At the end of a rainbow -Updated Chapter 3, page 7 - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
awesome update Dee.........sorry for being late........loved the update.n the conversation btw PriDa n u was quite funny.....loved the concept though.......n hey u did not mess up at all......coz for me u still are the best FF writter of this forums Diya..........errrrrrrrrrrrrr..........Dee
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey   Diyaa    !!
 
 
 
Waiting  for an  Update   Dear      !!      ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
 
It has been a long time ...............
 
 
 
Amiya
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
 Diya !!

w8nd fr PriDa meeting

update karo ji !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
Hey Dee๐Ÿค—
Interlude 2

Prithvi *with his eyes still closed* : Staring won't get you anything...๐Ÿ˜† Exactly No matter how long u stay in PRIDALAND you'll have to come back here and work ur hands


Damini *Lifts her head up from its comfy spot on Prithvi's chest and glares* : Ignore her Prithvi, she's not worth our time. ....Hhawwwww๐Ÿ˜ฒ :O


Damini : Cute? We are not cute... We are HOT! Get that? Gosh... you writers are a pain in the a#$, I tell you...i can so believe n envision this line by her

Prithvi : I am a man that believes in action over words... *grabs Damini and kisses her thoroughly*   Ahem ahem At last๐Ÿ˜‰

Totally an njoyable update..๐Ÿ˜ƒ


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Chapter 3

 
 All they owned now was in the four suitcases that were gathered in the living room, as they prepared to leave their house for the final time.
 This reminds me of 'Jab Love Hua'

 
that God this isnt going the lnmdj way
 
awesome write up...โญ๏ธ


PS: Unreserved my last reply on pg- 6


Edited by sia88 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
Dee....

plsssss update plsss๐Ÿ˜ญ
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
can we expect an update and plzzzzzzzzzzzz updateeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
diyaa.. a different FF.. update the PriDa meeting soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
hey diya plzzz update  ๐Ÿ˜Š - akshata
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69

Dee, sorrys for commenting this late.. But seriously I love love LOVE this FF..Surely LNMJ could have gone like this, if there were no death of Balraj and others...

๐Ÿ˜ญ sigh... so much wished LNMJ should have been like this..... and you sharing tid-bits with PriDa,off screen as a quality writer๐Ÿ˜Š...

Simple but brilliant built-up of the story, with every line and scene and characters..

Reconstructing the house and Pri's fondness towards a certain room, decorating with his fav.. wonderfully put up with brother's convo.. And again the last scene, it was loveliest.. Damini un-knowingly attracted to there mute convo..LoVED IT๐Ÿ˜›...

And thanks for sharing off-screen bites with PriDa... Honestly speaking, I found that CUTE one ๐Ÿ˜‰ ..

Ummm... can ya update sooon. ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dee... when are you going to update?