At the end of a rainbow -Updated Chapter 3, page 7 - Page 6

Nandini

@Nan08

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Dee...

Lovely update.. am really loving the story build up n unfolding :)) .. pls plssss continue soonn... loved all the Pri-Sam scenes .. cud totally visualize wat u hav written..kasssssssssshhh we cud get this onscreen.. ohh if wishes were "toofi" :D...

thnks for the PM.. waiting for the nxt part...

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Nandini

@Nan08

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

sorry double post 😳 Edited by Nan08 - 13 years ago

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Goldie

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Deee.....

So finally an update😃......!!! Like dis part....d story is gripping slowly.....love d pace as well .....!!! N do I hve to mention abt ur writing skills.....!!! Just adore d small- small Bro's n sis scenes u added in-between.....last Pri-Sam scene rockks ⭐️.....very typical of dem 😛....!!!

Plzzz continue ASAP....!!!

PS- Plzz add me to ur PM list 😊.....!!!

-Nitika

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Maz

@Maz.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Great update Dee! :) ...The official meeting will happen at the dinner I assume..lookin forward to that...

Liking the build up...if everything happens too soon...kills the fun :P

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RagSia

@RagSia

Goldie

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

wow!

loved it

Plz update soon

really nice

wanna see Prida

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Anna

@Ann_92

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

WOW..dis is an awesum ff..luv it/..

gr8 updare...luv de way d story is unfolding..awesum style of writeing..pls do update soon..n btw u dnt mess up prida jus luv tro annoy u hee hee..

ps can u add me to ur pm list 4 future updates pls

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Khwahish

@Khwahish

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

hey diya !!

really nice update ..loved the brotherly banter ..and small family scene of the saxena ..but most of all loved d last part ...damini finally smiling a little...

nw impatiently w8ng fr the Prida meeting ...and its OK if u cannot give us the * hot Romance *...a sizzling Prida fight wid loads of attitude wud be hotter if u ask me !!😃

update soon
thnx fr pm

--khwahish😊

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Perspectives.

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Goldie

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Hey Diya,

Really sorry for not commenting since God knows when!...blame exams!

Love the ways u showed Inder as a positive character and how Balraj's cares so much for the Gujrals...Hope u wont kill any of them!
ANd the next 2 updates shud i call them...😆😆 loved reading them..a pitiful Snehal for Dee!
Loved the Pri-Sam fightin and Sameer's nautanki..well love the attic...and obv Damz gonna take it but wud love to imagine her there...love the build up u show
and the last thing..ok plz tell me wat do u call it...mee lovvinnn it i want it after every update...its fun readin them!

waitin for the next update..

Love,
Snehal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Dee Dee..........

Finally got around here.......let me not bother you with my long & boring story .... Big sigggghhh.. (what you thought only some people can do drama😛).

Before I begin...I want to see wind whipping Pri's hair while he drives his jeep...again. Dannnng.

Awesome update ..... the very essence of Saxena family expressed perfectly here. Sam adding the perfect nautanki quotient here. Pri & Sam banter is always a delight.

Loved what Damini witnessed and her immediate 'Khichau' towards a certain hunk in a hat. She is hooked already and she hasnt even seen him.

No matter what Mazzy says...make them meet now😛. Quickly plan the dinner and some hawt exchange as dessert.

Update sooooooooon..... ek mulakat ke liye kitna tarsaogi??!!!!😃