MAYUR FF ~ The Dark Magic ~ - Page 13

Wow! kinzu u did it yar! :D

u made the meetng into smthng too heart touchng to coment on!
mayank and nupur are so perfect! ufff! i hav no words! ths story is turning out to be ur best! beautifully writn! :-)

AWSOME KINZA!

ths is amazing ff......compltely diffrnt frm lost magic.....plz pm me

i am liking the story....a lot.....😛 waiting for next update

i have a feeling mayank is going to put it all together when he finds out about their daughter...my prediction is theyll fall in love and after that when mayank finds out it was nupur he will be so guilt-ridden that hell tell her himself what he did......naina

awwww mehak ye to inni jaldi khatam hogaya gosh nupur didnt recognize him😲

beautiful update......

Nice one....

nice update..
loved it..
cont soon😊

Mehakkk...why such a short update?????


OMG Mayank was about to figure out her eyes....but he did not....and she also did not recognise him or anything....

Now they will be working together..and i wonder how they will realise that they were the ones 8 years ago....who will realise first....though i feel it will be Mayank who will realise first...considering her eyes have haunted him for the past 8 years and all...and without recognising her, he realises she wont forgive anyone...and he realises that she wasnt like this before but something caused her to be like this....im just soooo curious to know how he will gain her forgiveness...Gosh Mehak...update soon...make it 2 updates a day, if you can😆😆😆

Wow.. This FF is sure the show stealer for suspense..

Part 3...
i LOVED IT.. 😛
Poor Nups.. she's been throught a lot..
I liked the way you showed their 8years and esp Nups. Suffering
Making me want Mayank to suffer more even though its clear he has felt guilt over the years..

Part 4...
SO short...
I feel so sad.. for Nups.. She is in so much pain..😭😭
I would too hate the word SORRY..😕
GOSH.. ITS STARTING TO ANNOY ME WHEN Mayank says SORRY..😡
Thats becoz i know what he did...
Overall very nice part..😃
I can't wait to read more...😍


THANKS FOR PM!!!🤗

❤️-Rabiah