Nov. 15th Episode Sulo/Savita's Reaction

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Posted: 14 years ago
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I'll keep this short.

Manav and Archu marry at Bapa's temple, he puts the sindoor and the pheras are taken on the same day.

Vandita/Ajit or Satish/Varsha cud be the witnesses (Varsha bec he helped her when she had no where to go).

After the short and quick wedding, Manav tells Archu to at least call home as they'll be worried sick about her. Sulo doesn't pick up. Archu/Manav show up for ashirwad (bad idea) and all hell comes breaking down on them.

Satish is there at Sulo's and when A and M show up, Sulo slaps Archu hard across the face.

She tells her you defamed the whole family, you didn't even tell me, I thought we were closer than mother/daughter, we were like sisters/friends, but you kept this secret, went and secretly got married and kept it from me. That day you said you were going to Bapa's Mandir, you lied, you took his name in vain, how cud you???? All this for Manav? This time you've gone too far.

Jaywant is standing there happy to see Archu's relationship with her Ayi get broken to bits. Then he acts all heroic and says I STILL want to marry Archu (so she can take that complaint back in 3 days) because "Yeh galati Manav ki hai, Archana ki nahin. Mein Archana se abh bhi pyar karta hu."

But of course he can't marry her anymore as she is Mrs. Manav Deshmukh now.

Sulo blames Manav and bahot jalli katti sunati hai Manav ko. He is accused of leading Archu astray, which is why Satish steps in and tells Sulo that Jay had plans for her daughter, plans that could ruin her for life, and that he wanted to pay off debts, and take over DSW etc...plans Satish heard himself with his own ears. Dharmesh is shocked, if he's still there, which he might be.

Satish says aapko mujhpe tou bharosa hai na, Ayi? Mein aapse jhoot kyun bolunga?

Sulo says that may be, but I cannot forgive Archu ever, take your clothes and go, you are not my daughter anymore. Archu is told to leave the house immediately.

Sulo gets an asthma attack and Archu runs to get her inhaler when Sulo takes it from her hand and throws it on the floor, tumharey aath se dava lenese achcha hai marjana...tuney mera vishwas toda, ja yahan sey!

Teary eyed A leaves with hubby.

A and M go to Manav's house. There he gets the 3rd degree from mommy, Damodar is ecstatic, Savita is having a mini-coronary looking at A standing at her doorstep.

She tells A that if she puts one step into the house, "Teri zindagi ka ek ek din, ek ek pal narak banadoongi mein, yaad rakhna!"

Manav steps in and tells Sav to back the heck off as Archana is now the bahu of the house and will be respected as such. He leads her to her rightful place, their bedroom. No more sleeping on the floor for either.

Sav says "Meri nazar mein yeh meri bahu nahin, meri bahu woh thi, jisko tu mandap pe chhod ke bhaag nikla"...Manav says Shravni told him she couldn't marry him, so he left. Bahane mat bana, Manav. yeh sab is Archana ki chal hai.

Shravni challi gai! (tears) Mere chhote Sachu ko le gai, woh tera bhi to koi lagta haina Manav...yeh tuney kya kiya!

Archana mein tujhe chhodoongi nahin...

Then Manav tells her, Ayi, tuney agar Archana ko haath bhi lagaya, uske mathe ka ek baal bhi baka kiya, tou mein aur Archana yeh ghar chod denge, aur yaad rakh, kamane wala yahan sirf ek hai. Tu apne daire mey re, meri Archana ko kuch accha nahin bolsakti, ko kuch mat bol, itni tou insaaniyat tou hai meri Ayi mein.

Damodar says dekha Manav, teri kahani mein bhi Bapa ne twist daal hi diya!

Archu tries to call her Ayi, who cuts off the call. She calls Varsha, who talks to her and tells her to give Ayi some cooling off time. Even Archu's dad doesn't talk to her.

Satish talks to Dharmesh and tells him about the plans he heard Jay make, Dharmesh says he doesn't believe him. "Tum bhi us Manav ke bhekave mey aa gaye Satish?" Later Satish will bring Dhamu proof that cash is being pilfered with J's sig on those checks.

Later we find that A and M are walking home one night and M feels like someone is following them...its windy and the trees are making it hard to see.

But they make it safely home...this time. Then they make sure that neither will stay out late or go anywhere without a cell for protection...each gets a cell phone, they know Jay is after them, now that he's a mortal enemy...

God, we've waited a long time to see these 2 get hitched!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow brilliant one!!!!!👏👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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gr8 work ....👍🏼
Bapa ne twist daal hi diya!🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I love it esp the bedroom thing😳😳😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Well done ARCHANAFAN! I wish the CVs would listen to good ideas and take up your wonderfully creative ideas. If only they would have realized how much potential there is in getting ArMan married and have their respective relatives estranged and angry with them to the point of changing the dynamics of the characters in a very significant way. Now it's time for the moms to roar and rebuke their errant offspring. This time however I hope to see a stronger and united Manav and Archana who won't stand by while the moms turn into living breathing dragons.

Also the idea that they face scrutiny inside the house from the moms and danger outside from Jaywant the bottom dweller is just full of opportunities and is a great idea ArchanaFan. This time they have allies like Varsha and Satish and Ajit and Vandu. Of course the couple will have to live with Manav's parents. And when Manav goes to work Archana will be at his mom's mercy.


All hell will break lose. It should be a no holds barred conflict between the 2 women Manav most cares about. When it comes to his Ayi and Archana who will he side with will he man up and stick up for his wife or will he just stand there like a lemon? Also Sav Ayi has just lost her little Sachu for which she will not spare the rod and will punish both newly weds any chance she gets.


Good writing always involves good conflict and we might get to see that with the tables reversed with Archana's mom and Manav. Sulo Ayi will cut ties with Archana for her lies, her elopement with Manav who her mom has come to hate with a vengeance. He said he would not let Archana marry Jaywant so Sulo will definitely blame him for the whole wedding fiasco.


It remains to be seen what will happen to Shravni's character. Will she stay in the same house with the newly weds so Sachu can stay close to his grandma or will the writers remove her character on a good note.


BTW I couldn't understand why she would let Manav go after 2 years of uncertainty. All the fights she had with Manav and Archana. Her eagerness to get Archana out of Manav's life. What happened to her insane jealously towards the couple? As a viewer it doesn't make any sense to me. Also where is Girish in all of this? He too waited for 2 years for Shravni to finally marry Manav only to have him marry his ex-wife instead.


In all this domestic conflict we still have Prakash who hates the couple. And the biggest villain of them all Jaywant who has a score to settle with both Manav and Ajit for almost sending him to jail and derailing his plans to use Archana and hurt her reputation. I would love to see these 2 alpha males go at it. Then there is Manju who too hates the couple she could prove a worthy ally to Jaywant though that seems unlikely she is more likely to stoke the fires of misunderstanding and hate against the couple at home now that everyone hates Archana and Manav.


The elopement episode was rushed and poorly directed and seemed very last minute. I hope the marriage and upcoming episodes with the family squabbles and the feud with Jaywant will done in a more artful and believable way. Great post ArchanaFan keep those good ideas coming.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Wow
we definitely want to see this
but all this takes a long long time

well written
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lol love how u said she is now mrs. manav deshmuk great
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Posted: 14 years ago
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SUPERB Archanafan !! for once I thought that u had written the update of today's episode as I had missed that... but at the ending part of ur story made me realise that it was ur own creations...
MAN !! U r too good ..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ahhhh! such wonderful news!!! it's like music to my ears!!! thanks a billion!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks to all of you for the poz comments!

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