FF- DEEWANGEE: Ch18 'Its 8 pm on pg 55 - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: danno

hey ramona 

hieeee i am waiting for next  ch
jaldi karo bhai
avi ki entry karvao yaar Avi's cuming dear.... bas thoda aur wait karo... woh kya hai na he's lazy....
dil bekraaar huem jaa raha hai hum samajhte hai....
hahahahahahaha😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
thanks for all your comments...
 
I'll put the next chapter very soon....
 
lubb ya all....
 
 
 
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73

hieee... everyone... Happy NEW YEAR.... I hope you all had a blast...
Okay... now this is the 3rd chapter... read and Comment...


Chapter 3

 

A well built handsome guy was sitting on a revolving leather chair. His P.A Chulbul was standing infront of him reading his appointments for the day. The person on the chair however wasn't paying attention & was engrossed in his laptop.

Chulbul: "Sir, today you have an appointment with Mr. Gupta and then you have ....... he went on Non Stop''' and now you have a meeting with Mr. Mehta at 4.00 pm"

 

The person on in front was least bothered about anything and continued on his laptop'' Chulbul sighed and asked,

"Sir, we have a meeting at 4.00 pm"

Man: " Oh' Err.. Yes'' Hey just look at her man !!! She looks hot !!!! " he exclaimed. "Chulbul just check this out''"

But before he could say anything further, Chulbul cut him in between and began'

" Sir, we will be late for the meeting.."

The Man who by now had  got irritated said in a loud voice'

" What's your problem huh ??? Can't you see Im Busy on Facebook'' Get out or Else your Fired !!!"

Poor Chulbul walked awy without saying a word. Outside the cabin, his colleagues came up to him & said,

Rohan: Arre Chulbul, kya hua ??

Chulbul: Nothing happened' Actually Im not feeling well'

Jagat: Oh come on guys'. Lets go' The coffee-break will start any moment' You two go ahead, I'll be there in 5 mins'

 

Thus saying, Jagat moves towards his Boss's cabin

Jagat: Sir, May I come in ??

Man: Oh Yes' Come.

Jagat: Sir, this the Delhi Project file and this is the Paris Project File'

Man: ''' still fidgeting with the laptop''' Keep them on my table.

Jagat keeps the files on the table and leaves.

 

 

The phone rings and the Caller-id flashes 'Ranvijay'. Arpita attends the call'

Arpi: Looks like you've finally realized that you have someone waiting to talk to you, right ???

RV: Baby'' Im really SORRY' I was very sleepy' and '' Im SORRY. Pls forgive me' pls

Arpi: Forgive you??? Im not repeating my mistake' Every time I forgive you & you end up doing the sme thing over and over again' But this time' I wont give in'. GOODBYE'.

She disconnected the call & threw the phone on the Bed.


tel me how it was.... JALDI se likewa karbo and commentwa pls...


Edited by KriYa_life - 13 years ago
danno thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
very nice buttt very small
well done ramona
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
Hey Kriya Happy New Year to u 2

Nice chapter but very small, abhi to padhna shuru kiya tha abhi khatam bhi hoo gaya.

Plz come with next, jaldi see.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: danno

very nice buttt very small I know... Actually my friend was pestering me to update so I did... she is not regular on IF...

well done ramona


thanks...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: komalSingh

Hey Kriya Happy New Year to u 2 wish you the same dear....


Nice chapter but very small, abhi to padhna shuru kiya tha abhi khatam bhi hoo gaya. I know its small.....

Plz come with next, jaldi see. i'll try in a day or two...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
ok ramona i understand
i hope ki next part lamba ho aurrrr
avi ki entry bhi ho
waise ismein clue toh mil raha hai
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: danno

ok ramona i understand

i hope ki next part lamba ho aurrrr
avi ki entry bhi ho
waise ismein clue toh mil raha hai beta.. in the next part.. Avi ki full enry bhi hogi aur... surprise bhi hoga... 😉 guess karbo..

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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
oye ramonaa
surprise guess hi kar liya toh surprise nahi na rahega😆
hahahahahaha