mn ff...Ehsaas (updated, last part) at page 127

part-1


nm-nupur...tu ready ho gayi...
n-haan mama...
mrs bhushan(nupur's mom) came to nupur's room...
nm-dekhun jara meri bachi ko...
nupur was wearing a light pink sari with a little work on its border...looking absouletly an angel...
nm-are waah! bphot pyari lagrahi hai...kisi ki nazar na lage...
nupur shied and looked downstairs...
nm-chal ab niche ladke wale agyen hain

nupur bhushan...21 years old...just completed her BBA...she belongs to a middle class family...like every ordinary girl...she has also some hope...some dreams...etc...today her father mr bhusan's friend mr. khanna, one of the biggest buisnessman in the city is coming to see nupur for their 2nd son adhiraj khanna...

nupur came downstairs...like a typical bride...eyes down..pallu over her head...tray in her hand...she came and gave tea to everyone...
adhiraj's mom(mrs khanna)-aao beta humare paas baitho...
n-ji...
am-koi shok hain tumhare...
n-ji thode bohot...
am-jaise...
n-uo..
before nupur could say anything her mother interrupted
mn-silai...kadai...khana banana...aur bhi bohot gun hain humare nupur mai...
am-acha?...yea to bohot achi baat hai...
n-(in her mind)-yea kya hai..silai..kadai..yea sab kya hota hai...mujhe to ek button bhi lagana nahi ata...haan khana..mai thoda bohot bana leti hun...

in this whole prosese adhiraj was the one person who was just playing with his mobile...as if he doesnt care for anything...his father noticed this...you can say he's a spoilt brat...girl friends, parties, drinks all this was his life...he's a careless...emtions...feelings...nah!.. he feels all this is a drama...but yet he's good at heart

ad-adhiraj..in a ster voice
a-ji...ji dad...
ad-apko nupur se koi baat nahi karni...?
a-haan..uo nahi...
ad-mr bhushan..agar apki ijajat ho to nupur aur adhiraj kuch baat karlen?
nd-haan ...haan kyun nahi...jarur...(to nupur)...jao beta adhiraj ko humara ghar dikhao...
nupur was a little concious...ji..ji papa
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nupur was showing adhiraj their house, but adhiraj was least interested in allthis
n-aur yea merea room hai...
the room was small but beautifuly decorated...for once adhiraj was impressed with the decoratin...
a-wow!..its beautiful...
n-haan...uo
a-apne ki hai...
n-ji nahi mere friend,dia ne...she's a interior desinger...
a-ok...
n-aap mujhse kuch pucha nahi chahten...
a-ji...haan actually...
a-dekhiye...nato mera koi past hai...aur nahi mai kisi aur ko pasand karti hun..aur agar apki life me koi aur hai to pls mujhe saaf saaf bata dijiye...
adhiraj was again impressed with this girl...yes she was different...and also beautiful...beauty with brain...perfect match...
a-aisi koi baat nahi hai...uo mai...
but before they could talk any further nupur's mom called them
                  
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ad-acha to mr bhushan ...ab hum chaltein hain...hum phone karenge
nd-ji thik hai
am-namastey bhai sahab...namastey bhabhi ji
nm&nd-namastey...



khanna mansion...

ad-to batayiye adhiraj apka kya faisla hai?
a-dad...actually... i need some time
ad-aur kitna time adhiraj..ap 26 saal ke ho gayen hai...apki umar me humari shadi bhi ho gayi thi aur ek bacha bhi..aur apke bhai ko dekhiye...
a-dad that time was different...
ad-kya difference hai bataiye...hume kuch nahi pata...hume kal subbah tak apka jawab chahiye...(after a pause)...uo bhi haan...
a-but dad...
but before he could say anything mr khanna already had left...
a-shit!!!...ab kya karun...haan bhai se baat karta hun...

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a-bhai mai andar a jaun...
samrat(adhiraj's brother) who was working on his labtop...looke up and smilled...

samrat khanna,...the elder son of mr khanna..28 years old..exactly opposite of adhiraj...a sweet and simple person...loves his wife a lot and can do anything for her...

s- yea bhi koi puchne ki baat hai...come inside...
adhiraj loked around and said...bhabhi kahan hai...
s-uo...but before he could say anythin a sweet voice said...mai ihan hun devar ji...

gunjan khanna, samrat's wife...25 years old...she's a sweet heart...loves his husband and family a lot...

a-bhabhi...bhai...i need to talk to you guys...
samrat and gunjan looked at each other and smilled...they knew what adhiraj wanted to say
g-hume pata hai devar ji...app  yahi kehna chahten hain na ki apko phirse yea shadi nahi karni...
a-exactly bhabhi...kuch karo
s-adhi...aur kitna...this is the fifth time you are asking this...
a-bhai mujhe shadi nahi karni..
g-par kyun devar ji...?...apko koi aur pasand hai?
a-no bhabhi...please
s-adhi hum koshish karenge...
a-bhai i love you...
s-ok ok now go and sleep...
a-good night bhabhi..
g-good night...

after adhi left...gunjan sat beside samrat and put her head in samrat's shoulder...samrat circle his aroun her.
s-kya hua chashmish...pareshan ho?
g-hmm...adhi ko leke...is bar papa nahi manege..
s-par adhi manega...
gunjan instantly looked at samrat...matlab?
samrat smilled in return and gunjan understood his plan...
g-mayank...???
s-hmm...and wink at her


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index

part-1...page-1
  
part-2...page-4

part-3...page-10

part-4...page-15

part-5...page-18

part-6...page-22

part-7...page-27

part-8...page-32

part-9...page-42

part-10...page-47

promo-...page-52

part-11...page-64

part-12...page-70

promo...page-78

part-13...page-82

promo...page-89

part-14...page-93

promo...page-99

part-15...page-103

part-16...page-110

part-17...page-115

part-18...page-122

part-19 (last part)...page1-127
Edited by vampire_girl - 12 years ago

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where is mayank dear .........
but nice one

Originally posted by: -moona-

heyy its really nice.....

thnx alot for the pm....

thanks dear....😛

Originally posted by: aancchal

where is mayank dear .........
but nice one

mayank will come soon...dont worry
and thanks 😛

nice start!!!

Originally posted by: daniella05

nice start!!!

do continue soon

thanks 4 the pm

thanks a ton😊

tasifa
congrats dear
thanx a lot for starting a mayur ff
i alwz love to read mayur ff
awesome start

but adhi and nups- no way
i want one n only one mayank with our cute nups

but i loved ur story line-- interesting

sam-adhi-gunji convo was very nice

beautiful start dear
do cont it
and thanx for ur pm

Originally posted by: fariaa70

tasifa
congrats dear
thanx a lot for starting a mayur ff
i alwz love to read mayur ff
awesome start

but adhi and nups- no way
i want one n only one mayank with our cute nups

but i loved ur story line-- interesting

sam-adhi-gunji convo was very nice

beautiful start dear
do cont it
and thanx for ur pm

hey faria.......
thanks a ton for such a beautiful comment//////
and dont worry mayur are made for each other😳
and thanks

Originally posted by: mahakmev

interesting i liked it

thank you😛