~*~Dream Girl~ *~AVINA FF#2~*~Thread:1 ~*~ Thanks* - Page 58

wow di coool
so much enjoying..
so Dev said it..
Coool what an update thanks..
Your writing tallent is... mmmmm...
I have no wards di...perfect superb fantastic don't know what to tell
Really enjoying
Thanks di give us such a wonderful story
👍🏼
Anu

loved rads frustration to devs naughty play...so she didnt liked the saree color or was it for darkness she couldnt makeout the color...good night kiss now moved on to cheek😳😉

Hi  Devika

For once I am speechless😊....I like that feeling, actually..

You did great--there was lot of anticipation for this update---from where you ended previously...and you lived up to all my ( and I am sure of others, as well) expectations.....

Really liked Dev's personality and his mischievousness with Radhika.. and like the fact that Radhika has spunk and displays anger when disappointed ( a very human trait)...loved the cute interactions and the subtle romance between Dev and Radhika......you really have stayed true to the characters of Dev and Radhika--how slowly but surely Radhika is opening up to Dev and unknowingly his words and praises have started becoming more meaningful to her...

Liked how you brought a reference to Vrindavan and Krishna's Radha--made me nostalgic for CB1....

The rasam of using mustard seeds to "ward off the evil" is something I grew up with in my culture...we still do it for kids just so that "kisi ki nazar na lage"...

Love your "Suchi"...I wish all mom's are like that😊...and for once Lechu was sleeping and left Dev and Radhika alone....

Please keep updating soon---and stay true to your imagination...I am sure the story will surely but gradually unfold for all of us..

Devika I am liking this slow romance which is very realistic and also Radhika how she is opening up and becoming dependent on Devs compliments and very disappointed leading to anger when he seems to ignore her or not fully compliment her😉😃 the dance and the next scene is very good now will Radhika wear the saree for Dev before he leaves for USA.
Another point which crossed my mind since they r engaged and when Radhika goes to college no one commented on the ring in her engagement finger.😊

Well I dont know about others but I always look forward to ur PMs and updates once or twice in a day the more u write the more I love to read👍🏼.

nice update...thx for the pm

Devika, i have no words to express   ... awesome update.....liked it😊 ...

Devika..I really liked this update..I liked Radhika's frustration and Dev's gift and everything...

I am waiting for ur next update :)

Hi Devika,

Originally posted by: chalhov

Devika

 

Another point which crossed my mind since they r engaged and when Radhika goes to college no one commented on the ring in her engagement finger.😊