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Posted: 13 years ago
right y cant geet not understand maan!! yaar
very interesting part u passig woaaawww!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Omg wow
Loving the update
awesome
amazing
continue soon
thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...

ab ye yash sala aisi taisi maray ga scene ki ...  arrrghgh


continue super soon ... cant wait

love

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Posted: 13 years ago

Part-19

 

In the cafetaria Yash is wating for Geet'. Suddenly his phone rings'. He picked it up

Yash: hey champ' baad main baat karunga'

Maan: Kyun abhi aisa kya kar reha hain tu

Yash: tujhe pata hain abhi mujhse milney kun aa reha hain I mean a rahi hain'

Maan: Kaun?

Yash: Hey yaar Geet'..

Maan: par kyun tu usey kyun mil reha hain..

Yash: champ tu bhi naa agar main usey milunga julunga nahi tho pyaar ki suuruaat kaise hoogi'.

Maan: what Pyaar'

Yash: Haan yaar mujhe pata hain Geet tere type ki nahi hain isliye tujhe thoda ajeeb lag reha hoga naa ki main ussey pyaar kaisey kar sakta hun par yaar vo ek dum mere type kii hain'

Maan is very much jelous & tensed now' Maan tu kahan hain 

Yash: Vo Geet key ghar key paas jo resturent hain naa vahi'

Maan: ok' accha mujhe tujhko ek tip dena tha'

Yash: tip Geet ko impress karney key liye'

Maan: Haan

Yash: Haan bol na bol'..

Maan: Vo actually tu uskey samney mera Naam mat liyo nahi tho tumhaari puri mulakat bekaar ho jaayeigi' Vo kya hain naa vo mujhsey nafrat karti hain'.. I mean mere naam sey nafrat karti hain

Yash: haan haan main samajh gaya' chal tu rakh vo aa gayi hain aur tujhe pata hain vo kitni khoobsoorat lag rahi hain'

Maan feel jelous.. theek hain theek hain tu usko dekhna band kar aur mere baath koo yaad rakhnaa' and Maan chuck the phone'

Yash: isey kya hoo gaya'. Aur yea champ bhi naa pagal hain itni khoobsoorat cheez samney hoo tho nazar tho apney aap hii uski taraf kichti hain naa'

Geet: come to him

Yash: is just starring her'

Geet hii yash '..

Yash: hey geet u are looking gorgeous'

Geet thanks'..

Yash : have ur seat'.

Geet: thanks'.

Geet: so why did u call me '..

Yash: actually Geet I have to say u something I know it is very okward to you' but I want u to tell u about my feeling for u'

Geet: can u explain it more clearly'

Yash: I know what u had gone through in ur childhood even on ur birthday'.. I really understands u'..

Geet: what are u talking about'

Yash: I know everything about u but then even I want to tell u that'that'..

Geet: what'.

Yash: actually I like u'' and will u be my girlfriend'..

Geet: what..? are u gone mad.. we don't know each other and how can u think about all that'

Yash: I told u naa I know everthing about u.. how ur heart is broken in school and every thing about u'

Geet: but how do u know about me' all this'

Yash: in a casual tone Champ told me everything actually we are school friends'

Geet is now very much furious'' How could he do this'. I will not leave that looser'

Yash: Geet please cool down actually he told me to not take his name

Geet: what he told u not take his name in all that'' after making my life a mess.

Yash: Geet forget about him u answer me what u think about us'..

Geet: I hate u actually all the men in the world u all are same u never think about others feeling'. And just think about yourself''

In the cafateria all are looking at them''

Yash: Geet thoda Dheere'' sab loog yaahin dekh rehe hain'..

Geet: Dekhney do mujhe kisi sey koi phark nahi padta' she shouts at the public over there kya khabi kisi ko ladtey nahi deka jo sabhi yaahaan dekh rehe hain' yaahaan koi langar (charity) nahi bat reha jo sab yahin dekh rehe ho' jis kaam key liye aaye ho vo karo aur jaaoo'

Yash: Geet what are u doing why are u creating a scean over here'..

Geet: I am creating scean u have already created the scean'. And she left from there'..

Yash: calls her but she din't listen to him'

Yash to himself: by god bilkul sahi naam rakha hain iska Hitler''

 

Outside the cafeteria Geet sits in her car she is still in a very bad mood'.. she drive it to the Khurana Menssion'..

Geet get inside and shouts hey losser where are u'

Looser where are u come here'.. I wnat to talk to u..

Maan was in his room and he heard her voice''. Geet yahan' ab kya hoo gaya isko.. Yea to Yash sey milney gayi thi naa'.. yahan kya kar rahi hain'

 

Maan came downstairs' Geet u are here mr. Looser'.

Maan: what happened now what I did'.

Geet: u always do this first u make the mistake actually not mistake u do blunders  then very conveniently u asked what u did.. main batatati hun tumney kya kiya' tumhaari himmat kaisey hui us khargoosh (rabbit) ko mere bare main bataney ki' tumney mera majaak bana key rakha hua hain'

Maan: whom u talking about and what I said to whom'..

Geet: tum jab aisey bina sar paar key question puchte hoo naa to by god bol rahi hun mujhe tumhari jaan lene kaa jee karta hain'.

Maan: Geet bhaut hoo gaya ab tum saaf saaf bataoogi main kya kiya hain'.. aur mainey tumhaare baarey main kisi ko kuch nahi baathaya hain

Geet: hain thbi tho use khargoosh ko mere baarey main sab pata hain'.

Maan: kaun kaun khargoosh'.

Geet: tumhaara vo dost Yash'.

Maan: oh tum yash kii baath kar rahi ho..

Geet: nahi main shaharuk kii baath kar rahi thi itney dare sey u looser''. Haan main usi ki baat kar rahi hun' usko mere bachpan key baarey main sab kaisey pata'

Maan: vo isliye kyunki vo mera school friend hain tho usko tho pata hi hooga na mainey and he stop '.. I mean '

Geet: I know what u mean agar vo tumhaara school kaa friend hain tho ussey mera kya lena dena tumney usko mere baarey main kyun baataaya'' Main us din hoosh main nahi thi aur main tumko usdin joo bhi bataya tum us idiot ko bata kar aa gaye'..

Maan: nahi vo actually' ab main tumko kaisey bataaun ' he mummers

Geet: Main jab bhi soochti hun kii tum bure nahi hoo jab bhi main tuhaarey baarey main achha sochti haun tum thabi kuch naa kuch aisa kardete hoo  main tum sey aur bhi nafrat karney lagti hun'

Maan: Geet tum mujhe galat samajh rahi hoo'..

Geet: achaa aisa hain tho agar jab tum sahi hoo tho tumney us khargoosh ko apna naam lenye key liye kun mana kiya tha'

Maan: Geet main tumhaarey in sabhi sawaalon kaa javab dena chatha hun par tum mujhko phir galat samjoogi' is liye mujhe tumko kuch nahi batana'.

Geet:  aaye loo jab tum galat ho tho usmey samajh ney kii kyaa baath hain'

Geet: main tumko warn kar rahi hun agar tuney mere barey main kisi koo khuch bhi kaha naa tho dekhlena mujhsey bura koi nahi hoga'

Maan: Tumsey bura koi aur hain bhi nahi'

Geet is about to hit him but her foot slips she going to fall but Maan catches her again' Maan and Geet have an eylock her curls are over her face Maan puts them behind her ears' he is starring her with very passionate look and about to kiss her but Geet shouts hey what are u doing and Maan snaps back  Geet satnds up ' in the rash her bracelet fence onto the Maan's T-shirt''

Geet: tum yea kya karney kii koshish kar rahe they '..

Maan: vahi jo tum caahati ho'..

Geet: what do u mean..

Maan: haan tum hamesa mere saamney girti rehtio ho taki main tumko bachaaun (save) aur tum mere paas aa sako'

Geet: Main jaan boojhkar nahi girti hun' Yea sab tum apney us parkati key saath hi karo mere saath agar karney kii koshish bhi kari naa tho dekhleena'.

Maan: Kya dikhaaogi' with a teasing tone'.

Geet: Chi chi tum kitney gandey ho she puts her hands on her ears'..yea sab adult baatein aur harkaatein apni us par karti key saat karna'.. and she leaves from there'

Maan is standing over there and smiling on her innocence' tumhaari yahi baatein tho mujhko tumhaare aur paas le aati hain'

Maan then remembers what he said to yash Khargoosh'. Yash  aur Khargoosh and he laughs' vaise bhaut sute karta hain usko'  sachii main pagal hain' yea ladki' actually Jhansi ki rani hain' jab dekho marney maarney par tuli rehti hain' and he smiles'

Maan aaj tho bach gaya nahi tho aaj tho is Hitler ko sab pata chal jaata'. Par yaar batana tho paedey gaa agar usko kisi aur sey pata chall tho phir tho mera koi chance nahi hain'.

Khuch to karna padega' jab bhi soochtaa hun kii usko bata dunga kuch naa kuch aisa hoo hi jaata hain ki'. Main usko bata hii nahi paata'

Maan: kuch naa kuch to karna padega' isko impress kaise karun yea tho sab ladkiyon sey alag hain agar iski jagah Sam hoti tho main usko chutki main mana leta'. Par yea tho Hitler hain' par Maan kuch naa kuch tho karna padega'

 

In the shopping Mall Heer and Prem are shopping for their wedding'

Heer is looking for her bridle dress'' but she is in confusion which one she should buy or not'

Prem: comeon baby how much time will u take before three hours you had not decided which one u should buy''

Heer: hey this is Heer malhotra's wedding so I want every thing perfect'.. so baby it will take time..

Prem: but how much more time'

Suddenly Prem's phone rings'' its Maan on the phone'

Prem: Hey champ thankgod u called  I hav been bored'.

Maan: why bro u are with bhabi naa'

Prem: Haan yaar tabhi tho'.. tujhe pata hain pechle 3 ghhante sey vo apni saadi ki dress finilize kar rahi hain''

Maan: smiles' tho theek tho hain naa bro Shaadi zindagi main ek baar hoti hain'

Prem: tu aur Heer naa ek dum ek jaiseye ho'

Maan: Bhabi key baarey main kuch nahi bolna'

Prem: haan haan bhabhi key dever and he cuts the phone'.

As Prem turns around Heer is standing behind him' with an angry look'.

Prem: Nahi baby vo tho main bas'

Heer: kya tum mujhsey bore ho gaye ho'

Prem: Nahi vo actually tum itna time ley rahi thi naa main tho bas Champ ko bata reha tha kii tumhaari choice kitni aachi hain'..

Heer: Maine sab sun liya hain'

Prem: Nahi baby tum galat samajh rahi hoo'.

Heer: haan ab tho main hii galat hongi'

Prem: nahi mera matlab hain'. Ki main galt hun aur tum theek hoo ..

Heer: iska matlab tum mujhsey bore ho gaye ho'.

Perm: mummers hey bagwan main kahan phas gaya ke tharaf kuaan hain tho dusri tharaf khaai' haan bolunga thabi yea naaraz hogi aur naa bolunga thabh bhi yea naraaz hogi'.

Suddenly the a salesgirls come to them and  said:

Salesgirl: excuse me Maa'am we have an outfit whaich u do really like'.

Prem: really  lets see'

Heer: forget and excited to see the outfit'.

Heer goes from there with the salesgirl '.

Prem aaj tho main bach gaya'.. thank God bhagwaan aaj apney bach liya'

 

In the Malhotra menssion

 

Geet is very angry''

Main chodungi nahi usko kya samjhta hain vo apney aap ko'.

Ramukaka listen her'voice and came up to her'..

Ramukaka: beta kya hua.. tum itna chilla kyun rahi hoo'

Geet: us bandar ko main chodungi nahi'

Kaka: kiski baath kar rahi hoo aur kya kiya hain vo bandar joo bhi hain

Geet: apko pata hain usney kya kiya hain''

Kaka: vahi tho puch reha hun kya kiya usney'

Geet: kaka apko  pata hain us Bandar nye us khargoosh ko mere bare maein sab bata diya'. Aur vo khargoosh mujhe aisey propose kar reha tha jaise mujhpar aahsaan kar reha ho'

Kaka: tum kiski baath kar rahi hoo mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa reha'

Geet: aur phir vo bandar mujhse kaka mujhse kehta hain kii main uskey samney jaanbooj kar girtii hun' nahi chodungi main usko'

Kaka: leaves from there mujhkp tho kuch samajh main nahi aa reha tum kiski baath kar rahi hoo' tum aur tumhaara gussa iin dono kaa main kuch nahi kar sakta'

Geet saw him leaving from there''

Geet: kaka ruko naa meri baath tho suno'.

Kaka: mujhko tumhaari baath nahi sunni mujhko kuch samajh nahi aa reha  agar main tumhaarey saath kuch aaur dare reha nahi tho main pagal hoo jaunga' and he leaves'.

Geet: main nahi chudungi'' u looser''

 

In the hall Heer & prem are there they saw kaka coming from Geet's room and mummering'

Heer: kaka kya hua'

Kaka: beta mujhe lagta hain geet ki tabiyat kharab hain vo naa bhut aajeeb sii baathen kar rahi hain'.

Heer: kya bol rehe hain aap'.

Kaka; maio sahi bol reha hun' bhut aajeeb sii baaten kar rehi hain vo kargoosh aur Bandar ki'

Heer: haaan kargoosh aur Bandar ki'' kya matlab'..

Kaka: matlab tho mujhkoo bhi samaj main nahi aa reha'..

 

Heer and Prem looks to each other and ran towards Geet's room

Heer: ab pata nahi yea kya karney waali hain'

 

Geet is in her room and her room is in complete mess'..

Heer & Pream are shocked to saw the room in that condition'.

Heer: chutki tuney apney room ki kya halt bana rakhi hain''

Prem: Geet tum yea chodo tum itney gussey main kyun ho'.

Geet: di ap hi us Bandar ko bhaut aacha bolti thi naa'. Aur apko parta hain us Bandar ney kya kiya hain'

Prem & Heer: Bandar and looked at each other?

Geet: Haan Bandar'.. vo Bandar hii hain pata hain us losser bander ney kya kiya'

Heer: oh' u mean champ'.

Heer: in a casual tone yea chap kii baath kar rahi hain' chalo chodo indono kaa tho yea rooz kaa natak ho gaya hain'

Perm: par yea dono tho friends ban gaye they naa..

Geet: vo Bandar aur mera friend' meri juti bhi ussey friendship nahi karegi'.

Heer: main tho dar gayi thi' jab ramukaka ney mujhe tumhaarey bare main bataya'

Perm hann main bhi'..

Heer: don't worry par yaanha tho sab kuch normal hain'' jab tak yea dono ladtey nahi hain naa indono kaa khana hazam nahi hota'..

Pareshaani ki baat tho tab hoti jab yea dono nahi ladtey'.

Prem: tries to ask him what happened'' but heer drags him and said leave her' sab normal chalo yahaan sey'

Perm: Par Heer ussey puch tho kya hua hain''

Geet: is behind with a wide mouth open' di main nahi ladti hamesha vo Bandar hii shuru karta hain' par is baar tho main usko nahi chudungi'' ab main usko aisa sabak sikhaaungi kii vo zindagi bhar yaad rakhega'' ki usney Geet malhotra sey panga lekar accha nahi kiya'

 

On the Same Niight in Khurana's Menssion'

Maan is in his room he is on the phone with sameera''

Maan: Soory Sam par main nahi aa sakta' tumhaare birthday par

Sameera: Please MK hummaari friendship key liye' mujhe pata hain tum mujhsey naaraz ho mainey jo bhi Geet key birthday main kiya tha' but I am really very sorry' Please  MK Mera birthday par tum mujhko itna sa gift bhi nahi dey sakte'

Maan: Ok Sam par main sirf thodi dare ki liye hi aaunga''

Sameera: ok fine tum thodi dare key kiye hii aa jana' Par please u do come'

Maan: Ok' Bye'

Sameera: bye'.

 

Maan puts the phone down  he is changing his cloths but as he take off his shirt the Geet's bracelet which fence on his shirt is falls down he notice it and pick it up'

Maan: yea kiska hain'

Then he remember how Geet is going to fall and he catches her and about to kiss her but Geet shouts..

Maan: yea in that Rash I think it was stucked on my T-shirt' 

He is just starring that bracelet and remembering all Maneet moments and Kiss that Bracelet'

Maan: usko tho kiss nahi kar paya par uska bracelet he sahi and he smiles''

 

Next morning as usual Geet wakes us early Mr. malhotra, Mr. Khurana & Geet went for a jog'

They came home have their breakfast and Mr. malhotra Leaves for the office'

 

Geet is alone in the hall and thinking somting'

Mrs. Malhotra: comes to her'. Chutki do u have ur milk'.

Geet: Maa no milk please' I am  thinking of something importrant'

Mrs. Mlhotra: what are u thinking of'..

Geet: maa I have to teach that Bandar a lesson'.

Mrs. Malhotra: who Bandar

Geet: then she realize what she said'. No body mom' and she leaves from there'.

Mrs. Malhotra: yea kya Bandar Bandar kar rahi hain'.

Ramukaka comes to her and said..

Kaka: yea kal sey aisii hii bateen kar rahi thii aaj tho sirf Bandar kaha rahi hain par kal tho kargoosh bhi kaha rahi thi'..

Mrs. Malhotra: Khargoosh ab yea khargoosh kaun hain'

Rauklaka: vo hii tho mujhe bhi samaj main nahi aa reha hain'

Heer comes there'

Hey Maa Ramukaka whats going on'..

Mrs. Malhotra: heer tumko pata hain chutki kal sey bhut aajeeb behave kar rahi hain

Heer: kya Maa raumukaka ney bataya hain hain'. Kal main bhi dar gayi thi jab ramukaka ney mujhe bataaya tha  par jab main uskey paas gayi tho sab kuch normal tha'.

Ramukaka: beta normal kahan hain'' Vo ajeeb seii baaten kar rahi thi Bandar aur Khargoosh key barey main''

Heer: laughs'.. oh vo '' Vo Bandar aur koi nahi Champ hain'

Mrs. Malhotra: what Maan'.

Heer: Haan un dono ki phir sey ladaayi ho gayi hain''

Ramukaka: aur khargoosh kun hain'..

Heer: kargoosh vo tho mujhe bhi nahi pata'.. Ho gaa koi khargoosh'. And all of them laughs'.

Geet in her room finding Yash no. in her phone'..

Yaar yea khargoosh kaa number kahan gaya' kal hi tho usney mujhe phone kiya tha.. shit yaar mainey kal us khargoosh kaa number save bhi nahi kiya tha'

Then he suddenly saw a number yea hi hooga pakaa chal try karti hun'..

Geet call on that no..

Geet: Heloo Yash'

Yash: geet tum'' tumney mujhey kaisey yaad kiyaa'..

Geet: vo actually mujhe tumse kuch kaam tha' kahi mile kya'

Yash: Geet I love to but abhi naa mujhe Sameera ki birthday party main jaana hain'.

Geet: Kya aaj us parkati ka birthday hain'

Yash: par kati kaun'

Geet: oooh I mean Sameera vo kya hain naa main usey pyaar sey par kati kheti hun'

Yash to himself: iska pyaar bhi kuch ajeeb nahi hain'..

Geet: tuney kuch keha kya'..

Yash nahi' tho hum kal mile kya'. Geet ok ' no problem ' par Kargoo and she stops yash uski birthday party hain kahan'. Vo Tantra night club main'

Geet: ok thanks'' and she cuts the phone'

Agar us par kati kaa birthday hain tho vo Bandar bhi vahan jaroor jayega''

Yea accha muka hain'''aaj Geet Malhotra karegi Ek teer sey do Shikaar and he laughs'. Ha ha ha'..  Mr. Bandar & Miss par kati main aa rahi hun'' ha ha ha'.. and she smiles ab aayega mazaa'..

 

On the other side Yash thinks agar yea Sameera ko Pyaar sey Parkati bulati hain tho mujhko kya bolti hoogi Pyaar sey'.. hey bhagwaan mujhe issey bacha loo'' champ theek bolta tha Pyaar aur issey'


Edited by geeta.muskan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing ff...wow wat a fiercy fight they hv bw them ...............

so now maan knows the truth but not geet................

ab yeh yash stupid ka pyaar ka bhott toh nikal gaya....................

very tensed yaar............can u pm me for future updates thnks
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Posted: 13 years ago
I really laughed !!! when i read the geet calling yash khargoosh and sameera parkati.
i really loved the convo between yash and geet....
Nice update & thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome yaar ....loved it ..wat plan she s upto ?
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Posted: 13 years ago
U wat dats good one i can't stop laughing loved it...... Aacha hua yash khudi pichey hat gaya.
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it
 
hope nothing bad is going to happen to geet
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Posted: 13 years ago
Gr8 update....... loved it