....!!! Wonderful work...!!!

 

Great job 👏👏....LOVED it to d core....!!!

 

 

 

-Nitika

 

Hey Nitika.. Thanks alot pal.. Glad you liked the angst.. I dont there was much though.. apart from the hotel room.. Hahaha @ Queen of angst My friends are too kind here.. thats too much to live up to..

Tears of blood? Uhhh i think that one is really quite badly written.. Ah well.. it was my first ever attempt.. Thank you so much for being so kind.. 😊

Originally posted by: khwaish.e.arsh

Maham !!

wonderful OS this was ..Totally Pridaistic..from start to finish..their fights , arguments , pri carrying her in arms , dancing , kissing and and totally loved their convo at the end ...this wat i call a love- story...superb👏

i wish khusi ka b'day saal mein 365 baar aata ..toh humein roz aisi dhamakedar daawat milti ...itni saari pridalicious treats ....

waise aaj ke din khushi poore ek din ki ho gayi thi..toh uski treat kahan hai ??😉..
bolo bolo tell tell ??...
hehehe me evn bigger bhukkad den Jai Chawla wen it cums to Prida 😆

w8ng fr more Prida stories frm u

--khwahish😊

Khwahisssshhhh... Dont be so nice to me... Very humbled by the fact that you liked this so much....

@Khush's bithday: Hahahaha.. Thank God that cant happen.. i would be a goner trying to keep up 😆

Uhhh... yeah no present for the one day old thing...😆

Originally posted by: jakhushi

M......... Hey Khush.. 

 

 

Khush is in Love (imagine me with 3 hearts going gol gol around my head)😆......with You. You are right...you are an adorable bachcha.....Thanks for this fantabulous birthday treat. Kya kya kya! You are actually being THIS nice to me in public! Haye rabbaaaa.... It's my lucky day too then :P btw i CANT imagine you with 3 hearts going gol gol around your head.. It's too unreal.. 🤣

 

Will post longer comment when I get time to breathe..... Yes yes, still waiting 😛

 

 

And M..."It's complicated"!!!!!???🤔.......wait till I whack you on this😛. I swear again i was not being naughty about that.. u really dont trust me at all do you :P

 

 

Love

Khush.

Originally posted by: Kanchan.S

Such a wonderful OS Maham

wonderful to read prida fighting around ... it had all the emotions...anger,confusion,pain,love....

Wat a treat to read such OS and that to on the occasion of Khushi's birthday 

Loved it to the core

Thanks alot Kanchan.. really glad to know you liked this... Thanks again.. 😊

Originally posted by: Devil_Of_Heaven

maham..... it was fabulous buddy....

loved every single scene.....

really dont have words right now....

superb....

_mah

Thanks so much Mah... really glad to know you liked it so much.. 😊

Originally posted by: sonyo

MaHam, that was superb sizzling OS.. Loved it to the core..  Well, me again.. have to have to repeat it that you're a gifted writer. Loved how beautifully & expressively emoted there feelings and relating with the back drop sequence'. It is the intensity you have in your write-ups.. Starting with PriDafistic fights and ending with the lovelyiest, beautiful converse.. Purely adorable and Pri leading Damz second time (at the end) that was 😍😍😍........sigh

Thanks to the Khushiez, specially.. wish her aloads of more😊'

PS: Maham; afta reading this OS I got 1 more teen ka tadka point..😳 many thanks to you again...

Hey Sana.. Thank you so much for your kind words.. errr ummm @ intensity really dont know what to say to that except thank you.. . glad you liked the end so much too... i wanted to keep it simple.. 😊

Originally posted by: supriya18

very nice OS
Fantastic work

Thanks Supriya 😊

M....

Originally posted by: jakhushi

M.... Hi again.. 

 

This SS and PriDa's plight in it reminded me of a particular song.... " Bolo Na kya Hua ". Remind me to share that with you. Uhh okay.. sincerely hoping it was released after my birth 😛😆

Sometimes...love takes a long roundabout way to find itself back....this was one of those cases. 

 

Loved their caustic interchanges....reminded me of the initial days of PriDa. They took One - Up Man-ship to an art form😛. And that line on Pri's hold of her as if his life depended on it....lovely. Infact thoroughly enjoyed their conversations throughout this story... Haha glad you liked that line... have always felt like that when it comes to PriDa.. you know my obsession my hands 🤣 glad you liked all the conversations too..

 

Loved the plot, loved how you gave it your special touch and made a lyrical journey, albeit a different one for 2 people.....who will always be One entity...PriDa. Glad you liked it all.. Uhhh lyrical journey... how in the world did i do that.. 😕

 

Thanks so much M for this special effort....I dont deserve it...but heck....if I can read some awesome stories on PriDa...I am not complaining😉. OHHH? now somebody is going i dont deserve it? Who was the one with all that emotional blackmail in the form of being oh so understanding about me not wanting to write an OS and then the open requests?? 'i dont deserve it' yeah right.. as if you wouldnt have murdered me if i hadnt written the OS for you..

 

Hugs for all your expressions of friendship. hahaha.. hugs back..

 

 

Khush.

Hey Maham,⭐️

yaa i know i am really late in replying to ur OS which u wrote in Jan but what can i do with these exams...pain in the ass i tell u but the OS is still afresh in mah head coz its AMAZZZINNN 👏loved the OS fom the first word to the last.
Damzzi scared of lizards😆 loved that and their fights, and dthe tips thing😆 love Prithvi's complaining and Daminii laughin her way to glory! Damzzi makin Prithvi jealous OOooo loved dat n damini drunk was just too good and how she got him to dance wit her 😉 just love the way u write it all
And  the last convo...Superb👍🏼

Great job Maham👏
As i always telll Love Khushi for the happiness she brings to us through u...

Snehal