The World's Oldest Story!!#6AR In Another World.. - Page 89

yay you updated...thankk you zappy!

Rajna yaar .. MSg kardena.. meri jaan..

rachana, you are just too good yaar...it's amazing how you write parts sequentially...I can imagine everything and gives me a vibe that I'm actually watching DMG and AR...agghh...such an awesome feeling it is!! and only you can come up with ideas such as dilruba just like how you had come up with sup-armaan....

hey zappy
hw r u???????????????
awesome part
it was amazing
loved car scene when armaan asked dilruba hw was RUPALI, OMG he was blushing😆
ridz asked which month he said Pehla khatam hone ko aaya hai Riddhima baby.. Ab bas ek aur mahina hai.. Sir aapko chahiye rehga kya ek baccha?.. Doctor bole che hai.. Main kaise sambhalega..
it is hilarious n i imagined ridz confused face😆
armaan teased dilruba of his name😆"Dilruba.. Zyaada tareef mat kar tere Dacter Shashank ki.. Jiss din tu unka gussa dekhega na.. Uss din tu apna naam bhi bhul jaayega.. Waise bhul hi jaaye toh  accha hai.. Iss ajeeb naam se chutkara toh milega tujhe.. ", that was superb😆
loved blackmailer ARMAAN😊
loved stunborn riddhima😛
woooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwww she went with armaan apartment😊😉
ridz felt so sad to see hw armaan was living singapore but now everything fine. she is with him 😊😛
plsssssssssss complete it
Edited by shilpI007 - 13 years ago

Hey Zephyyy!!

hey!!

zapppy ! 

Rachna....u r amazing yaar.Everytime you beats everyones imagination.Thats what i like most in ur writing.
I thought that they will get a chance to romance for 5 hours and 30 minutes.....but u didnt even give them a chance to sit together.😒
But I liked Armaan's situation.Seeing his basket with a good looking stranger!
Just like Ridhima I also found the name "Dilruba" weird.Where did u get this name from?😆
At first when i heard that,i doubted whether u r going for a dostana track.??? Thank God.....!
I cracked up hearing this dialogue "Don't think so much Basket.. Rupali Dilruba ki Billi hai, Biwi nahi.."🤣
I liked this diaologue also "Not after what you did on the flight Basket.. Armaan will strike back!! " This time i am with Armaan.Armaan should strike back! Ridhima should not have complained against him.
Then Ridhima's trantum.....thats our typical Basket. Bechara Armaan! He had to follow her decision as always.i wonder what will Sasurji do when he comes to know about Ridhima staying in Armaan's apartment.

But this is a small update.We expect more and more.After your last part,our expectations increase more,you know.So come with a super long part next time.
I hope u r fine now.If not well,dont stress so much.ok? Love you...🤗


Edited by armaanlover_7 - 13 years ago

Originally posted by: DMG fan

tussi kaise ho ji???