(Shiv-Gauri): The Oldest Story... - 2 - Page 27

Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by -pixie-


My poor baby....Don Juan DeMarco....

Great update, Devi. I shall be patient for Don Juan DeMarco to clear the air...I have full faith in him...I am sure all is not as it seems ๐Ÿ˜†

Note to Real Hubby: If you are reading this do not pull such a stunt..you will be dead in 5 seconds flat!


Don't tell me that your hubby reads this!!  
Posted: 13 years ago
Devi: Would you rather I answer Yes or No? ๐Ÿ˜‰

LOL! Dont worry that threat was more rhetorical than real...He knows nothing about my obsession with FFs or this forum for that matter๐Ÿ˜†
Posted: 13 years ago
You know Devi, I have almost as much fun reading comments from other readers as I do reading your updates๐Ÿ˜Š

In addition to giving life to your characters you also seem to bring out something in us that makes for a witty and interesting after conversation! 

I sincerely hope you plan on writing FF's for the rest of your life!!  


Posted: 13 years ago
Okay, so I came home and re-read it.  A couple of times!๐Ÿ˜ณ

#1  Man, can you tell a story!
#2 She let go the fact that Shashank stood her up but if Shiv did that.... Hm.  Speaks volumes
#3 She sees the 'real' Shashank - and he belongs to someone else.  ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
#4 Why would Shashank agree to help her?  Does he know that she knows his heart is with Thalia?  Or will revenge be on his mind too?๐Ÿ˜ก
#5 Shiv must have done something really bad, or Gauri wouldn't be so mad.
#6 Ooooh, did someone punch someone?  Did he?  Did he? <wrings her hands...>
#7 Is it just me that thinks Gauri's reaction/revenge will be what Devi's reaction would be if she were in the same situation? Niki?  Pixie?  Whaddya think?  Autobiographical?   Hmmm?๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜†
#8 How am I going to get anything done around here if I have S/G and S/T on my mind?
#9 Was there a punch?  Come on Devi, I gotta know!  I won't tell anyone else!  Promise...
#10  Man, can you tell a story!



ps - no offense intended on #7!

@ pixie - ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ

@ niki - I agree - she needs to do this full time!
Edited by saomom - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
O...M....G......NO WAY!
oh god... poor shiv!! please continue SOON!
Posted: 13 years ago
WHAT! thalia kissed shiv
and shashank and gauri fuming
gauring' going to use Shashank
oh no i hope her plan doesnt back fire
Posted: 13 years ago
Giving an evil lunatic-like smile, tapping fingers Prem Chopra style and waiting for the next update๐Ÿ˜ˆ
Posted: 13 years ago
grilling is on .........do i say poor men?
Posted: 13 years ago
lol...gauri, the she devil....hehe, does thalia know how tough her task is going to be?
btw, the woman has guts...;)
Posted: 13 years ago
that was awesome update.....Want more.....
you just can't stop there....devi 
want more *throwing tantrums now*

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