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Tum yeha

Aap yeha

What the hell ur doing here'''and what the hell'''''''..

And why this flowers are here''

He is fumbling out''''..his anger'''..

His eyes are turned out in anger'''''''

But still he had her in his hands''''.

Geet:try to come out''..but he is still'''''..

She is completely confused'''''''''.

He made her to stand on her feet.

Where pinky.came there'..seeing her cousin/friend''''''..

In the hands of her hot /dd boss''''''''..

First word:geeet'''''''.

She turned to find.all the staff staring at the scene'..as it is completely out of world for them.

He looked around..andyelled''

Im not paying to stare me like that '''''''''..go back'

And he looked at her''''..

His mind:name :geet''not bad'''''.

Pinky.came and dragged geet with her'

She hugged her and said happy birthday pinky..tehn adi listen toit.

Today is pinky'''''''.birthday.why she is not informed''''..

Sasha and tasha'''''''''.looked her''..as she got the opportunity.in the hands of the DD''''.

Geet''..totally confused.

Yeh babaji.aap inee har baar mere samne''..laa kar kadi karthe hay..woh be yesi situations'''mein''.

Uffo'.

She got a call from .the hotel''..as she is gone for the party'''

Maan came back to his office.

What 's wrong she is chasing him in his dreams'''now she is near to his eyes'''''''.h god''''..

And he saw there is a invitation on the table''''.

He is'''''..looked at it''.

He cannot avoid''as it is one of his biggest client''''''''''''.

And he got ready for party''''''''''''''..

At the evening''

In mean time'.geet is busy for the party'''.she had again taken two duties'''''''''''as she had already buyed pinky a dress''''with her savings'''''.now she need to save some other money.so extra.money for her further education''as she is going to join in the college''''..need to do further study'''..her dream.so that she can earn respectable money'''''''.she goes on'''''''''.

As there is a dress code'''''''''''''..of the hotel'..

It is a cocktail party'''''''.so her dress is decent''''''''..

But still''''''''..she is in gown''''

She is serving drinks in the bar'''''..

Her dress'''''..

She is moving around''''.

Until she saw him'the corner'''''''

He is at the bar'''.

Gulping the drink''''''''''..

He always like that''''''

He saw her'''''''.

The dress'''..serving client s with her genuine smile''''.some how he didn't like that.but something happens in his heart.when she smile'''..

The innocence face is covered with locks''''''''''''''she is removing while'..serving the glasses..

Suddenly she felt a grip'''''.

Try to loose''''..but still''''''

He covered the mouth with his hand''..

She is in dark room'''''

She has tears in her eyes'''''''''''''''''''''

The person rude eyes.he is completely drunk''''''

He is using the advantage of the dark room''''..

As he proceeded''''.

Suddenly.a hand stopped him'

She felt some cloth covered''''''''''.and leave the grip'''''''''..

She felt someone had lifted her'''''''and made her to lie on sofa''.

Then she heard.a cracking sound of bones''

Where she open her eyes to find a strong hand'.punching the shadow''''''''''

He punched the hand..like a stammer''''''''.

He throw him'''.to the wall'''''''..blood is the person''..

Brusied.eyes''''and lips''''..and the person is no longer can stand on his feet'''.

FB:geet is serving the drinks.

Suddenly a drunker saw her'''.

His eyes filled with lust on seeing her figure.

The skirt'.and the dress'''''''''making him crazy'''''..

And her face'and curves''''..

He followed her''''''''.

As bar tender informed for extra drinks'

\she gone to bring them for storage room.which is right behind the rooms''''.she need to cross the suit rooms'''''''''.by the person''caught her''and held her in  the room and try to molest her'''''''''''''

At the same time.he didn't know that another person watching her with a intensity''''''''''''..

Not lust.but care'''''''''''.

He Is enjoying her touch in the morning'.her eyes'.and he is observing her from the distance''''.don't know it feel nice for him''''''

Her eyes'her move her smile'''''..he is totally lost.

He is dashing in his black suit'''''''''''''sleeveless shirt  shirt'''''''.curves visible.attracting the ladies .wandering around''''''''.

Every girl eyes on him'''

He is boring at the '''''''..party.as he is waiting for his client'''''..

Need to avoid the crowd''''''..

And at the time''''''''..

Geet dragged his attention'''''''''''.

He is totally watching her''''''.without a blink'''''''''''''''..

Suddenly he felt she disappered''..

He feared'.his heart is loosing''''''.

Then the bar tender informin g her.

He checked the watch''''.

And e observed the person''''.following her'

He felt something strange'''''''..

He sensed the danger''''..

As only'.

At the time'''''

He saw what Is the expected''''''..

He saw the person dirty hands on his girl'''''''.

Suddenly anger hitm him'..

He banged the door.barked in.and threw the person to the ground.

The tears.make him steady/////////////////

He is completely shattered''..

He saw her scaff''''''''''.

And he threw''..

She is weak''she is about tofall.

He catched her and made her to sit in couch..

As the averged man..try to hit him''''''''.back.

He held his hand'and give him punches''''''''''''.

And make him to loose the senses.and he fell on the ground'''''''''.

and this what happened''''''''''''''

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Edited by srilu_123 - 13 years ago
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#42
supreb..love it.
thx
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loved it 
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Maan run towards geet………

Geet hugged him,……….

He don't know why there is something……………….

Which binds him.

He felt relieved on seeingher….

She hugged him tighter.why everytime…..he comes as a saviour..for her……………

And he always………..come front…….

He asked ……………..that she can drop somewhere………

As before she nod..

He dragged he rfrom the party……………

And she made to sit in the car……….

She is shocked…..

And he shoved into the driver seat.

And start with full speed…………………….

He didn't ask any thing…..

After sometime…………………..she started to speak…….

But the car stopped infront of……a park……………………………….

He turned to find…………..

Geet is sleeping……………………………

Her cheeks,,,,are filled with dried tears……..

The eyes remain close ddue to stress…………………………..

Her innocent face…….what makes her special…………………………….

And why he always melt on seeing the face……………..

And why she didn't stop in falling into troubles………..everytime he cannot save her…….

Today he is on time…………………..

But what about tomorrow……………………..

He brought back to his out house…

Again carrying her in his arms…………….

And she is sleeping…….peacefully…………………

He puts her in the bed…………………..

The hair locks in her face………………………………

Are aankh se boond gira koi
Chingari ka tukda jala koi
Umeed ko aag laga zara
Sehra ki pyaas bujha zara

Umeed ko aag laga zara
Sehra ki pyaas bujha zara
Ghan itna baras ke galne lagoon
Mein paani ke upar tarne lagoon

Behene de mujhe behene de mujhe
Behene de mujhe behene de
Ohhh
Behene de mujhe behene de mujhe
Behene de mujhe behene de

Behene de ghangor ghata
Behene de paani ki tarah
Saagar mein jaa girna hai
Behene de nadiyaan ki tarah

Shart lagi hai mar jaane ki
Jeena hai toh pyaar mein
Dil kahin bhi ho mera
Jaan rakhi hai yaar mein
Behja behja hai saagar ka kehna
Behja behja hai nadiyaan ko behna

Patte se tapakti boond ki awaaz sunai di thi
Nadiyaan mein tapak aur gum ho ja
Beh gaya beh gaya jo reh gaya reh gaya
Beh gaya beh gaya jo reh gaya reh gaya
Behene de mujhe behene de mujhe
Behene de mujhe behene de
Ohhh
Behene de mujhe behene de mujhe
Behene de mujhe behene de
Behene de ghangor ghata
Behene de paani ki tarah
Saagar mein jaa girna hai
Behene de nadiyaan ki tarah

Mera pal pal ang ang bhar diya
Tune jaan pe junoon saa kar diya
Mera hai kya jo mein haar du
Jaan teri hai tujh pe vaar du
Doob gaye jo suna hai saare
Tere dere aatey hai
Dil ko chulu mein bechare
Doobkiyan ghante khaate hain

Beh ja behja chal todh kinaare ko
Behja behja dhar le majhdhaare ko

Chingari udha ke raakh se
Ek boond gira ke aankh se
Chalne ka ishaara kar gaya

Kar gaya kar gaya sab bhar gaya bhar gaya
Kar gaya kar gaya sab bhar gaya bhar gaya
Behene de mujhe behene de mujhe
Behene de mujhe behene de
Ohhh
Behene de mujhe behene de mujhe
Behene de mujhe behene de

Behene de ghangor ghata
Behene de paani ki tarah
Saagar mein jaa girna hai
Behene de nadiyaan ki tarah

Behene de mujhe behene de mujhe
Behene de mujhe behene de
Ohhh
Behene de mujhe behene de mujhe
Behene de mujhe behene de

Behene de ghangor ghata
Behene de paani ki tarah
Saagar mein jaa girna hai
Behene de nadiyaan ki tarah
he moves to other room………….

And he changes……

And droves to sleep……..

After few days he can sleep piece fully………….

Geet open her eyes……….to find the same room……………….

She rubbed her eyes.

She remembered.how he helped..

She thought of leaving……..

And she quickly run Int o the washroom.

And as she above to move

If  u  girls  use ur brains………………….instead of legs…………………

Then could be useful in falling in trouble…

He mocked.

Geet turned head to find the tall linear structure……………..with crossed legs……….at the door……..

He open his eyes..

And he came to check..as like previous time…………………….he was sure she is going to run from him…..

As expected……………….

He gave a look…………….

Geet lift her head………………………..

And how u go……………….u didn't have money with u………and u r ill……..even……………….u don't know where are u……………………………………

If u have these questions….then u can leave I will not stop……..

And speak…if u have toungue…….as I can confirm tha tim not speaking to doll..

Yeh babaji……inka mood hamesha………ghode par.sawaar hokar kyon hota hay……………………….

I aksed u something………………..

Geet:jee.thank u…………………………..

Maan stunned at her pleasant voice…………

She is beautiful.but her voice Is more beautiful ………..

he turned warned his heart to not to fall.came back to his old style…………….

Dekho..nastha .table pe hay…………..phir bholna kaha chodna hay….mein tume chod dunga……………

With out saying anything……….he marched out……………………………………

Geet shocked……….

Yeh admi yah haa machine………….

Lekin…insaan achaa hay……warna kal raat she again close her eyes………in pain………….babaji.kyo n mere saath yesa.

She openhe reyes quickly as she feared that she may not encountered with one more arrogant look

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me first..............................................
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nice ff......
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Geet is ready

She moved to the table……

It is a small house……but neatly arranged……..

She wondered is the person is alone……..

Why he stays here alone if he has such a big bunglow………………………..

And her questions still on …….

As she find ……….him on the table……one minute cannot take eyes………..

Him in marron color shirt and his office suit.

As soon as she reached………………………..he looked at her with his killer look………….

Oh babaji kya ankheen hay inke……………………………

Sab log ko ankhoon se maarthe hay kya…………………

No doubt pinky is right he is dhak dhak………………..

She is still staring at him……

As she didn't notice …………………….he is also the same..

When she came the anklets of her make sound…………

First he used to think how girls wear them…..but now it is giving him hint that she is here……….

Her …………………..suit.making her alegant.

The twinkling lovely hazel eyes………………………..

The lovely cheeks…the cute face…………….

The person would be fool…………..if says she is just beautifull……

She is angel…..no doubt…………………………

She smiled………….

His heart skipped a  beat…………………….stop to beat..

She is taking my tenses……….

Both came to the world…as soon as the servant bought the food……

She lowered her head down……………………..

She is standing,.

He wanted to control…………so with a straightvoice

Need invitation to join………………..

She looked at him………………he turned his face.to hide his emotions…………………

As……………….the servant served the breakfast…..

He finished with in a minute as he is taking part in ..marathon.

With in minutes he informed that ……………he is waiting for her in the car………………and he will drop her at the place……………………

And he donot want to be late………….

Just like a warning….

Warning to himself….

As the girl is going to drive him insane……………………………..

And he marched..

Geet finished fastly……..and started to run behind him…………………..

Unexpectedly she bumped with the girl……………………

She is the same….girl………….

But she knows she won't reconignse……….

Later she remember  that she is sister of him…………………

Oh no…………………..

And she ran away from her…

And she ran back to the car.

He is waiting.

As she about to back seat…………..

He gave a anger look..

She understood……….and open the front door………………….

To take the seat…….he don't lnow why……………..

Why he gave a look when he take the back seat………………..

He just don't want the driver………………………..

And he is behaving differently………………………………..

And he don't know why………..

Meanwhile geet is…………trying to not to look at him……………………

She is looking at the window.

Her dupatta on the hand brake………………….

He try to move……………

But he saw her..

She is looking at the window.

Ahmm ,,,,,,,,,ahmm..trying to get the attention,,,,,,,,,

Donot know why….

He is not hating the signal today,,,,,,,

Nor the time,,,,,,,

He want to spent the time,,,,,,,,,,,,,,weird……………….what 's wrong with me.she is a stranger……………….and he wants to spend time………….

Have he gone mad.

Suddenly she asked to stop…………

He stopped the car……….

It is the straight…………………road to……….pinky's house………………..

She try to open the lock..

But failed…..

He looked at her effort.

And he bend himself to open……..

On this the hand touch dthe smooth hand………………….of her……………………

He felt electrified………………with the touch………………….

Geet move from there.

As he looked at her ..she vanished from the road.

She wanted to mouth thanks……………….she turned to find car went away.

Ajeeb insaan hya………………….doborra thanks nahii bola….

And she checked the time…………………………

To find………..it is late..she ran towards the house.

As pinky is running………

Oh no today….DD is going to kill me…….im late…………with out saying hi and hello……she ran away to the office……

Geet mean time………yeh insaan mere zindagi ka isaa ban gayaa…………

She smiles and runs for her hotel.

She reached the hotel.

She ran to change her dress.

She greeted romeo and others.and get Back to the work……………

Yesterday was horrible experience for her…………but she remember her words…….

He feel im idiot……………………..

Even he said so…………but internal………..he wants me to take of me.by own………..

He is right………………..is he god or someone…I need to take car e of myself.i cannot be dependent on him everytime…………………………

Yes geet…..

Meantime………….the miss melisaa informed…that………..geet is called by manager….

Manager:geet:I know ur new…………and yesterday……there is…..something…………………

Geet:sir…..i m sorry yesterday…..i t happened………………………………..

Actually.she is fumbled with words.at that time……………mr sundar entered…………………….

He is the bar tender……………….

And he told geet to leave..

Geet is confused..

At that time…………………….romeo.meet geet..

He informed that somebody tried to create a bad mouth to our hotel…………….

And he also said that ur the girl who try to save the reputation……………..and he had evidence……………………………also………………….

So manager is impressed with you.

So donot worry…

Geet is wondered who done this…………………………………

Maan in his cabin.

He cancelled all the meetings………….

He thought of last night incidents.

He knows very well……………………

So he asked adi to call the hotel……………………..and give the details.

He also informed to find the details of the person who tried toattack geet……………………….

He relieved after seeing this………..

Geet is surprised………..

And she back to work.

On the other side………..adi……………confused about his boss

Maan singh khurana……………………he never done this….and this fact that he never done work without any reason……….

He smiled……………unique smile…hahaha…………………………………..

Next day……………..

He got a call………..

The call is from…………his grand mother coming from her friend 's,place…………….

She is after long time………………

He made arrangements for her reciveing……….

He knows very well.

She is the only one who can reach hard core msk's heart…………………………….

She is the key to open….it……………to find………………him…………..

He closed his eyes…………………..

And he left for home to receive………his grandmother

Savitri devi…………….khurana…………………………

Next day…………………..geet is in mandir…………….

She is praying………………………

 

 

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lovely update 
loved it 
pls cont soon
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awsome update.
love it..
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ur  ff is awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee