Hey Geet!
first of all, I simply LOVE your name....its sooooo awesome....
but, that leaves me wondering what to call you if i don't want to create a confusion as to whom i am addressing when i write-u ya ff ki Geet!😆
So, please suggest a nickname for yourselves.
Now, the ff....Oh my Gosh...its so freaking awesome.
i just read it from the beginning and loved it.
One striking feature that i love about your ff is the chapter titles-they are great!
this is one thing that i love in another writer's ffs too-by hasini(I don't know if you have read hers or not!)
Well, the story is good!
no dev problems here....Geet is married to MSK.....hmmm...good!
I was pleased by Naintara's absence, but, to my utter dismay, natasha is there to spoil the party!
Vicky is seriously a darling!
I wonder, why our the vamps intelligent sorts???
actually, i don't know whether to call natasha a vamp....she is in love with Maan...no she loves Mohit, and is doing her best to keep him to herself......
actually, its not even fair to say that she loves him, it miht just be her obsession, looking at the way she has lived her life, a typical spoilt brat...
well, too much of my bak-bak!
in short, well done👏👏
looking forward to read further..
so, please add me to your pm list and continue soon😃
Love
Swati
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