Chronicles of an Escapist! #1(MN) ||Completed|| - Page 4

Originally posted by: fariaa70

hey Fatima
haye mar jawa- awesome update re
totally rocking
the way u describe the whole thing- it was just amazing

u r a superb writer
loved ur update a lot

Heya thanks fari,

glad you liked that nature's description...guess it was too much......
but still thanks !!

keep reading :)

-Fatima

Originally posted by: .Divya.

If this is going to be the result of studying excessively, I suggest you should do more studying.. ans we'll get more to read...

 

very nicely written.

Oooo....gosh nooo
I've been studying pathetic since the past few days.....it's terrible and I ended up writing this 😭

btw thanx di...for reading it and liking it....

Originally posted by: ARMAANKSGFAN

hiii yaar

mindblowing

2 good

cant wait 4 more

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

Thnx a lot dear !!
glad you liked it :)

Originally posted by: -shabnoor-

Thnx a lot dear !!
glad you liked it :)




thank you :)

-Fatima
Edited by -shabnoor- - 13 years ago

It's like i was so lost that i nearly forgot that it was going to end.......it was nevertheless beautiful.......extremely beautiful.....there was lots of calmness and serenity stored in there.,..proud that you r MY friend....keep writing more and more....and do scrap me sometimes....

love,
Mahak

Shab,

wow u hav written vry well...

Originally posted by: bhoomikauttam

Hi Fatima,

read the post 1 very beautifully mentioned a ray of things.. nature our emotions and how calmness and the other way around be showing reality.. i liked how u mentioned her face..the way many meotions and yet difficulto tknow the true meanign what she is feeling.. i liked htis bit of post.. short and so deeply told many emotions..:)
tc
Bhoomi

Hey Bhoomi di,

Glad you read and took time out to comment too..means a lot.

Actually this post was conceived just out of the blue I was studying for my upcoming exam and I was so damn lost and feeling like running away, the exam pressure and all I started to lose hope and then suddenly it started raining...and my thoughts drifted there and then my inner self spoke to me...this post was sort of a conversation of me and my inner self....

Yeah too many emotions, guess I was surging through all of them and I din know what was actually taking place...

glad you liked this vignette and I guess this is the first time I've not written something vague.

tc
Fatima
Edited by -shabnoor- - 13 years ago

Originally posted by: bhoomikauttam

HI fatima,
read the post 2.. this one is very nicely written.. i can so very well relate to Nupur.. i mean i could feel her heart pai.. how it feels as u mentioned things so nicely.how she is not jealous of her sis but how she is made to feel the way her partenst aunts make to beliuve her.. the last lines were cutely written as if a small rhyme makign her to swing and know life is like that take it ... nice one dear..tc
Bhoomi

U surely r doign a great job.. never try to know whats wrong.. work on ur strogn points dear.. negative will fade away automatically..lol..

Heya Bhoomi di,

Thanks again for reading this one too....and I'm touched that people are able to feel Nupur's pain. Yeah its true ain't it ? we do love people who end up hurting us coz they mean a lot to us ...yeah we do, and if they are our family members then it affects more I get...I just tried to bring that out though in a different manner....

It's not just about Nupur but about all those kids who feel trapped and they are depressed..n then turn to suicides n all...I guess being like Nupur is better than committing suicide coz you end a beautiful life...

I dunno how many of them have understood this aspect I tried to highlight.

Glad you liked the last lines....they mean a lot to me :)

And also very glad to know I'm doing a good job and to be frank when I re-read my previous work I was like...I have actually improved...thanks for that suggestion of comparing my work with just my own and not someone else....
Thanks a lot for that advice :)

tc
Fatima
 
Edited by -shabnoor- - 13 years ago