MG Revenge FF Thread One - Page 45

part 9
they are so protecting Geet from the devil Maan...
oh Geet is cho cute...
cont soon...

SACH MAI SHE IS SWEET ANGEL... OUR ANGEL

awesome part,

cant believe maan lusted over geet she was just 16...ewww

I am sorry to say Kingu

but I am not satisfied by the recent updates...

it all is confusing...

intially when Revenge started Maan was shown in a different d\shade ...

but when you came back after a leap as you yourself know you came back after months to re-edit the updates...

some thing is missing...

please don't mind but my sincere advice is that you re read your first 4 parts that you intially wrote

there is definately something missing

please u r breaking my herat since the time Geet became normal...

why are you making Maan a womaniser because in the iintiall updates he seeme dto be a ok guy ...

if I am wrong let the comment pass on... ignore it

no offenses

Shruti

hi dear

well from the start itself i told Maan's role is negative. But Geet's innocence will change him and her love will make him a good man.

Edited by kingu - 12 years ago

awesome part..
loved it

simply awesome update...

nice update

but do update zindegi also its been long time u have updated it

awesome part 3 do con't soon

Countinue soon n do pm me n add me as ur buddy plz. . .