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Akankshaa.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey people! 🤗I opened a similar kind of topic in PKYEK forum too, and got great response. 😃 And this forum is still alive with people -Devyani, Smriti and everyone - that I decided to give it a go here. 😃

Okay..if you wanna know what it's about, have a look here :

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1549915

Basically... It's a group story, where everyone contributes to the story, writing parts, adding their own twists, and making it a HIT. ⭐️

And yeah.. you can open a story... in whatever way you want. You can make it based in college, or any office?, if you want a mature story! Though I think college would work best... 😊 And then anyone can continue..and then someone..and then someone. BUT.. This can't be ONLY a Yuvi-Ashi story or ONLY a TiaRa story..We need both of the couples in this story, hence more fangroups, hence more people to continue it. 😊

This is for people who are either too lazy to write a story on their own, can't think of too many twists to keep it going, or simply want to a contribute to a story, or are bored out of their minds. Whatever you are - If you wanna do it, like or comment? 😊

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Part 1 - Page 1 - Akanksha0701

Part 2 - Page 1 - Luv_Wacko

Part 3 - Page 1 - Akanksha0701

Part 4 - Page 1 - Luv_Wacko

Part 5 - Page 1 - Akanksha0701

Part 6 - Page 2 - Elizaa

Part 7 - Page 2 - Akanksha0701

Part 8 - Page 2 - Luv_Wacko

Part 9 - Page 2 - Akanksha0701

Part 10 - Page 3 - Elizaa

Part 11 - Page 3 - Akanksha0701

Part 12 - Page 3 - Luv_Wacko

Part 13 - Page 4 - Elizaa

Part 14 - Page 4 - Akanksha0701

Part 15 - Page 4 - Luv_Wacko

Part 16 - Page 5 - Akanksha0701

Part 17 - Page 5 - Elizaa

Part 18 - Page 5 - Akanksha0701

Part 19 - Page 5 - Akanksha0701

Part 20 - Page 5 - Elizaa

Part 21 - Page 5 - Elizaa

Part 22 - Page 6 - Akanksha0701

Part 23 - Page 6 - Akanksha0701

Part 24 - Page 6 - Akanksha0701

Part 25 - Page 6 - Luv_Wacko

Part 26 - Page 6 - Elizaa

Part 27 - Page 6 - Elizaa

Part 28 - Page 6 - Luv_Wacko

Part 29 - Page 7 - Elizaa

Part 30 - Page 7 - Akanksha0701

Part 31 - Page 7 - Akanksha0701

Part 32 - Page 7 - Akanksha0701

Part 33 - Page 7 - Luv_Wacko

Part 34 - Page 7 - Akanksha0701

Part 35 - Page 8 - Elizaa

Part 36 - Page 8 - Elizaa

Part 37 - Page 9 - Elizaa

Part 38 - Page 9 - Akanksha0701

Part 39 - Page 9 - Akanksha0701

Part 40 - Page 9 - Akanksha0701

Part 41 - Page 10 - Elizaa

Part 42 - Page 11 - Luv_Wacko

Part 43 - Page 11 - Akanksha0701

Part 44 - Page 13 - Elizaa

Part 45 - Page 13 - Elizaa

Part 46 - Page 13 - Akanksha0701

Part 47 - Page 13 - Elizaa

Part 48 - Page 13 - Akanksha0701

Part 49 - Page 14 - Elizaa

Part 50 - Page 15 - Akanksha0701

Part 51 - Page 15 - Luv_Wacko

Part 52 - Page 15 - Akanksha0701

Part 53 - Page 16 - Akanksha0701

Part 54 - Page 17 - Akanksha0701

Part 55 - Page 22 - Eliza

Part 56 - Page 22 - Eliza

Part 57 - Page 23 - Eliza

Part 58 - Page 23 - Akanksha

Part 59 - Page 23 - Eliza

Part 60 - Page 23 - Eliza

Part 61 - Page 24 - Akanksha

Part 62 - Page 25 - Akanksha

Part 63 - Page 25 - Eliza

Part 64 - Page 25 - Akanksha

Part 65 - Page 25 - Eliza

Part 66 - Page 25 - Eliza

Part 67 - Page 26 - Akanksha

Part 68 - Page 26 - Nappy

Part 69 - Page 28 - Akanksha

Part 70 - Page 28 - Eliza

Part 71 - Page 28 - Eliza

Part 72 - Page 28 - Eliza

Part 73 - Page 28 - Eliza

Part 74 - Page 29 - Akanksha

Part 75 - Page 29 - Eliza

Part 76 - Page 29 - Akanksha

Part 77 - Page 29 - Eliza

Part 78 - Page 29 - Akanksha

Part 79 - Page 30 - Eliza

Part 80 - Page 30 - Akanksha

Part 81 - Page 32 - Eliza

Part 82 - Page 32 - Akanksha

Part 83 - Page 33 - Eliza

Part 84 - Page 34 - Debby

Part 85 - Page 35 - Akanksha

Part 86 - Page 36 - Eliza

Part 87 - Page 36 - Akanksha

Part 88 - Page 36 - Eliza

Part 89 - Page 36 - Eliza

Part 90 - Page 37 - Akanksha

Part 91 - Page 37 - Akanksha

Part 92 - Page 38 - Debby

Part 93 - Page 38 - Debby

Part 94 - Page 39 - Eliza

Part 95 - Page 40 - Debby

Part 96 - Page 40 - Akanksha

Part 97 - Page 40 - Akanksha

Part 98 - Page 42 - Eliza

Part 99 - Page 42 - Akanksha

Part 100 - Page 43 - Akanksha

Part 101 - Page 45 - Eliza

Part 102 - Page 45 - Eliza

Part 103 - Page 49 - Eliza

Part 104 - Page 49 - Akanksha

Part 105 - Page 50 - Akanksha

Part 106 - Page 50 - Eliza

Part 107 - Page 51 - Akanksha

Part 108 - Page 52 - Debby

Part 109 - Page 54 - Eliza

Part 110 - Page 55 - Akanksha

Part 111 - Page 56 - Debby

Part 112 - Page 64 - Eliza

Part 113 - Page 65 - Eliza

Part 114 - Page 65 - Akanksha

Part 115 - Page 65 - Akanksha

Part 116 - Page 67 - Eliza

Part 117 - Page 67 - Akanksha

Part 118 - Page 68 - Akanksha

Part 119 - Page 68 - Akanksha

Part 120 - Page 68 - Akanksha

Part 121 - Page 69 - Eliza

Part 122 - Page 70 - Akanksha

Part 123 - Page 71 - Akanksha

Part 124 - Page 72 - Eliza

Part 125 - Page 73 - Akanksha

Part 126 - Page 74 - Debby

Part 127 - Page 80 - Bublai

Part 128 - Page 83 - Eliza

Part 129 - Page 84 - Eliza

Part 130 - Page 84 - Eliza

Part 131 - Page 84 - Akanksha

Part 132 - Page 84 - Akanksha

Part 133 - Page 85 - Akanksha

Part 134 - Page 86 - Akanksha

Part 135 - Page 86 - Eliza

Part 136 - Page 86 - Eliza

Part 137 - Page 87 - Akanksha

Part 138 - Page 88 - Bublai

Part 139 - Page 88 - Bublai

Part 140 - Page 90 - Akanksha

Part 141 - Page 90 - Akanksha

Part 142 - Page 91 - Eliza

Part 143 - Page 92 - Akanksha

Part 144 - Page 93 - Eliza

Part 145 - Page 93 - Akanksha

Part 146 - Page 94 - Eliza

Part 147 - Page 94 - Eliza

Part 148 - Page 95 - Akanksha

Part 149 - Page 96 - Eliza

Part 150 - Page 97 - Akanksha

LINK FOR THE NEXT THREAD : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1635477

Edited by _Akanksha_ - 13 years ago

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Meeko

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Akanksha0701
Hey people! 🤗I opened a similar kind of topic in PKYEK forum too, and got great response. 😃 And this forum is still alive with people -Devyani, Smriti and everyone - that I decided to give it a go here. 😃

Okay..if you wanna know what it's about, have a look here :

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1549915

Basically... It's a group story, where everyone contributes to the story, writing parts, adding their own twists, and making it a HIT. ⭐️

And yeah.. you can open a story... in whatever way you want. You can make it based in college, or any office?, if you want a mature story! Though I think college would work best... 😊 And then anyone can continue..and then someone..and then someone. BUT.. This can't be ONLY a Yuvi-Ashi story or ONLY a TiaRa story..We need both of the couples in this story, hence more fangroups, hence more people to continue it. 😊

This is for people who are either too lazy to write a story on their own, can't think of too many twists to keep it going, or simply want to a contribute to a story, or are bored out of their minds. Whatever you are - If you wanna do it, like or comment? 😊

perfect!!! so whos gonna strt??😛

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Akankshaa.

@Akankshaa.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Elizaaa...Anyone can start if they want! 😊 I wanna see if Devyani or Smriti starts it tomorrow...or I will. 😳

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Akankshaa.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Okay...here's the first part. Please tell me how is it?

''Mom! PLEASEEE.'' Ashi protested one more time, and her mom just rolled her eyes.

''Oh please cut the crap, Ashi. You are going to this school, and that's F.I.N.A.L.''

Ashi grunted and looked around. ''But mom, this is not my type of school at all. Geez. It's full of nerds. Please mom, please.'' She pleaded.

''This is the top boarding school of India, and Sonia Ray's daughter to go in any ''second-best'' school.'' She made a disgusted face. ''How tacky!''

''MOM!'' Ashi walked to her front, hands on her shoulders, and started walking backwards, eyes on her mum, and did the puppy dog expression, trying to convince her mom to turn around before they reach the principal's room.

''Ow'' Ashi smacked to a guy turning around the corner. She felt herself losing her balence and falling backwards. She closed her eyes instinctively and braced herself to hit the ground. Instead, she felt strong arms catching and gripping her. She opened her eyes slowly to see a guy her age with black eyes and curls falling on his face gazing at her. After a moment, she wriggled. ''Let me go!''

''Are you sure?'' He raised a eyebrow.

''Yes! Let me go...NOW.'' She glared at him.

He loosened his grip enough to make Ashi tumble off-balance again. Before she could fall, he held her hand again, and left Ashi hanging midway. ''Do you want me to let go off you, now?''

Ashi glared, and looked down at the floor, and then at him. She held his hand tighter and pushed herself to her own feet. When she gained her balance again, she let his hand go. He just grinned.

''How dare you touch Ashi Banerjee Ray?''

''Oh well...'' He ran a hand through his curls. ''That wasn't a ''thanks for saving my life'' I quite expected.''

''Ah well, you caught the wrong girl, then. If you want some compliments, go to those bimbos.'' She pointed at some girls. ''If you want some punches, dare to come close to me again.''

He took one step towards her. ''I'll go with the punches.''

''Okay okay people.'' Sonia adjusted her shades down to the tip of her nose to look at the guy. ''You..leave her alone, and you-'' She turned back to Ashi. ''Lets go.''

''Hmph.'' Ashi stomped off. But she couldn't help turning around one last time. The guy just stood there, grinning, his eyes twinkling..with something she couldn't quite place.

Edited by Akanksha0701 - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

what a life! ashi fumed at her mother..and d hopelessness of the situation..she couldnt frankly figure out...HOW and WHY....did her life turn this way..

"mummaaaaaa" ,she started to whine..bt sonia ray cut her across...

" shona,please try and understand...im away most of the time..and i cant leave u alone..isliye u have to go to boarding school.."

so with a shrug and a martyered air of resistence...ashi stomped into the princi's office.....

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Akankshaa.

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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 3

Meanwhile, there was another person, who was not-so-happy about the news of a new roommate.

''A NEW ROOMMATE'' Tia shreiked loudly. Gloria covered her ears. ''Did you just say.. Tia Ahuja is getting a new roommate? Are you out of your minds, Gloria? GLORIA. This is me you are talking about. The princess Tia Ahuja. And you are saying I need to share my room?''

''Tia, listen. You have been having a seperate all for yourself room for a while now. And now, with new people, we are having shortage of rooms. So you will have to stay with her. There is no other way around.''

''Oh there is! There is always a way around, when it comes to Tia. What Tia wants, Tia gets. And I want my own room! Listen to me or...'' She looks around for her phone. ''I am gonna call my daddy!''

''Do whatever you want, Tia, but he's not coming to your help. We have talked to him, and he agrees that Tia should learn how to behave with people, and stop living in her own world. He wants you to have a roommate.''

''No! Just no. Aaah, how will Tia manage? Half of the room, half of the closet..means, I will have to throw half of my dresses away. NO.'' She opened the cupboard and started throwing stuff at Gloria. She ducked and ran away. Tia sighed and grunted. Argh. Daddy, I am gonna kill you.

Edited by Akanksha0701 - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

part 4

its chaos all around, the hustle bustle of the mumbai traffic..the vendors and the daily commuters...was sure to make anybody's head spin with wonder and confusion...

there to pave his way in..a tall boy with curls and a small baggage was trying to explain his destination to an equally hassled transporter..

"kaha jan hi??" asked the driver

"umm..humein maurya high jana hai." replied an equally flustered ranveer.

atlast overcoming the language confusion..ranveer reaches his school and goes to register himself.

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Akankshaa.

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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 5

''Yuvi yuvi yuvi'' Nakool saw him entering the cafe and he rushed towards him. ''So..what's the plan?''

''The plan is VERY simple, dude. We have to get back at Meher. She cheated me, went out with my own best friend.'' Yuvi grunted. ''Sid has already been dealt with. Now..it's Meher's turn.''

''Yeah dude, but the question is...how?''

''Oh I know how to deal with her.'' Yuvi grinned. ''Meher cheated me 'cause she wanted to get back on me. And now, All I want is revenge, to show her what she meant to me, and that is..nothing.''

''Are you keeping a new girlfriend?''

''No.'' Yuvi shook his head. ''Not just ''any new girlfriend.'' He turned to Nakool. ''Have you heard of Sonia Ray?''

Nakool scratched his head. ''The famous movie star. What's she gotta do with it? Oh, you mean..you are gonna go out with Sonia? Dude, ain't she a bit too old for you?''

''Shut up dude! Not Sonia Ray..'' Yuvi sighed. ''Sonia Ray's daughter. The new entry in the college. Anwesha Banerjee Ray.'' He smiled mischeviously. ''Ashi, in short. My latest ploy to help me get revenge from my ex.''

Edited by Akanksha0701 - 13 years ago

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Meeko

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Posted: 13 years ago

part 6

"u knw dude.. naakool dude... listen!!!"

"haan bolo uv"

"stop staring at her.. u wnt get her, she is the hottest grl in mauriya"

"dude!! am nakool>> wen nakool is here, y fear!! waise, kya naam hai uska?"

"yeah yeah naakool!! dude, she is tia, tia ahuja!! and plz.. take my advice, dnt evn try"

"chuck tht, meri baat suno, chalo.... chalo mere saath"

uv pulls nakool to the place wer he frst saw ashi.. ashi was nower to be seen, but uv managed to see sonia.

"sonia aunty"screamd uv... sonia refused to pay attention, 'who'd have the nerve to call this pretty teenager an aunty' she thought.

"sonia aunty........hello sonia aunty"

"hmmmmmmmm.. bolo"

"aah wait... call me sonia... sonia ray"

"alrite.. soniya aa..i mean ma'am,.... uhhh>> well, am uv, yuvraj dev, yashwant dev ka beta"

"ohh... toh tum ho yuvraj? yashwant ke bete.... hmm, hws yashwant???" raised eyebrow*

uv's all confused...

"huh?@?!?!??! haan, dad theek hai, do u knw him??"

"haan, jaanti toh hoon, tumhari mom ko... same skool u see uv beta!" smiles*

(beta?? he thinks, isnt tht a bit more welcoming?? nvm, i can call her aunty now ;)

"well aunty, ur daughter, she has justjoined mauriya rite?? btw whts her name??

"anvesha, u can call her ashi"

"oh, toh aunty, mein soch raha tha ki, ashi ne abhi abhi skool join kiya hai, usey yahaan mauriya mein takleef hogi saare things sort out karne mein, toh mein soch raha tha, ki mein uski thodi madat kar doon"

"oh uv, hw sweet beta, ur so much like ur mom!! plz do so, mein soch rahi thi ke meri mamam, jaldi toh koi dost banati nahi, toh mujhe hi rukhna padta ussey settle down hone mein.. par nw tht ur there, i can leave.. rite??"

"oh yes aunty, waise, ashi hai kahaan???"

"woh aa hi rahi hogi, wait.. lemme call her.. and u listen, tum ussey kuch mat kehna, ill tell her to go with u, so tht u can help her settle down in mauriya.... nahi toh mamam bhi naa...hello mamam.. kahaan ho love?? haan.. ok.. jaldi aao"

soniya, with a big broad smile staring at uv..smiling not only coz she was happy tht some1 wanted to help ashi out, tht too on the frst day of skool, hardly any1 liked her on the frst meet.. she was also smiling coz of pity, pity tht he wld have to deal with her mamam now, and tht after helping ashi, he wld nvr b able to help ne1else..

"aah>> mamam!!kahaan thi.. accha suno, mujhe jaana hoga, yeh hai uv, tum mili ho na issey... yeh meri friend ka beta hai"

"heyy" moving a hand forward"am uv, uvraj dev"

"so??!?@?#!?$" ashi with her confused smile

Edited by elizaa - 13 years ago

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Akankshaa.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Awesome part, Elizaa! 🤗 See, I told you you can write! 😃

Okay..I am continuing the story in the next post. 😊

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