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edited my comment at page 53

Originally posted by: vampire_girl

mai bhi yahi puchna chati hun😉
ek romantic mayurish OS chahiye mujhe🤣

buhaat maazay araahy hain....milay ga na hum tum ki update jo mein ny abhi tak nhi likhi ......

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

buhaat maazay araahy hain....milay ga na hum tum ki update jo mein ny abhi tak nhi likhi ......

yea kaisi baat hui?..update likhi hi nahi aur de rahi ho
cheating hai ye..saaf saaf cheating hai🤣...jaao mujhe nahi khelna😔🤣

Originally posted by: vampire_girl

yea kaisi baat hui?..update likhi hi nahi aur de rahi ho
cheating hai ye..saaf saaf cheating hai🤣...jaao mujhe nahi khelna😔🤣

likh rahin hoona..kiya kero nt finding time ...or weekend per to mein tooo busy in attending weding.....so trying k kerdo....

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

likh rahin hoona..kiya kero nt finding time ...or weekend per to mein tooo busy in attending weding.....so trying k kerdo....

per OS abhi possible nhi hai

kuch deemagh mein nhi....koi idea hai tu day do

likh rahi ho.....very good mai bhi update likh rahi hoon😉
wedding..😳
i love wedding ceremonies..par mujhe to invitation hi nahi ateyn😭
OS ka idea hota na to apna gallery update kardeti mai😆

hey fizza!!!

Fizzzzaaaaa

jaani wht an upd8 yaar

d bestest upd8 of ur ff

loved it

can't wait to read d next upd8

cont soon

This xm is just making me mad...😡.But i have to come here na to read the update...
It ws in one word AMAZING...And the answers r...
1. According to me the best thing about this ff is Mayur's friendship 😳😳..and ur writing style....😃
2. I dnt remember all the parts but for me the convo bw MN and Sayank after the adi fight and specially this part ws fab..😍😍.I truly njoyed the dialogues and style...
3. Worst or bad thing is Mayank as a drug addicted...😔😔
4. Now i want to read the nxt part with nupur's reaction...
Cont soon and will give detail cmnt after xm...🤗

Hey i read all the parts i must tell it is a gr8 ff & i luv it.......i m hungry for more.....Lol.......continue soon and do pm me.......
bst thing of this ff-its different
best dialogue-the drama part of the last update.......do continue sooon

Originally posted by: drmaha

it was the bestest update of urs.........😊 i just loved it dearest.........

whole scene of stage performance was dam gud.......
but sami should not have do ths........y he came between both of thm...........😭

aab maza ayyeiga doonoo ko........specially mayank......😆

u r too gud .........tumhara update padh k m really happy........

now update sooooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn......................😛

plshhhhhhhhhhhhhh....................

love ya dear..........

waoo